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Published: 2012-04-05 23:43:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1235; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 17
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Hey people! After receiving many comments and tips about my art "Elf Fantasy" (thanks for them), I just created a new improved version!Hope you like it
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Comments: 49
I like the new one beter
I love the eyes :3
I think you still could work on the nose though
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Oh itΒ΄s true :S I have problems with noses >.< But in a newer version i pretend to make it better *-*
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I like the on on the right, and especially her eye *__*
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Nice concept, here. I like especially like her eyes. I'd only t suggest to work a little more on her hair to make it blend better.
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Thank you, and I agree! I want to make a new version soon *-*
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Much better! It still doesn't feel "complete", though, you could add more details on the lips. This is a great character, and improving your past works really makes you better as an artist!
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Thank yoou *-* I'm always training ^^ And I intend to post a new version, hope you like it when i finished
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Onnwtt thank yoou! *-* IΒ΄m glad you liked it!
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^^ Youzzz veddy velcro dahzling
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Well I can see improvements on some areas while others maybe can be better. I realize you want to improve so here goes! xD
The depth in the hair is fine but you should focus on the face more. Noticed how the face looks so soft while the headset around is quite hard. This upsets the balance of any piece of art. Texture use is there and I like it! However, too much texture can be distracting so always keep in mind when to stop! Try not getting too much on the face since its your focal point. The improved eye is definitely better but the nose can still go further. Look up noses for reference or study the structure of a nose. A strong foundation in drawing is a must for portraits. Perhaps make the chin harder so that it gives more depth and 3Dness. There are also better ways to crop an image, look at other artist's works and see how they do it. Color usage is also fine. You'll get it, I'm sure!
Hope this helps and perhaps you are willing to continue working on it more! Keep it up and good luck!
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Ommggg really thank you! Things you had said I had not noticed, good point! You have good reason at all!! But I realize that my greatest difficulty is to draw noses :S I need to study it! Please, if you can keep giving me these tips, will be really great! When you have time I promise I'll make those adjustments!
(Ahh, and you already have a new watcher) *-*
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Np happy to help!
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Great work. I especially like the eye(s) on the right one.
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Her face is lovely. Eyes are absolutely beautiful!
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i love the color of her hair and that snow-like effect is so cool as well
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Wow! You have improved so much! I really like the eye and the texture on the hair. Seems so real!
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Haha thank you! IΒ΄m glad you liked it *-*
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Kinda interesting style... How did you made it? I mean, what programes did you use?
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Just Photoshop CS5, I really like the smudge tool to mix the colors! :3
Unfortunately I could not download Corel Painter, because there is only the paid version, but I recommend , I've heard that is very good!
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