Jesus-Fishboy [2013-04-30 18:05:28 +0000 UTC]
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The colors seem fairly good for the piece. It could use some depth in the color of the coats to bring the dimension out. Don't be afraid to use some stringer highlights. The textures on the walls could also use a bit of work, they seem flat. As for the characters, do some figure drawing studies and then come back and fix this piece up. The shoulder an torso of mustang are off by quite a bit, and I'm not sure what's going on with his torso by his left hand. Get some stocks of legs and arms in natural position and practice drawing them. I don't mean like 3 or 4 times, I'm talking hardcore practice. around 30 or 40 different studies just to get the feel of some natural arm positions. a complete side not, It looks like the Fuhrer is using Lust's ultimate Spear. Maybe give him a sword to keep it a bit more canon.
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Chief-Thunder In reply to Jesus-Fishboy [2013-04-30 18:53:39 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the critique i appreciate it. to address your torso concerns, its supposed to be a fight sequence and I attempted to show mustang turning his upper torso and evade the attack. last time i checked the upper torso can move into the position depicted; it really surprised me that you could not see that but I will observe my own body movements better for my next piece, thanks.On the subject of canon, the piece is not canon and I deliberately "step out of the box" and chose to portray the fuhrer as the ultimate adversary capable of using all of the other homunculus abilities. I simply wanted to create my own thing.
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Herr-Crouch [2013-10-31 04:28:30 +0000 UTC]
He brings tha fire motha F***ers!
Amblerrone [2013-05-01 00:51:11 +0000 UTC]
That would be really awesome if he really did have all of their abilities! He would be indestructible!
Chief-Thunder In reply to Amblerrone [2013-05-01 02:45:39 +0000 UTC]
I would not go as far as indestructible but certainly "boss" like; then, mustang whoops his ass! :
Amblerrone In reply to Chief-Thunder [2013-05-01 13:30:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh?? Mustang would have those powers and not Bradley?
Chief-Thunder In reply to Amblerrone [2013-05-01 15:07:45 +0000 UTC]