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Chronolex — RP: Shade Velsurg

Published: 2011-02-19 15:09:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 849; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 74
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Description Another Edit: edited his height I think it's just the same OTL please tell me.... Thanks, =selfishgnome and *yami-izumi for the advice
Edit: Most choices is with undershirt 8D/ Thanks for the help, everyone
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Bad anatomy, bad coloring, bad-bad-bad-bad everything
Drawing.a.male.character.is.total.failed

Which do you think it's better, without undershirt (left) or with undershirt (right)? I will updated the most choices later on =w=b
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The same man with [link]
You also can see his little info there.

Shade Velsurg, in full body version. A dual sword wielder who focuses on melee physical damage---especially for speed and combo-chain. In addition, he capables to do magic but only in self-used, to support his physical ability in combat.

This character is also not easy to make but not as hard as Cyalle Faytear . I redesigned him for 3 times and this is his 4th design.

Here is the older version (3rd version) >>> [link]

I seriously need to draw male characters more QAQ

Comments and (especially) critiques are welcome 'A'b
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Shade Velsurg (c) ~Chronolex


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Comments: 84

Chronolex In reply to ??? [2011-11-11 13:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, what a coincidence XD

Thank you

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Looru [2011-02-22 06:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Nuuuu I don't think it's fail at all wut you talking about? >[
Mmmmm critics? Mmkai...two things I notice are his legs and neck. I think the legs are a bit too straight and the neck is kind of thin?
I fail at critiquing sorry orz

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Chronolex In reply to Looru [2011-02-22 09:57:23 +0000 UTC]

It did!

I rarely draw a male character so this is what happened OTL
Ah yes, the neck =___=;;

Darn, too much drawing female character

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Looru In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-23 03:11:54 +0000 UTC]

I used to have the same problem, I can draw gals but not dudes lolol
Just practice and you'll be super in no time

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Zue [2011-02-21 12:24:50 +0000 UTC]

*reads all comments*

ROFLROFL SEMUA PILIH VERSION #1 YA?

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Chronolex In reply to Zue [2011-02-21 12:37:13 +0000 UTC]

love them eh? *smacked*

Not really, some of them pilih version #2

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Zue In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 14:28:47 +0000 UTC]

OHOHOHOH of course <33
yeah me too *killed by others* f-for design reasons of course!! QwQ;;;;

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yami-izumi [2011-02-21 11:48:37 +0000 UTC]

hmmm padahal udah diedit, kok masih kliatan kepanjangan dikit yah? tapi udah lebih pas sih dari sebelumnya

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Chronolex In reply to yami-izumi [2011-02-21 12:35:33 +0000 UTC]

he? serius? D8

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yami-izumi In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 20:49:23 +0000 UTC]

yoa OAO)v

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Chronolex In reply to yami-izumi [2011-02-22 10:03:44 +0000 UTC]

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Tc-Chan [2011-02-21 10:38:03 +0000 UTC]

KENAPA PAKE BAJU DALAMAN!!?? ...padahal suka yg tak pakai <<< BEJAT /plak

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Chronolex In reply to Tc-Chan [2011-02-21 10:47:27 +0000 UTC]

MANA GW TAU! votingnya kebanyakan milih pake dalaman! aji gile! yah mungkin nanti yg tanpa dalaman itu alternatif dah *ngaco, digempur*

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Fortranica [2011-02-21 10:33:10 +0000 UTC]




kenapa dengan undershirt??? *plak*

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Chronolex In reply to Fortranica [2011-02-21 10:49:35 +0000 UTC]

Kok malah lemes?

yg milih kebanyakan dengan dalaman selisih 3 voting bok *PLAK*

yah mungkin jadi alternatif aja kali ya~ *diinjek*

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Fortranica In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 13:14:33 +0000 UTC]

arghhhhh kl gitu bikin musuh2nya ngincer undershirtnya shade biar shade kehabisan stok! *plak*

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Chronolex In reply to Fortranica [2011-02-21 13:40:52 +0000 UTC]

fetish undershirtnya Shade? *digampar*

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Fortranica In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 14:20:35 +0000 UTC]

mungkin

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Chronolex In reply to Fortranica [2011-02-22 09:54:47 +0000 UTC]

ngaco loe kasian Shadenya

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Fortranica In reply to Chronolex [2011-03-10 14:14:57 +0000 UTC]

biarin *dilindes*

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Tc-Chan In reply to Fortranica [2011-02-21 10:37:19 +0000 UTC]

TTATT KITA SEHATI,..... dan patah hati.... ga sesuai dg keinginan kita ... BUHUHUHUHUHUHU

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Fortranica In reply to Tc-Chan [2011-02-21 13:15:00 +0000 UTC]

UHUHUHUHUHUHUUUUUUU....

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Chronolex In reply to Tc-Chan [2011-02-21 10:51:07 +0000 UTC]

Ini makhluk satu
Kalian dua sama aja /PLAK

segitunyakah kalian pingin dia tanpa dalaman? *siap dicincang ama chara sendiri*

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Fortranica In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 13:15:28 +0000 UTC]

betul

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yami-izumi [2011-02-20 05:22:40 +0000 UTC]

gw sih mending yg kanan, soalnya kl yg kiri itu color schemenya terlalu pucet (baju warna pucat, warna kulit juga terang)
trus setuju sama *selfishgnome , kakinya kepanjangan~
kira2nya sih panjang bahu-pinggul = pinggul-lutut = lutut-telapak kaki. buat pembanding, panjang tangan sampe ujung jari itu separuh paha

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Chronolex In reply to yami-izumi [2011-02-20 10:34:16 +0000 UTC]

nah itu masalahnya gw, gw ga tau cara ngukur proporsi tubuh OTL ada tips kah? D8

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yami-izumi In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-20 13:12:53 +0000 UTC]

wah gw biasanya pake feeling sih...
biasanya sih bagi aja jadi 3 bagian dari bahu sampe telapak kaki:
1. bahu - pinggul
2. pinggul - lutut
3. lutut - telapak kaki
3 bagian itu panjangnya kira2 sama, jadi kl mau ngehitung gampang kan plus, coba aja ngukur pake badan sendiri kira2 bagian mana sepanjang apa^^

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Chronolex In reply to yami-izumi [2011-02-20 17:21:39 +0000 UTC]

buset! tambah bingung gw
hm...mungkin memang harus pake feeling ya *ditampar*

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yami-izumi In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 20:49:16 +0000 UTC]

wakakak feeling itu emang susah sih, ga bisa dihitung

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Fortranica [2011-02-20 03:59:11 +0000 UTC]

saya pilih yang shirtless *ditampar*

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Chronolex In reply to Fortranica [2011-02-20 10:26:29 +0000 UTC]

halah, hasrat loe aja yang pilih itu *dibanting*

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Shelby-oniichan [2011-02-20 01:46:52 +0000 UTC]

SHIRTLESS!

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Chronolex In reply to Shelby-oniichan [2011-02-20 10:24:16 +0000 UTC]

oh alright

thanks XD

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Shelby-oniichan In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-20 10:41:10 +0000 UTC]

xDD no problem!

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heinegouf [2011-02-20 00:44:57 +0000 UTC]

keren

sebagai cowok normal saya katakan saya pilih yang kanan

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Chronolex In reply to heinegouf [2011-02-20 10:25:46 +0000 UTC]

se-serem

dikau cowok normal? yakin? *digebuk*

oh yang kanan ya, ok2 thx

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heinegouf In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 04:04:31 +0000 UTC]

ya gak normal2_bgt

sedikit melenceng2 dikit lah

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Yumenthic [2011-02-19 18:32:41 +0000 UTC]

ihiy sekarang coba2 bikin body sixpacks nya lebih mantab ni

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Chronolex In reply to Yumenthic [2011-02-20 10:23:56 +0000 UTC]

jyah, satu ini juga

ternyata dikau suka body six packs juga ya *salahpaham, plak*

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Yumenthic In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-20 11:34:20 +0000 UTC]

HEIIIIIIIIII
wakkakaka
gak sampe segitunya sih
cm klo memang cocok untuk si cowok gpp lah
wakkkakaka
sesuaikan aja

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Chronolex In reply to Yumenthic [2011-02-20 17:18:41 +0000 UTC]

ini aku aja bingung
ada yg rikues ga pake shirtnya sih

jadi gmn? *plak*

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Yumenthic In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-21 09:31:04 +0000 UTC]

hei hei
apa ya kukukukukukuku
klo aku sih pilih pake kaos aja
soalnya jg kesan'nya lebih bagus pake kaos

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Chronolex In reply to Yumenthic [2011-02-21 09:59:47 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

thankie

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Avoan [2011-02-19 17:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Showing less is bether.

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Chronolex In reply to Avoan [2011-02-20 10:23:11 +0000 UTC]

you mean, shirtless? XD

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Avoan In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-20 11:31:02 +0000 UTC]

No... i mean:
- PUT SOME CLOTHES ON!

Showing less of his 6-pack.

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Chronolex In reply to Avoan [2011-02-20 17:21:58 +0000 UTC]

I see

thank you

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Avoan In reply to Chronolex [2011-02-20 20:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Im here to help.
And comment.
And rate.
And Help.

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Gundamfanatic123 [2011-02-19 16:32:16 +0000 UTC]

better with the shirt e___e

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Chronolex In reply to Gundamfanatic123 [2011-02-19 16:35:48 +0000 UTC]

I see

thanks

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