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Claymore32 — Toshinho's Workshop Vol. 1

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Description This is for 's Workshop Session Vol. 1 coloring gig. Thought I'd give it a shot to see how well I could do and practice my coloring techniques.

Overall I'm pretty happy with it, and I'm actually surprised I made a somewhat decent background (at least compared to all my other backgrounds! ). Feel free to toss any critiques my way regarding the coloring since that's what the workshop is all about!

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Tools:
OpenCanvas 4.06E
3.5x5 Wacom Graphire
Background retouches done in Photoshop 7

Lineart:

Coloring:
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EDIT: After looking at the background again this morning, I realized that there were a few painting gaps in the clouds . That's what I get for wanting to finish this up in the middle of the night... XD

EDIT2: Self-evaluation
As per the instructions of the workshop session, here's a self-critique on the picture. Feel free to add anything else that you think I need to focus more on or work better at in the future.

Overall, I'm pretty happy with how the coloring turned out. I've been trying to teach myself to do glossy art because I've always liked shiney stuff in pictures . Granted, not everything is shiney, but I always like the small, glisteny accents that some people put in their works. I think I have a long way to go to achieve any sort of professional look, but it's a journey I'm already having a lot of fun with.

If there's one thing I would like to see myself work harder at, it's the detail work. The frills could be shaded better, and the corset looks blandly colored. My ultimate goal is to be able to give the same kind of attention I give the hair to the rest of the piece. But that's mainly because I always focus on the hair details. This time around, I tried to branch out from my normal coloring style a bit and use a different shading color on the skin. It turned out much better than I had hoped (though still plenty of room for improvement), and plan to use this lesson on future works.

The background was done hastily, but I'm still pretty happy with it. I tried to depict the Alps in the background.... er, Alps have mountains so it kind of works! But I should've spent a bit more time with the details and actually referenced a picture of the Alps to help with my ability to color mountains. The clouds came out looking decent, though they could look less pillowy and more gaseous. They also look a little too big compared to the mountains for some reason...

Also, I'd like to add that I'm still working on making my art more uniform. Like I said before about giving the same attention to the hair as I do the rest of the piece, I think I really need to work on making the overall color design work better. I hope that makes sense... I guess when I pan down the picture, I see hair that looks good (at least to me, though could be touched up better), skin that looks ok (could use smoother shading), and clothing that's colored a little bland compared to the hair.

So there ya go!
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Comments: 29

PrinSessBun [2008-08-05 20:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Great colour selection!

Hm. I think I'll start self critiquing... Maybe I'll get better if I do.

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Claymore32 In reply to PrinSessBun [2008-08-06 00:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you like the colors Self-critiquing is definitely an awesome way to improve since it forces you to look at your picture from an objective perspective after it's done. I should actually start doing it more on my future works

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PrinSessBun In reply to Claymore32 [2008-08-06 00:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm going to try it out and see if it helps! Your work certainly kicks butt so it can't hurt, right?

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Ironcid [2008-02-05 00:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Damn she has big... *ahem* ...eyes!

But man, your colouring style never ceases to impress me. Especially how you colour the hair. It look's awesome.
Also the shading/higlights are nicely done, and I like the background

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Claymore32 In reply to Ironcid [2008-02-05 01:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks man! Yes, she is definitely not lacking in the assets department!

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Ironcid In reply to Claymore32 [2008-02-06 00:19:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Hehe, no complains about that!

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comic-coloring [2008-01-31 18:32:13 +0000 UTC]

i think you could use some harder shadows on some parts of the skinn like under hear head on the neck or on her left arm the hair and the clothes has some dark ones and the skinn looks to soft on some parts..

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Claymore32 In reply to comic-coloring [2008-01-31 19:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah I definitely see what you mean. Thank you!

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hydek [2008-01-31 11:46:09 +0000 UTC]

oh wow!!! PLEAAASE you got to tell me how to make this kind of amazing lighting and shadow effects on openCanvas. It is the SW I use but I never thought this could be made there!

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Claymore32 In reply to hydek [2008-01-31 16:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! If you like the way I do the highlighting and shadows in OpenCanvas and have the program, then I would suggest downloading one of the event files from the link posted in my latest journal. I'm also working on a coloring tutorial using OpenCanvas to help show everyone what kinds of things you can do with it. Not sure when I'll be done with it, but hopefully sometime soon XD

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hydek In reply to Claymore32 [2008-01-31 20:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, thanks!! I will download the event files and sit and patiently wait for that tutorial! ^_^

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A-blue-poppy [2008-01-31 00:30:59 +0000 UTC]

I totally don't know what I'm talking about, because I know absoluuuuuutely nothing about this kind of art, but I agree that the head and clothes clash a little. The eyes and hair are so bold, where as the blueish-grey and red are almost faded...But I love the purple for shading, it makes it softer round the edges, and the little shines are great too.

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Claymore32 In reply to A-blue-poppy [2008-01-31 01:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Ha, don't feel bad if you don't know anything about this kind of art - I'm always interested in thoughts from everyone . I really appreciate your comments! And what you mentioned makes a lot of sense. One thing I did wrong with this was I didn't do base colors for each portion before moving onto the shading and accents phase. I basically did each part to completion and then moved onto the next. Granted, I could've changed the final colors a bit, but a good base always makes for a better picture!

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Toshinho [2008-01-30 23:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks for participating. I believe you're one of those who really took it seriouly and most of all doing it for yourself improvement. (Which is infact the most important part of this session.)
Overall I get this nice alps feeling from it, probably more than I intially intended on my line-art. Since I failed on my background I must say you did some nice rendering on the BK. The hair is done beautifully too, I can see you have put some time on it too.
As for critiques, you've pretty much found it in your self-evalution so I won't repeat. ^-^

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Claymore32 In reply to Toshinho [2008-01-31 00:56:59 +0000 UTC]

I was more than happy to participate! I think it's great that you put together a workshop for people to share their coloring techniques and styles as well as provided a great atmosphere for constructive critiques.

I really appreciate your thoughts, and yes, I tend to be very critical of my works .

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Toshinho In reply to Claymore32 [2008-01-31 02:18:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem, it was much of a instant idea but is turning out positively. Some of my goal was to have openess to critiques . Giving self-critique is perhaps important cause I notice a lot of dA artist are "over-confident" in their work and tends to hide behind styles leaving a very little space for improvement. (Including myself.) But since I "hate" to be critiqued, I wanted to solve these problems by letting people know about the weaknesses you already aware of to avoid people picking on them repeatedly. Instead viewers can find something you didn't/couldn't notice by yourself efficiently.

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Claymore32 In reply to Toshinho [2008-01-31 03:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I completely agree with you, and I'm happy this idea came to you. I have noticed that when I open up and critique myself, others have been more than happy to either agree with me or point out other things (in a much more constructive manner). In a way, it seems like the self critique sets the mood for others to look for things and help you out as well. I think I may have to start posting self critiques on other works of mine that get submitted here in the future .

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Toshinho In reply to Claymore32 [2008-02-03 17:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey I'm re-visiting the participant's piece again to give my second words. (I guess time can change a POV and impression.)
I'm starting to dig your version of her face, don't know what but seems it has a joyful impression, which is ofcourse a charming effect to it. Maybe the use of color and the combination of the shading giving a different looks to it. ^-^

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Claymore32 In reply to Toshinho [2008-02-04 04:05:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man! Very happy you like her face One thing I tried to do with this one was to go back to an older method I had of coloring the eyes. I think that helped to give her a more happy expression. Thanks for the second words! ^^

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Ryu-tso [2008-01-30 21:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Sure is a busty one isn't she?

But I agree. I love the purple shadow you used.

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Claymore32 In reply to Ryu-tso [2008-01-30 22:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Hehe no complaints here! And thank you!

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sesshomarusecretlove [2008-01-30 12:10:27 +0000 UTC]

beautiful colors. ^^

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Claymore32 In reply to sesshomarusecretlove [2008-01-30 13:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Madderance [2008-01-30 08:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Lovely colors.

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Claymore32 In reply to Madderance [2008-01-30 13:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I'm glad you like it!

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toegar [2008-01-30 07:11:24 +0000 UTC]

She is so hot !! I checked out the others and I really think you have a very good chance here. The purple was an interesting add for a shadow color. Where you trying to match it with hair? I like the fact you added the wrinkles to the cloth. I have no negatives to say, really good man (again). The background looks great...love the mountains...the mountains in the background not her mountains...I mean, ah well what I meant to say was...ah...I...nice coloring, bye (leaves before maid hits him with large set of mugs...I mean jugs...No I mean chairs yes nice solid chairs with no hidden meanings)

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Claymore32 In reply to toegar [2008-01-30 13:27:38 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'm thinking the corset this maid is wearing is more a necessity than anything else I'm glad you like the coloring! And yeah, I wanted to make the shadows purples to help match with the hair since the hair color might've stood out too much otherwise. Thanks!!

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diaboso [2008-01-30 06:47:10 +0000 UTC]

i have sean this line art before
I do like the colors you chose, and your skys are always amazing

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Claymore32 In reply to diaboso [2008-01-30 13:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man!

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