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circularthinker — love, don't be angry.
Published: 2005-08-31 03:02:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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it was dark, you were leaving,that made it easy.
to let you in,
to let me breathe into you.
to be perfect.
without a fear of your reaction.
without a chance
of you taking to much.
so you can have all of me tonight.
by and by i will give you everything you've wanted.
i will kiss you like a lover,
like someone that loves you
again and again.
and when morning creeps it
when the melody of actions
i've fashioned
reaches its end,
i will smile, and forget
how this may tear you,
how i've manipulated
your emotions.
but anyway, i am justified.
i mean, i meant it.
i mean, it meant a lot to me i guess.
and anyway,
it's you that's leaving.
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Comments: 9
I find that I keep coming back to read this and the more I do so, the more I like it.
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thank you very much.
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Very interesting. This seems like a clear departure from your usual style (which is a bit itinerant anyway). The emotions run through the background with booming intensity while the actions that brought them about are in the spotlight. I think that lends a rather rough quality to the work as a whole. Again, your street spirit asserting itself.
p.s. there are some spelling errors you may want to fix. Although I kind of like the word emothians.
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thank you for pointing out my splelling.
it makes me happy you think i have street spirit.
and thanks for all your comments.
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yeah, thanks for all your writing.
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