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ChibiEdo — EdxRoy FullCircle ch01 p0018
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Story does not belong to me. Read Full Circle here . It's the most awesome EdxRoy fanfiction out there if not the most awesome fullmetal alchemist fanfic ever. Go READ!------------------------
the fifth page from today.. XD love that page.. cause auric is in pain muahaha XD I'm so evil..XD I can't draw blood O.o I had real problems with the coughing panel... like the almost last panel and alp looks cute on the last.. -^_^-
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Stupid Ed-or... Auric, I mean... or, well, he's acting Edish I think. Basically, he's acting happy he'll die. (rolls eyes) Who cares about legendry when you won't be around?!
Hmm... (notices comments/reviews about panel three) I think I like the last row more than that panel. (shrugs) I guess Auric's smile/smirk in panel three is nice, but I don't really see too much special about it. The dialogue's a little funny, I guess. (is that line his neck, by the way? Looks like it. I'd have put it farther away from his chin then that - I've noticed that Ed has a fat neck. - Was looking for anything I saw that could be wrong with it, after noticing a reply you made to a comment.)
(glances at page again) Yep. In my opinion, the last two panels are the best. ^_^
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well auric can be stupid sometimes.XD but gatekeepers just generally don't have that much problems with dying I guess..
hm I don't think the problem is the neck .. don't think it's fat XD well maybe it's a bit too long though.. it might be better if you would see a bit of the clothes on the right side...I think that the real problem has something to do with eyes or face in general though... I just don't like that panelXD
I love the bottom ones the most too^^
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funny that everyone likes panel three..there is just something I don't like with it but I can't put my finger on it..
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>D panel three owns. Auric looks so well..... gosh theres not a word to describe it XD I also like panel 6 too
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aw thank you^^ glad you like^^ auric pwns!
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wwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww
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Such a determined face in panel three- it's such a good picture! @_@ He looks almost like a cat right there.
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aw glad you like^^ I wasn't sure if that panel was good or not..
al also describes auric as a 'watchful cat' XD ("much like a certain general actually" XD)
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Whoa, I really can see the similarities o_o
How could you not be sure? That's the best panel I've seen so far!
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the similarities of what ? roy and auric ? they are really similar in some ways XD I don't think you have read this for example
“If that’s a hot shower, I’m coming with you.” Auric stood silhouetted in the doorway, leaning up against the door frame as he rubbed sleep-darkened eyes. The low light from Roy’s desk lamp behind him lit up the frizzy halo of sleep-mussed hair rather fetchingly, thought Riza in amazement, feeling a slow burn rise in her cheeks as her mind struggled to make the leap between the boy she remembered and the very attractive man standing before her. She tore her eyes away and looked over at her CO just in time to catch an odd look flit over his face before a more familiar mask slid over his features.
“Why Auric, I had no idea you were interested,” purred Roy. “I’m flattered, but don’t you think it’s a bit…forward, considering we haven’t even had a first date yet? And it might not be a good idea to…
It never came.
Instead Auric smiled, a slow, lazy smile that curled up the corners of his lips in an almost predatory manner. His eyes swept deliberately over the General’s figure as if taking an inventory of the man’s physique, lingering mockingly over areas that made Riza blush further, mortified. When he finally responded, it was in a husky baritone that made her toes curl. “Don’t worry, old man. I’ll take it easy on you. At least, initially. And if you still think you can handle me after that…” he let the sentence trail off suggestively.
Riza gaped as Auric sauntered slowly past her desk and out the door. She started at her CO, who was looking equally stunned. Then their gazes met, and she shook her head slowly. “Don’t worry, sir…this…um…never happened.” He nodded equally slowly.
well I don't know but I just don't like ed's face on that panel but I can't point out why..XD
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Heh, you already told me about that scene xD You must really like it xD It is really good.
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I forget who I tell what <.<< well it is one of my favs.. my absolute fav scene is more near the end though.. I wonder if I have already showed you that one as well.. ?XD
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Nope. But let me read! I don't want anything to be spoiled! xD
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Nine chapters read! 
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yes XD there are 36 after allXD
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