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marijke [2005-09-05 03:05:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I don't give a shat about facking gramatics in poetry. It's just- well, you said yourself it annoyed you, and that's how I felt.
And yes, fucker, I will say something else about your poem.
The ending is pretty cool, but overall it reminds me of a Chad Kroeger song.
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circularthinker In reply to marijke [2005-09-06 02:28:40 +0000 UTC]
i wish you wouldn't have called me a fucker.
i thanked you for your feedback.
i'm not familiar with his music, although i feel your remark is derogatory.
my poem means a lot to me, i feel my response was not unwarranted.
when you put art into the world you must be prepared for the response.
when you comment on someone elses work you must be prepared for the response.
i appreciate that you gave me some feedback, but don't call me a fucker anymore.
thanks.
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marijke [2005-09-04 22:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Why do you spell "cuz" in one place, then "cause" in another?
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circularthinker In reply to marijke [2005-09-04 23:01:50 +0000 UTC]
it's taken right out of my journal and barely edited.
thats what i wrote when thought of whatever i was thinking.
and i don't consider this sort of thing at all while in the process of writing.
bad spelling? whatever. punctuation? whatever.
i don't think i like the word "cuz" very much, so i'm going to change it. thanks for noticing.
do you read poetry for the spelling and punctuation? what i mean is, do you have anything to say about the poem itself?
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