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ClopinMiseried — The Ballad of Mona Lisa

Published: 2011-03-01 21:28:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1608; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 44
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Description EDIT: Here's the colored version of my characters portrait for #HARPG-Outlaw-Trail
Story below is of my own of Victoria's and is completely irrelevant to the story in Outlaw Trail




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Up on a hill she stopped her horse, as he chewed on his bit and spit out foam she lit up a cigarette. His face was swimming through her head. On the horizon, the sun fled from events about to happen that night. She waved the light to blow it out before flicking it into the grass and as she smoked she glared at the tiny house at the bottom of the hill at the base of the lake. There was a man inside she was desperate to see... an itch she needed to scratch.

The stallion under Victoria began to get restless, pawing at the ground and pulling on his reigns until his rider kicked his shoulder to tell him to knock it off. After finishing up her bud she got off and stood next to her steed giving him a pat on the neck, still watching the house, watching the man in the window. The second the sun shut its eye upon the world Victoria started down the hill, with a vengence. Her mount waiting loyally for her return.

Inside the house, the man sat with his friends playing cards, unaware but with an uneasy feeling about him. As Victoria approached the front porch one of the men came out to smoke, but that sweet cigarette didn't even touch his lips before he'd gotten a bullet in the eye from the back of his head. Startled by the shot, the men inside jumped up and scrambled for their guns. Victoria slammed the door open and made short work of the last two friends. In a split second after the door hit the wall she'd shot them both in the face and pulled out her Winchester rifle and pointed it at her target. As his friends bled on the floor, the man cowered and slowly recognized the woman.

"...V-Victoria?... I-Is that you?" he slowly started to get up holding out his hand as if to stop her from charging. "I never thought I'd see you again hun-"
But before he could finish, Victoria snarled and turned her rifle around and hit him dead in the jaw with full force with it, knocking him back down to the ground.

"I've always liked men better on their knees..." she said in a seductive giggly tone as she put her rifle on the table and took out two shiny bullets. The man moaned and rolled around on the floor as Victoria took out some lipstick and applied it to her lips. "I wish mommy could see you now..." she said, dissapointed, looking in the mirror on the wall at her lips. Her spurs chinked as she walked back to the man and picked up a chair and sat in front of him. "Why'd you do it daddy, why'd you sell me, you know mama hated prostitutes" she asked her father in a sad, innocent, but completely sarcastic, voice. Almost like she was a little girl again, yet fueled by the burning sensation of what he'd done to her.

"I don't know- " he coughed, spat out some blood and a tooth "-I don't know what your talking about.."

"Oh I think you do... I'm dissapointed in you daddy..." She picked up her shiny bullets off the table and gave them both a tender kiss, leaving both with a red lipstick marking, then she loaded them in her rifle...

As she cocked the gun up she rolled her father over on his back and pointed the rifle in his face. Still writhing in pain, the man looked up at his daughter he tried to say something- plead like the coward he was- but it only came out as gugrles and she wouldn't hear it nor did she give a damn. "I'll see you soon daddy..." and with that she unloaded her two bullets into her father. "A little taste of what you paid for..."
Then it was quiet.

Victoria put her gun away and looked around. She smiled when she saw the money from the poker game that spilled on the floor from the scrambling panic. She picked it up, along with the bottle of whiskey they'd been drinking. "Score" she whispered to herself reading the label, it was the good stuff. As she walked out the door she raised the bottle to her dead father and took a gulp as she walked outside. She kissed to the air and her horse galloped down the hill to his owner. She gave him a scratch on his forehead as he sniffed the whiskey bottle. "Alright, alright... since I'm in a good mood." The horse arched his neck and gave a little squeal as he nodded his head. She took one last swig of the bottle then gave the last little bit to her horse, raising it up high for him to chug. One of the few things they had in common... they both loved whiskey. She got that from her dad.

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So... tell me what you think!
that horse looks familiar doesn't he? He's a freisian based Caribbean Teague with fresh Spanish Mustang blood so he's a fiery one Just like his rider.

I was up all night last night working on this... and I just finished it, then I was like- Well its so awesome it needs a story. So ya, first taste you get of Miss Victoria Teague, she kills her dad. You'll find out why later ^^
I'd been looking through my gallery and I realized- I have no pictures of horses being ridden. Haha not bad for my first try eh? (Oh ya! No refs either!!)
Prepare for a lot more on Miss Victoria here, I'm gona use her story to get better at drawing horse/humans together I hope you like it!


Oh ya the song Is The Ballad of Mona Lisa from Panic at the Disco! [link] Check it out ^^
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Comments: 31

Murasaki99 [2012-05-20 16:05:56 +0000 UTC]

To say Victoria has "a troubled past" would be an understatement!

I hope the rest of her life is less-complicated. Her horse is just lovely.

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ClopinMiseried In reply to Murasaki99 [2012-05-21 21:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah she's had a bumpy one for sure Doesn't get too much easier until she finally settles herself down... she's a restless little thing

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WesternSpice [2012-05-20 13:52:26 +0000 UTC]

That story's pretty phenomenal!

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ClopinMiseried In reply to WesternSpice [2012-05-21 21:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks friend! I love western stories so naturally when I found out about your group... I freaked out

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CTMTF [2011-04-17 01:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow. She is sooooooo awesome! That's great for your first rider on a horse.

I'm catching up on her story so I'm ready for our RP And the more I'm reading, the more eager I'm getting!

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ClopinMiseried In reply to CTMTF [2011-04-17 04:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I know i'm so excited I've got two more other characters now too, Tobin (who I'm still workin on, don't have a ref for him yet) and my new guy, Jesse J. and i'm really excited about this guy Let me know if you got any questions, I can't wait to see your characters

And I was thinking, Victoria and Tobin has just been sent by Jesse on a mission to Blackwater to find a girl for him and bring her back to Mexico, perhaps Victoria and Tobin can meet up with your characters there?
(I'm still catching up on the story so there's time ^^)

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CTMTF In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-04-17 15:14:22 +0000 UTC]

I saw Jesse J, just need to read his part now My guys should be up very soon, because their pictures are done.

Blackwater? Sure! They're right around there most of the time. They're bandits, so maybe they could be robbing the bank as Victoria and Tobin arrive? Then, it would be utter chaos! Or, they could meet in the bar/saloon, or something calmer.

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ClopinMiseried In reply to CTMTF [2011-04-18 02:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I'm thinkin, since Victoria and Tobin have to basically kiddnapp this girl and drag her to Mexico, they could meet up just before in the saloon and overhear them- like your guys know who she is and where she is and they decide to help Tobin and Victoria out? Or your guys could be escaping from their bank robbery while my guys are escaping from their kidnapping, they could meet up on the road and decide to band together and head to Mexico
OR! we could combine and Victoria and Tobin could meet your guys in the saloon (who know the girl they're looking for and where she is) and then the next night as everyones making an escape they band together to fight off marshals and your guys decide to come with our guys to Mexico to deliver the girl to Jesse

Oh mah goodness this is going to be so awesome

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CTMTF In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-04-18 21:53:56 +0000 UTC]

All three of those options are so awesome I can't really decide. I think the combination one is best, though. So, meet in the saloon, help each other out, fight off marshals and escape to Mexico to meet Jesse! If you're good with that, I'll set my guys up in the saloon somehow.

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ClopinMiseried In reply to CTMTF [2011-04-18 22:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Sounds awesome! We'll go with the combined one. Then I can jump in and I'll note ya and we can write the stories together so all their personalities are A-ok ;D
it's gonna be awesomesauce!

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CTMTF In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-04-21 23:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I've started a picture of my guys arriving at the Blackwater Saloon, so would it be okay if I write them into the bar and then wait for the Note conversation to include your guys? I wanted a starting point, you know, so it would be easy to combine later

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ClopinMiseried In reply to CTMTF [2011-04-23 19:46:23 +0000 UTC]

Ya that'd be awesome! Do you have info on them yet? I can't wait to see them

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CTMTF In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-04-23 22:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Definately tomorrow! I feel like a fishhead for taking so long

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ClopinMiseried In reply to CTMTF [2011-04-23 22:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh don't worry bout it friend! I'm in no rush, it's for fun afterall right

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rempage [2011-03-02 10:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Awesome story! Looove the pic, you can definitely feel the mood that you were trying to set :3

Something westerny, how about Dakota? :3 Maybe it could be his barn name?

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ClopinMiseried In reply to rempage [2011-03-02 18:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh mah goodness thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it

and Dakota... now adays everyones named Dakota, at our abrn we have 2 dakota's, but back in this day it would totally fit, and i'll totally consider it! thanks so much!

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rempage In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-03-04 07:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha I have noticed it became more popular, but it would definitely be fitting for this era :3

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EternalStarTrail [2011-03-01 22:01:29 +0000 UTC]

Awsome picture and story Victoria is really bad ass XD

I was reading the other comments, and you liked Remedy for a name,.. so I thought i might give some show names for it ~GhastlyFarewell is right, he does look liek a Remedy XD

Toxic Remedy
Old Fashion Remedy
Quick Shot Remedy
Remedy for the Soul
Remedy is Temporary

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ClopinMiseried In reply to EternalStarTrail [2011-03-01 22:31:04 +0000 UTC]

why thank ya my dear!

Ooo! I do like Quick Shot Remedy... and Old Fashion Remedy... and maybe I can just call him Remmer for short...
Ah its starting to grow on me
thanks for the suggestions!

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EternalStarTrail In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-03-01 22:33:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem

lol my pleasure, coming up with name sis a passion for me XD glad i could help in some way ^^

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BrindleTail [2011-03-01 21:55:31 +0000 UTC]

LOVE this song.

Maybe the horse's name should include Ballad? I dunno, country songs are great inspiration xD

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ClopinMiseried In reply to BrindleTail [2011-03-01 21:59:38 +0000 UTC]

I know right! I'm obsessed with it at the moment
Ballad... hmm... thats a good idea something epic... thanks for the suggestion!

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GhastlyFarewell [2011-03-01 21:39:57 +0000 UTC]

What kind of names are you looking for?

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ClopinMiseried In reply to GhastlyFarewell [2011-03-01 21:42:37 +0000 UTC]

for the horse? just some kind of westerny/ awesome/ unique name, something that makes him recgonisable ya know?

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GhastlyFarewell In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-03-01 21:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Oooki. Because the first name that came to mind when I read that you wanted a name for him was Remedy, but for a show name, I don't know.

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ClopinMiseried In reply to GhastlyFarewell [2011-03-01 21:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Remedy? .... I like that he does look like a Remedy, I'll definiatly consider that! thank you!

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GhastlyFarewell In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-03-01 22:03:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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themuffinthing [2011-03-01 21:36:25 +0000 UTC]

*died xDD

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themuffinthing [2011-03-01 21:36:17 +0000 UTC]

That is my favourite song. xD I nearly did when I saw this <33

Great work as well! I love the story. :3

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ClopinMiseried In reply to themuffinthing [2011-03-01 21:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness Thank you so much!
I know right! I'm obesessed with this song at the moment

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themuffinthing In reply to ClopinMiseried [2011-03-01 21:51:53 +0000 UTC]



Same here!

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