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Pure-Dax [2005-04-04 03:38:54 +0000 UTC]
Uber
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venusdemon108 [2004-01-26 03:41:01 +0000 UTC]
i really like this one, good imagery with the sore and the tears like rain, but try to make the imagery flow through out the whole poem, like pick an image, like tears like rain, and describe how each raindrop is for a specific pain, a specific hardship, ya know? it's still really good i like it a lot!
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darkfaerie33 [2004-01-05 03:19:26 +0000 UTC]
nice poem... very tru...
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freebird48 [2004-01-04 06:15:37 +0000 UTC]
a great poem, one of my favs you've done, keep up the good work cookie dough
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dustinriley In reply to freebird48 [2004-01-05 03:04:31 +0000 UTC]
Okay n/m Justin corrected me... that really does sound like a subway thing though.... you 2 scare me...
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dustinriley In reply to freebird48 [2004-01-05 02:59:56 +0000 UTC]
.......a sign that you and cierra have been at subway way too long...
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