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chrysalisgrey — Move it, Four

Published: 2012-05-05 18:54:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 7784; Favourites: 108; Downloads: 30
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Description So I'm writing a story, right, and my laptop broke. I hate using this computer for writing because the keyboard is stupid and loud, so I have gone back to handwriting, like I did when I was 12. (by the way, the first chapter of this book I've written is available here if you're interested: [link] )

Except halfway through, Four shows up and he's all talking to Tris: "My FIRST instinct is to push you until you break--" and I'm like, "Seriously? Get out of the way, Four, I'm trying to write."

"--just to see how hard I have to press."

"Okay, you know what? I'll just write around you."

--

Tris and Four (c) Veronica Roth
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Comments: 49

SkystrikeFlame [2013-08-08 06:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Ha,that's me on my school papers.Except my drawings of him are horrible or a cat version of him.I'm just sitting there thinking,"FOUR.GO AWAY,I'M TRYING TO WORK." or "FOUR,I'm trying to pay attention here.Oh wait,lemme fix that...There." XD

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-25 21:00:21 +0000 UTC]

What. Happened. To your avatar.


WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR AVATAR?!

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-25 21:21:05 +0000 UTC]

...

i changed it?

*hides* don't hurt me...

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-25 22:19:54 +0000 UTC]

But I liked your old one!

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-25 22:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah,I know,but I had that one for a while and it was kind of old too. I might change it to a new version of that one soon.

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-26 19:17:28 +0000 UTC]

But Four need you support right now! Have you not read Allegiant? HAVE YOU NO HEART?!

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-26 19:32:48 +0000 UTC]

I have read Allegiant...so sad...I'll work on the new one right now.

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-26 20:25:59 +0000 UTC]

You better!


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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-26 20:42:53 +0000 UTC]

I am. I have to put the frames together in Gimp and then I'll be done.

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-26 21:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Well, hop to it!

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-26 21:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Pushy...

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-26 21:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Who, me? Why'd you say such a thing...?

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-26 21:53:57 +0000 UTC]

I can't find the old one and the one I made it won't let me upload... >.<'

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-26 21:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Well... How d'you fancy entering a witness protection program? 

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-26 21:58:30 +0000 UTC]

What?

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-26 23:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Look! Pweety!

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-26 23:12:30 +0000 UTC]

xD

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IactuallyShitRainbow In reply to SkystrikeFlame [2013-10-26 23:15:55 +0000 UTC]

The font's different, right? That is, there is a font instead of scribbles. Or am I remembering wrong?

Anyway. It's awesome  

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to IactuallyShitRainbow [2013-10-26 23:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Last time I wrote it. This time I typed it. Well,except for the end, I wrote that.

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IndiaTiger [2013-04-26 00:33:21 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT!!!

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anila73 [2013-04-16 23:08:39 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOD.
EJ

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Daughter-of-Asgard42 [2013-03-27 23:45:15 +0000 UTC]

this would so be me. i love it.

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Beautiful-Warriors [2013-03-27 20:40:19 +0000 UTC]

Who in the world is writing a book, pauses to draw an AMAZING drawing, and then just continues writing? HOW DO YOU DO THAT?????

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chrysalisgrey In reply to Beautiful-Warriors [2013-03-28 22:05:37 +0000 UTC]

I got distracted from writing xD.

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LeNotoriousCheesebar [2012-12-26 02:46:27 +0000 UTC]

nice story
sorry i just had to read it

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GreekGirlAuthor [2012-11-06 05:21:30 +0000 UTC]

*le wild Four appears*

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SkystrikeFlame In reply to GreekGirlAuthor [2013-08-08 06:29:31 +0000 UTC]

lol

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chrysalisgrey In reply to GreekGirlAuthor [2012-11-09 23:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah!

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GreekGirlAuthor In reply to chrysalisgrey [2012-11-11 01:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Glad somebody thinks I'm funny

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imstarfire [2012-08-21 22:42:31 +0000 UTC]

LOL @ ur description dude!

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ElDiablosAngelOscuro [2012-08-12 19:03:03 +0000 UTC]

I love you and your art! Not in a wired way though *stalker*

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chrysalisgrey In reply to ElDiablosAngelOscuro [2012-08-13 14:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Hahha thank you so much! <33

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beehivesandbouffants [2012-07-19 02:55:12 +0000 UTC]

i like his squinty look..... like he's trying to figure her out.
super writing doodle. seriously. wowza!

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chrysalisgrey In reply to beehivesandbouffants [2012-07-19 16:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Hahah xD thanks!

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DivergentGames14 [2012-07-18 22:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Your description is hilarious. And the drawing is great.

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chrysalisgrey In reply to DivergentGames14 [2012-07-18 23:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Hahha x] thanks!

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FreedomFotography [2012-07-15 04:04:22 +0000 UTC]

He's got Sollux Captor hair.

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chrysalisgrey In reply to FreedomFotography [2012-07-15 20:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah omg you're kinda right.. xD

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FreedomFotography In reply to chrysalisgrey [2012-07-16 06:19:57 +0000 UTC]

I love them both. And besides... two times two...is Four. ;D
Ok, I'll admit that was a major stretch. >.<

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artandthehungergames [2012-07-04 06:20:48 +0000 UTC]

HAHA

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RueTris [2012-06-07 05:08:58 +0000 UTC]

I was trying so hard not to laugh at your description! I love that, "Okay you know what? I'll just write around you." It was great! I liked the story too. You should make a continuation so we know what the word is!

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chrysalisgrey In reply to RueTris [2012-06-07 23:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Hahahha well it's up to your imagination, but in my own imagination it was "fuck."
Ha.

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Harveyfan01 [2012-06-01 21:48:27 +0000 UTC]

I think you were doodling a bit?

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chrysalisgrey In reply to Harveyfan01 [2012-06-02 00:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Hahah yeah a bit xD.

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Harveyfan01 In reply to chrysalisgrey [2012-06-07 13:56:51 +0000 UTC]

I like to doodle too. Especially if it includes Divergent.

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TheTempestintheStorm [2012-05-21 03:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Hmm wonder what the four letter word is... The possibilities are ENDLESS

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chrysalisgrey In reply to TheTempestintheStorm [2012-05-25 00:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Hahah! It's up to your imagination ;].

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ylime-cxii [2012-05-17 21:42:21 +0000 UTC]

lol i ove the drawing <3

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chrysalisgrey In reply to ylime-cxii [2012-05-18 01:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! haha

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