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CierraGLGates — Never Healing Sore
Published: 2004-01-04 06:10:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 11
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Emotions are piling upI'm a volcano waiting to erupt.
Hiding all that I feel
many scars that will never heal.
I can't make these thoughts go away
and they return every single day.
My tears constantly fall like rain
even though I try to hide my pain.
Nothing brings me comfort any more
my life is a never healing sore.
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Comments: 12
i really like this one, good imagery with the sore and the tears like rain, but try to make the imagery flow through out the whole poem, like pick an image, like tears like rain, and describe how each raindrop is for a specific pain, a specific hardship, ya know? it's still really good i like it a lot!
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LOL @ freebird
you two are hilarious, and nice poem cierra
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a great poem, one of my favs you've done, keep up the good work cookie dough
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Okay n/m Justin corrected me... that really does sound like a subway thing though.... you 2 scare me...
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.......a sign that you and cierra have been at subway way too long...
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