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ciaroclg — Simply Beautiful Arvon
Published: 2010-12-01 18:52:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 352; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Hello this is my first drawing using my wacom, took me a few hours but Im done. It was so freaking fun to drawl, thinking of his hair style,colors,personality. Wow welcome to zai's team Arvon.new character numero uno 1. He uses a arrow,short sword and gun.Guys please leave a commnt, first try.Original oc.Related content
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The first thing that jumps out at me is the lineart. It's very shaky and unrefined. I would suggest taking your time with it. Broader strokes tend to make for smoother lines. Next, the colors are well, sloppy. You don't fill the entire space and the colors from other parts of the picture are sprinkled around in them. There is no value or shading, just the flat color, which isn't a bad thing, but it just highlights the faults on this one.
Next, the face and head. The eyes are crooked and while you have the general shape at least consistent, it's hard to tell what exactly I'm looking at. The jaw line is much too narrow. There's no way you could fit bones in there. On a bit of a side note, what is up with his hair? There's no rhyme or reason to it. Did you sketch out any of this before you started doing the lineart for it? There are a lot of tutorials for just about everything on dA. I would suggest looking up a few on anatomy, coloring, and lineart.
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Thank you for our honest critique it means lot. I will take all you said and take my time. And as for the color, i wanted his hair to be different,interesting and to stand out in the story, that's the reason why, its to symbolize,whats hes been through,by each color,which i will tell in the story.
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I think this is probably one of your better bits of work in this style, but there's still room for improvement. The character design itself is pretty cool and interesting, the hair and costume work well and look pretty cool. I also like how you made the background but kept it blurred so the focus is still on the character. I would say that some parts are a bit sloppy though. That's to be expected I suppose seeing as this is your first drawing with a tablet, but a lot of colouring looks unfinished and maybe using different brushes would help with that. Some of the anatomy is also slightly off and things like the grave in the background look rushed.
This still looks like a bit better than I could do though! I still have to actually own and get used to a tablet first
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Thank you so much your very kind,ill work on those things
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great job, C! i like how you chose the colors for your drawing. you must had a lot of fun using your new wacom!
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Nods, I sure did. It's not the ebst i think,but to me i had fun with it, and was a little serious about it since he will be one of the main charactrers in the game.
I love my wacom,how are you?
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Hey Nice Job C 
but i see R.I.P who's grave there 
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Aww hey besty,thank you haha. Yep thats his hair its different. His mother,she died because of his father and now he blames his son arvon for her death,therefore he leaves and joins zai's group begging to come to get away and prove himswlf...will you redraw it?^^
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off course i would love to.
i'm going to close my commission this whole month. i want to focus on our project
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awww I was just about to ask if i can see him walking, can is ee alittle glimpse? I know i need to be patient, im so anxious.Lol YAH Im so happy a whole month to the project Im so happy,lthank you so so much
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