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Published: 2015-07-08 20:52:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 430; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description Okay okay, I know I have tried landscapes before... but this is the first attempt that I have liked the outcome of.

I drew Tia raising the sun, I know she looks small but it was kinda supposed to be a young Celestia.

I hope it meets good standards!!
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visuaii [2015-07-09 16:23:10 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! I'll be saying both positive and negative opinions, if you wouldn't mind. The negative parts would be there to help you, of course. I do not wish to hurt your feelings, cause that would suck. Alright. To start off, I'd like to say that the landscape is indeed beautiful. The river and the ground around it holds a realistic feel to the scenery. Princess Celestia also looks like she came from the show, actually. The detail in the eye is magnificent! I couldn't do that if I tried. Honestly, the hind legs look a little off, but that's okay. The shape of the head is a bit derpy, but that's fine as well. Also, the front right leg (I believe..It could be the left cx) does look like a stub, unless I'm really stupid and the rest of the leg is layered behind the other one. Overall, your artwork is truly a beauty. I hope my opinions can help you out, at least a little bit. Bye! c:

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sartying In reply to visuaii [2015-07-12 17:12:18 +0000 UTC]

honestly, I'm reading this and thinking, lol cuz I'm so lost here XD
totally fair

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visuaii In reply to sartying [2015-07-13 05:46:48 +0000 UTC]

At least it isn't something worse. Is there a higher rating than fair, or is that the top one? I mean, I don't mind if fair isn't. I must wanted to know o3o

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cloudsabovedawn In reply to visuaii [2015-07-10 16:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! I really appreciate it. Yes, I know the angle I drew Celestia it was a little weird, so it might look off. And yes, her front right leg is layered behind her, it's not a stump haha.

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visuaii In reply to cloudsabovedawn [2015-07-10 18:47:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I love giving feedback o3o I like to help people improve. c: And about the front leg, wouldn't the rest of the leg show behind the other one? At least, that's what I would think, through all my experience from drawing. Unless the rest of Celestia's leg bent behind the other one. That's what I'm assuming at least. cx

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cloudsabovedawn In reply to visuaii [2015-07-10 20:20:48 +0000 UTC]

I was trying to find a way to make it seem like the leg was there, just behind the other front on and the chest. Oospie

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visuaii In reply to cloudsabovedawn [2015-07-10 21:08:25 +0000 UTC]

It can get hard to measure out small things like this (or something. I legit don't know what I just said xD) but I usually try to use my arms or even legs to help with poses. Sometimes, I even use bases for help. I suggest that you use these methods (hermahgerd the sofistication levels have skyrocketed. Illuminati confiremd) if you really want to. ^3^

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cloudsabovedawn In reply to visuaii [2015-07-10 21:17:51 +0000 UTC]

huehuehue yes I try to sketch out everything with proper proportions but it's hard sometimes

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visuaii In reply to cloudsabovedawn [2015-07-10 21:28:01 +0000 UTC]

True. Ehuehuehue (hue)

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JaymieDaggerBark [2016-11-10 00:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Celestia is BestΒ Princess!!!!!Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β 

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cloudsabovedawn In reply to JaymieDaggerBark [2016-11-10 23:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Certainly agree!

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JaymieDaggerBark In reply to cloudsabovedawn [2016-11-10 23:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Praise the sun!Β  Β  Β  Β 

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