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"...And suddenly the author was struck with the intense desire to go back and fix about 3/4ths of her pages."

In the process of drawing this, I realized how many errors I've made with the previous. Most notable: Lucas' shirt. I drew in the "Access 9" logo on the very first page he was in and never drew it again. WHAT IS THIS I AM A HORRIBLE PERSON. That shirt's, like, his dang trademark. Deeerp.

I also want to fix some lighting issues from the previous pages....Maybe tomorrow.
May's dad has an emo moment! May's mom re-enters! May's plants are dead? The main characters change clothes! What will happen next?!

(Oh yeah, they changed clothes because they're talking the next morning. In case that didn't get through, LOL.)

Oh, and "OMG!!" is officially a sound effect now. Just in case you were wondering. It's totally more interesting than the sound effect I originally had planned.

May is now wearing overalls. I think a certain someone's fashion sense is wearing off onto my characters. XD But in her original design, May actually wore overalls all the time. I guess this is a shout-out to back then? Maybe. >.>

And Lucas has the exact same shirt in various colors. Like a raiiiinbow.

New page on Friday hopefully! I'll be in an airport/on a plane pretty much all day, so yeah.

Oh, so does anyone have any speculations on where the story's going to go from here? I'd like to hear people's thoughts. I find them interesting.

Art, characters and story (c) Me.

EDIT 11/15- Fixed some errors in stage direction. :3

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"...And suddenly the author was struck with the intense desire to go back and fix about 3/4ths of her pages."

In the process of drawing this, I realized how many errors I've made with the previous. Most notable: Lucas' shirt. I drew in the "Access 9" logo on the very first page he was in and never drew it again. WHAT IS THIS I AM A HORRIBLE PERSON. That shirt's, like, his dang trademark. Deeerp.

I also want to fix some lighting issues from the previous pages....Maybe tomorrow.
May's dad has an emo moment! May's mom re-enters! May's plants are dead? The main characters change clothes! What will happen next?!

(Oh yeah, they changed clothes because they're talking the next morning. In case that didn't get through, LOL.)

Oh, and "OMG!!" is officially a sound effect now. Just in case you were wondering. It's totally more interesting than the sound effect I originally had planned.

May is now wearing overalls. I think a certain someone's fashion sense is wearing off onto my characters. XD But in her original design, May actually wore overalls all the time. I guess this is a shout-out to back then? Maybe. >.>

And Lucas has the exact same shirt in various colors. Like a raiiiinbow.

New page on Friday hopefully! I'll be in an airport/on a plane pretty much all day, so yeah.

Oh, so does anyone have any speculations on where the story's going to go from here? I'd like to hear people's thoughts. I find them interesting.

Art, characters and story (c) Me.

EDIT 11/15- Fixed some errors in stage direction. :3