Mack2468 [2012-06-06 21:26:41 +0000 UTC]
Hi! This is critique for .You used a large vocabulary which is good for any writing. I like the way you personified time. After reading this, it gets you thinking. Keep up the good work!^^
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OfOneSoul [2012-03-09 03:37:48 +0000 UTC]
I love the personification of time, you definitely have a way with words and this piece flowed beautifully. Great work *OfOneSoul
Minkymy [2012-01-21 00:22:48 +0000 UTC]
Clocks are delicious.