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Nice fluffy branch! It looks like a fan. Or maybe you can use it as a tickle stick. 
A "spear frond", huh? That sounds promising.
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Yay! 
BUT KEEP IT AWAY FROM ME!!!
I'm terribly ticklish.
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Yes! Yes! And tell him you can't hold your breath long enough for him to get it, so you have to stay on the land! Keep going, li'l Loorin!
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He's a'tryin! I think I have only about five more pages on this!
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Oooh! Looks like Loorin's still got a couple tricks up his sleeve!
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Nope! Hasn't been gulped down yet.
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For some reason I imagine the Sprill's voice sounding like Gollom (Lord of The Rings) *shudders* and I imagine Loorin sounding like Dipper (Gravity Falls)
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I don't know who those are.
But if it's deep, kind of hissy and creepy, you got it!
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Oh man! This is so exciting! Keep it up Loorin. He'd have to use his whole body to dive to the bottom of the river... I hope. 
I'm loving this Chill! It's so good. You may want to approach a publisher with this one.
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Hopefully! That would be convenient for Loorin.
Aw! Thanks! I'd love to...but I think they are pretty expensive. And I don't know if it will be long enough.
I think I have around five pages left.
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This reminds me of red riding hood. 
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It was inspired by that story.
Yes! The Sprill really wants to be feared and that is his problem...
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Heheh. He really is eager. Loorin must've teach him a lesson. XD
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LOL!!
At this point I think it would just make him mad.
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HE'S GONNA DIE ANYWAY!!! GO FOR IT!!!
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Wonder if one of those Sprill can be killed with a spear frond.
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Hmmmmm. we'll have to find out, won't we?
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Yep. That thing looks a bit too big to do in with a spear.
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I love reading this and imagining the voices
Nice work as always~
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Awesome! I'm so glad you think so!
How do you picture the voices for these two?
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You're welcome!
Well, Loorin, I imagine his voice as very meek and sweet.
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Wow! Perfect description.
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Haha. I think I'm now getting more Riding Hood vibes from this. Except instead of "what big eyes, ears, teeth" etc, it's "bring me a branch, bring me a frond..."
Great job on the new page!
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LOL! Yep. Loorin's a smart cookie. He's got something up his sleeve.
Thank you! I think I'm actually going to be able to finish this story! I'm thinking, at max, I have five pages left!
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Can't wait to see what it is.
Yay! How many pages are in the sketchbook?
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82. But I think I might insert a few sketches I've made on other pieces of paper as well. The picture of Travis and baby Rover I glued in beside Jade.
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That's a good idea, to ha have more of your sketches together. Not risk losing them.
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