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caries-caeli [2005-12-05 19:12:55 +0000 UTC]
Your getting quite proficient at juggling your observations and assosiations. I sense a kind of fusion here between your more abstract stylizations and your storytelling oriented work that I have not noticed before. It certainly made for an interesting read!
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ArsArtisGratia [2005-12-02 07:17:20 +0000 UTC]
I like it but it seems to take a sudden turn in the middle, I must be missing something...
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circularthinker In reply to ArsArtisGratia [2005-12-04 22:18:09 +0000 UTC]
it does.
i start with the fixation upon a human being. sensuous observations.
it is associated with the event that is occuring.
later after wrestling with the unnatainability of the girl and the music i change do a more disassociated state.
a contemplative state where i'm reconciling the feeling of unattainability, and how it relates to situations in my past.
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falconiforn In reply to circularthinker [2005-12-02 05:06:39 +0000 UTC]
your welcome, and I was serious, you write better stuff than I do
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