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By Janek Man
This is from a little while ago, just wanted peoples opinions on it. Im still not sure
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I've never really critiqued a models image before but I think it would be more appropriate to discuss the things that you as a model have control over other than lighting etc so while I find the centered portrait other than enjoyable and the lighting a bit distracting, these are not in your control, unless this is a self portrait, which I didn't gather.
I've always found hard lined make distracting and not very flattering on a face, maybe that stems from my old school theater training and I think I would like to see a darker hue of lips color on against your beautiful alabaster skin.
The head cant seems inquisitive yet the direct stare is a bit confrontational which in a way seems to confuse my poor male brain but isn't necessarily bad thing.
The hair is wonderful! I love the slicked back look to reveal your striking features which might be why I'm not as fond of the gelled light as it distracts from your beauty.
While this is not one of my favorite images of yours there t does have redeeming aspects and a lot that can be learned by it. Always remember that learning is more important than just doing. Keep up your stellar work.
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Hmmm a difficult on in one sense and easy in others.
Difficult as I'm not sure about the cropping of the image and I wish maybe the background was different.
However.. I think this could be one of your better fashion/glamour shots as you like very slick in it; a sort of Robert Palmer 'Addicted to Love' feel; semi androgynous.
So.. it's a great shot for you as it demonstrates your abilities well, maybe there's a better cropped one in that series?
Run with it though as it defo does you no harm! e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
Hope this was of some help xx
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Thanks Dylan, I see what you mean about it being slick.
Sadly I don't have any back from that shoot other than this one, holding out hope for another one or two.
I think I agree with the cropping though.
Thanks for taking the time to put your thoughts in, I appreciate it. Its not often I am "stuck" for thoughts! lol
Cxx
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I'm never really sure about coloured light on skin, but that's just a personal view/preference, seems to work here though except the bit of green on the nose, I find that a little distracting.
The landscape orientation makes it a little different but think that the central composition doesnβt totally nail end result, would have preferred more negative space to the left and without the top of your head cropped or brought in really tight, this seems a bit of a halfway house.
Composition of course often the big subjective quantity.
The make up gives it impact, its good, its vivid, I like it, well form my POV anyway, the lighting is well handled but lacks contrast a little, again really a personal view, two catch lights in the eyes, tut tut (personal niggle) and yes I have done it too but it still bugs me from a technical point of view.
The detail and sharpness is pretty impressive.
Itβs a very good portrait, itβs not outstanding nor is it poor by any means.
I think my final evaluation would be, if I had shot it, would I have it in my portfolio?
I believe I would.
I have tried to be as objective as I can, I hope I have been!
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Thank you Simon for your honesty
Means alot to me, Im sill not sure...
Its very different to my other headshots but then that doesnt mean its better.
Ach its a difficult world lol
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You're welcome.
I didn't really make any comparisons to previous work, you have a lot of very good headshots, this is probably on an equal standing in many respects, although it probably lacks some emotiveness (real word?) often seen in your work, I think the bottom line is your own perception, you are naturally creative and mostly know instantly whether you like something or not from your experience as a model and own photography, maybe that is actually the definitive factor, the answer you seek is very likely inside you and I believe that by asking for outside opinion you have answered your own question.
Make sense?
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Yes, I think it does.
Me personally, Im not all for it but..
What I like isnt what other people like so different tastes, and I know usually I just stick up what I like in my portfolio but thought I would ask an opinion on this. Its the second image I have ever had (the other being a robin frowley one) that I instantly dont know what to think, if it was on someone elses portfolio I guess I would like it, but then its not "my style" which I guess would possibly attract people who like that style more..
Hrm
xx
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I like it - lighting is good, I'd be interested to see more of his work, if you could provide a link?
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Thanks Binks, his website is - [link]
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a quick browse leads me to deduce that this image is the top end of his work
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Don't think im his usual "type".
I was actually looking forward to being plasticated
haha
Cx
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not actually sure what you mean
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haha I mean he does alot of skin smoothing usually on photoshop and I was kinda looking forward to seeing myself like that lol
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Alas, I am not Premium, I am cut-rate.
First stipulation: I see colours in my own unique manner. In other words, I do not see them in the manner defined 'Normal Colour Vision.' Specifically this means I do not see the touch of green others mention. That said:
Lighting, colours, and makeup combine to provide a vivid, almost surreal effect, with definite touches of 'glam-rock'. Pose, eye contact between model and viewer, and close framing add a very edgy in-your-face touch, particularly with the sharp focus. Rather hyper-real.
Demonstrates range in ability.
On a personal side, also stimulates a lot of 'background questions': Who is she, where is she, what is her Universe like?
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Sorry its taken me awhile to thank you for the comment. Not really been on deviant art much in the past few days.
I keep looking at the image and still cant decide if I like it or not.. Its crazy, never really felt like that about an image before.
Cxx
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I think this is great - I really love the contrast between the red and the green. I often think gels are a bit unnecessary, but they really make the shot here.
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Thank Tim, Janek uses gels alot. Was partly why I fancied working with him really, to get something a little more different for my portfolio. Still not sure though lol
Cx
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It's definitely eyecatching, which is one of the main criteria for a portfolio shot. If I'd taken it I'd definitely be showing it!
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Very vivid! I really like the green contrasting against your skin and the red in your hair. Great lips too!
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nah sorry, green just isnt right here for you i don't think.
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I'm not a fan of green myself actually.
But apparently it goes well with red
Thanks for the comment
Cx
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without sounding too cheesy - prefer you au naturale!! eveything else i've see has been brilliant!
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I love the sharpness and the vividity of the colours.
I just think it's terrific
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I have featured this in my latest journal here: [link]
(by the way)
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