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Webcomic | PatreonIgnis Albus re-design I think!!
I've been trying to think of a better design that looks way different than this other character's design and I think I finally have a a some-what decent design now ; u;
If you have any suggestions to make the design better I'd love to hear them!
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I hope that I can someday have such a fun fashion sense.
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Aww I love Ignis! They're so cool :'D
Are they wearing glasses? The spiral-eyes make them look kinda kooky - does that suit their personality?
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I was thinking of changing their personality a little bit to a more silly type of personality but I'm still unsure! I gatta do more sketches and see what they tell me what they want uvu
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I think they'd be really fun to draw if they were more charismatic, yeah! Especially with the flames - they could go all over the place!
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I feel like the spikes jutting out from his shoulders and the back of his legs clutter the design too much.
I'd also say try to use the shapes of his flaming head and light scarf as a basis for the other shapes in his design.
It'll give him a more unified look overall.
You've got a nice split complementary color scheme going on here, so that's a major plus.
He definitely looks appealing, but I'm not sure of the personality I'm supposed to be picking up from looking at him. Solidifying that would be a plus.
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Something more like this? gyazo.com/99bd259405a9de0885b8…
Not sure what you mean by "use the shapes of his flaming head and light scarf as a basis for the other shapes in his design"
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Yeah that definitely looks better
What I meant by that 2nd comment was to give elements of his design like his lower half more of a curvy feel like the flames and scarf have.
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