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Colourbrand — Commissioned: How to kill a Black Lanner

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Description 'Cock sure and confident, Star Commander Anya Solomon, of the infamous Clan, the Jade Falcons, has attacked a border world to prove to the “freebirth” scum, the superiority of Clan kind.

Piloting her Black Lanner, the Jade Predator, she and her star of warriors, were engaging local militia and mercenary waste, that had no mechs to defend their holdings; her forces, in her narrow mind, would win the day; it was not Tukayyid but it was a nice piece of gaining pride.

To her amazement, she then detected speeding towards her, a lance of vehicles; to her disbelief and joy, they were inferior Harasser light missile hovertanks. This was going to be short, she thought.

Anya opened up with her large laser and LRM-10 System. To her disbelief, the four vehicles wove in pairs and crossed into each others path; this threw the missiles off target and they exploded out of range, hitting just swampland. The laser however struck one of the Harassers, blasting its turret off and causing it to spin and then crash into a bank of mud, hard.

Aboard the lead Harasser, Officer Brigitte Olafsdottir, knew that her machines were feeble against battlemechs – but that was on paper. She knew Clan folk were not thinkers; more brutish thug with advanced weapons. She had a plan but the Clan opening shot shook her. Brigitte cared deeply for her mercenary unit, the Norns and was already radioing the damaged and still Harasser. As she did, she ordered her crews to fire on the mech, as soon as they were in range.

Anya was ready for the “feeble attack”; that was until the three remaining Harassers’s retaliation of 36 short range missiles struck the Clan machine; despite being made of harder Ferro-Fibrous armour, the peppering explosions did damage. She was thrown about inside her machine. When she recovered, she checked for damage; one of her medium lasers was disabled and the controls for the LRM system had been destroyed.

Angered, she went after them.

Brigitte told her unit to fan away then double back, but as the driver of her machine followed the order, Brigitte asked the situation of the damaged Harasser; it was 'toothless but drivable', came the response. She ordered them to get the hell out of the fight. The damaged Harasser manages to levitate and power on but with no weapons, it was more than useless – it was a juicy target. Trailing burning smoke, the machine just lagged behind the others.

All four Harassers floored their speed, but Anya smiled because her mech was not just fast for a medium class, but also has Myomer Accelerator Signal Circuitry; engaging it made her mech sprint faster, catching up with the lance.

Brigitte had a plan in mind but she was more concerned with the damaged Harasser. She asked the crew their status over the radio.

Before the crew could explain their situation, there was a brief scream and then eerie crackling of audio; she saw the cause. The Black Lanner’s main laser and SRM system had smashed into the damaged machine; it exploded but its carcass carried on driving forward in flames, before it thudded into a swamp bank, burning.

Angered at the blatant murder, she kept her calm; rage blinded thought; if she was to kill this arrogant mechmonster, she had to think. Then one of her fellow Harassers pointed out a ridge of high mud and deep marshland ahead. That was ideal. Brigitte relayed coded messages over the radio, to which the others agreed.

She ordered the Harasser who spotted the bank to climb it; she then turned to her partnered vehicle and ordered it follow her, to traverse the swamp. As the paired hovercraft did, the remaining other Harasser went into action; it turned its turret and let off a barrage of twelve short ranged missiles at the Lanner. Anya spotted them and took evasive action, but five missiles struck her large laser and damaged her SRM system. Buffeted by the blasts, Anya tried to make an evaluation of the assault when she was jolted almost out of her harness.

The mech has grounded almost to a halt; it has hit deep mud, silt, and swamp. It was stuck. She looked in utter disbelief; getting herself back in order after such a painful halt and grappling the controls, she saw the burning wreck of the killed Harasser and the two she were pursuing, speeding off. Her mech laboured in the deep sucking mud and silt, each step reacted like it was a thousand tons.

Anya then heard communication chatter from her friends; they had been lured into traps by vehicles and were screaming their fate, as their machines were being destroyed around them.

The Star Commander now realised what had happened and what was next; she was so fixed on the single Harasser’s attack on the right, she blundered straight into a swamp – a bog; and to her horror, the two pursuing Harassers had now turned about heading towards her at flank speed.

So this was the trap, she thought, but she can tackle them. She aimed her large laser and her SRM unit. To her disbelief, the SRM unit had jammed; she had no missiles to hand. The lasers were all she had; that was enough.

Brigitte did not know the status of the Lanner’s weapons, all she saw were moving guns; she gave instructions to her partner Harasser to flank further right whilst she closed in; regardless of the weaponry, mechs have limits. The Clanner had to hit both to have a chance to win.

And that was the weakness.

Anya had both machines on target when her Beagle Active Probe detected the third Harasser coming up from the bank behind. She had to turn to engage this predator – if she was quick enough she could take out all three; she tried – but the bog slowed her down.

The banking Harasser was already in range and let off all twelve missiles. It struck the left rear torso with devastating effect; loaded missiles exploded with the strike smashing apart the back. This resulted in the LRM system splintering and ripping away the paired medium lasers that sat next to it. As the remnants of those weapons fell to the floor in flames, Anya tried to rite her mech from falling face first in mud. She was so pre-occupied in stabilising her 'mech that she ignored another Harasser speeding past her.

Then her gaze turned to one closing in, SRM turret locked onto her cockpit.

Brigitte grimace a smile as she squashed the fire button…'


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The story above is based on a brief synopsis of a commission by my great friend

The concept is a Battletech story where his characters – the mercenary unit the Norns are taking on a small but lethal incursion by some Jade Falcon Clanners. He wanted a scene that emphasised why the Norns are good at defeating Clanners and Mechs when they do not possess such things.

In short – using tactics and experience. Led by a former Mech warrior, Brigitte Olafsdottir, she knows how to fight – by thinking it out.

This was initially tough; mechs are a bit of a bastard to me; gave me free reign however to come up with the image of a Clan Jade Falcon mech being attacked by Harasser hovercraft; I chose a Black Lanner because it looked mech-like and no one has done them much. But it was a pain.

The backdrop was the saviour – an alien world; I did the sky green and it worked; it highlights the explosions and the swamps very well. The spray was easy to do and the Harassers I loved working on; I added a lot of elements to make them look more like military machines.

Love to hear your thoughts

Enjoy!
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Comments: 57

Colourbrand In reply to ??? [2024-06-16 14:59:21 +0000 UTC]

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thormemeson [2021-03-06 15:34:29 +0000 UTC]

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Colourbrand In reply to thormemeson [2021-03-08 11:30:15 +0000 UTC]

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thormemeson In reply to Colourbrand [2021-03-08 13:50:14 +0000 UTC]

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Colourbrand In reply to thormemeson [2021-03-08 17:40:06 +0000 UTC]

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Deviator101 [2018-06-17 00:01:03 +0000 UTC]

Had that mech had jump jets things might've ended differently. But it didn't, superior tactics and thinking win the day.

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Colourbrand In reply to Deviator101 [2018-06-17 09:30:35 +0000 UTC]

"superior tactics and thinking win the day."


well said sir

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Desgar [2016-08-11 20:56:48 +0000 UTC]

An amazing piece of art and prose! It's like the saying goes: "size matters not."

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Colourbrand In reply to Desgar [2016-08-12 05:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! It's what you do with it

Cheers sir

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RobinGraves2099 [2016-06-19 16:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Totally captivating. Im sitting here on Fathers day sipping coffee impressed and intrigued. It's up to us to come together to create the next big income of Mechwarrior to the world again to capture the audience of today for a fast paced sci fi thrill ride. It's a gift for me today to see that other fans are out there creating amazing stories of the same ones I am. I say we create a think tank together compose and finance together a Movie for Mechwarrior. Books art are a great passion of all of ours now lets make a movie. 

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Colourbrand In reply to RobinGraves2099 [2016-06-19 19:57:18 +0000 UTC]

What great words for a great day

Would be nice - but some rich so-and-so would slap some writ against it.

That said, now one can stop us imagining

Thank you sir

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Dick-Plant [2016-05-27 19:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! What are those hover tanks called?

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Colourbrand In reply to Dick-Plant [2016-05-28 20:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Harasser Light Missile Carriers

Thank you for your kind words

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Dick-Plant In reply to Colourbrand [2016-05-28 20:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice, is this you own story?

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Colourbrand In reply to Dick-Plant [2016-05-29 09:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Sort of - the characters are but the story I constructed based on his idea how this took place.

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Dick-Plant In reply to Colourbrand [2016-05-29 15:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Okay

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Nevaron [2016-01-21 07:52:28 +0000 UTC]

both the artwork, the story, and the story IN the artwork are all great.  I am a bit of an addict with BT, one thing I never leave out of my units is the vehicles, you can never underestimate them  Great work.  

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Colourbrand In reply to Nevaron [2016-01-30 08:27:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sir - never underestimate one's opponent! Thank you also for the kind words on the picture and the story

Means a lot

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Heretic1311 [2015-12-26 02:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Interesting choice.
The Black Lanner was created by the Jade Falcons from experience gained fighting Inner Sphere mechs.
It appeared in no game i know of and only in minor side moments in novels.
While i dislike the fashist Clans, i do like their toys, and the Black Lanner looks very nice in my oppinion.

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Colourbrand In reply to Heretic1311 [2015-12-26 10:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Commission sir, just what the payer wanted

I hate the Clan concept, but BT ain't important to me - but thank you very much for taking the time to pop by and comment.

Also for sharing this

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AkindioStudios [2014-07-14 08:03:01 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of SEGA's game ChromeHounds' motto: "Fight in a pack, or die alone." Very nice storyline on this one my friend! Keep 'em coming!

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Colourbrand In reply to AkindioStudios [2014-07-14 17:05:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sir - I will and glad it evoked such memories !

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AkindioStudios In reply to Colourbrand [2014-07-15 21:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Ah, good times... good time.

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I-Plexiglass [2014-06-20 00:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha-- BOOOM!!! Oh man, way to make the fabled king of the battlefield look like a bungling fool! Holy, those freebirthers really know their tactical stuff- that Lanner didn't stand a chance from the very start. That is some
damn impressive material Nuke-Fridge is writing; the tension in the story between the hunter and the prey was awesome, and the twist in advantages between them was certainly (to me) unexpected, despite the cue in the
pic's title. So much win.

I've always loved it when you'd take another guy's story and add your own interpretation of it in the form of a screenshot in the midst of action. You weave in emotion, pressure, tension, and tremendous destruction most
fitting to the written situation, and the result is the terrific blend of talents you'd see in a movie or a video game. Little elements in the piece, such as the position of the vehicles, the colour scheme, the damage inflicted, and
the perspective, add so much to an already excellent story.

It looks easier said than done, though- this one looked like a horror to do! I can see what you mean about the mech- I haven't even attempted to try one out myself- but ho man, the result is so cool! I adore how you caught
the shifting of its weight under fire; it just nails the mech overall and makes it work really well. That lurch to the right does not look healthy!

Another great work as always, sir

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Colourbrand In reply to I-Plexiglass [2014-06-21 07:06:25 +0000 UTC]

WOW!

What great words

When I was given this, my brief was so - brief.

There was enough to get an idea but enough to allow my imagination room to grow. I had the idea sown up with his help. The twists were my idea - the lurch to the left as you love; the missile hits, the vehicles; I wanted to show how a bunch of weak machines could bring down a mech with plausibility.

The story I did based on his characters and ideas - I wanted to expand on that, to explain how this happened, and what is going on. I am very pleased you got that

The hovercrafts and the setting are great delights to me and it does set up the picture well. Even loved the colours of the Harassers; he had artist block on them now he has an idea

Again, thank you sir for the great support and stirring words

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I-Plexiglass In reply to Colourbrand [2014-07-16 06:13:44 +0000 UTC]

I love how you collaborated with him to get the perfect result- two minds are, at times, better than one, and the combination just nailed it. That lurch, though-- I just adore seeing heavy objects, such as mechs,
given proper evidence of weight in a 2-dimensional (or even 3-D!) space. It's not easy to do, but when it is done right, it carries a lot of artistic clout!

I remember reading a quote from Captain Kirk in an old Star Trek newspaper comic compilation: "No weapon is obsolete if it's effective". Very true words, I believe, and they apply here so aptly!

WOW! You gave the creator himself new ideas for his works-- many kudos, sir, and much respect! It's not a common occurrence!

I am so glad they stir you! Cheers, my friend

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Colourbrand In reply to I-Plexiglass [2014-07-16 18:31:06 +0000 UTC]

"No weapon is obsolete if it's effective"

Wise words sir

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RobCaswell [2014-05-02 16:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Gangin' up! No fair!!!!

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Colourbrand In reply to RobCaswell [2014-05-02 17:00:16 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAH - against a clanner mech? Eer yeah!!!

Cheers matey

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Saber15 [2014-04-11 20:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Harassers REPRESENT

Definitely the most entertaining tank to use in MechWarrior Living Legends. Hard to kill a Lanner with one, but it's pretty hilarious spinning around a Daishi faster than he can track you.

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Colourbrand In reply to Saber15 [2014-04-12 19:20:12 +0000 UTC]

HAhahahaha sounds damn sweet!

Cheers sir!

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Nuclear-Fridge [2014-04-07 10:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful combination of story and image! It's turned out far better than I ever hoped for.

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Colourbrand In reply to Nuclear-Fridge [2014-04-07 17:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear sir - on both fronts

My pleasure

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Nuclear-Fridge In reply to Colourbrand [2014-04-09 10:00:53 +0000 UTC]

And on a related topic... You've solved a problem for me. I've long wanted to start painting some models for the Norns, but couldn't fix on a paint scheme. That mottle-camo effect on the tanks will be perfect!

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Colourbrand In reply to Nuclear-Fridge [2014-04-10 16:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I did not know and the end result is this eh?

See? Sometimes free reign can bring in ideas in more ways than one

Glad to be of service sir!

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ArdanBlade [2014-04-05 17:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Impressive! The tale and the picture weave together beautifully, creating an evocative image that can be imagined blow for blow, step for step. Even more impressively is how clean and flowing the whole thing is. There's no bumps, no questions as to why, it all makes the kind of simple sense that pulls you into a story and lets you forget that any other reality exists. In this tale, there is only the battle, and the picture brings it all to life.

Many is the time I have taught others to fear the power of the humble hovercraft. Their incredible turns of speed and lethal pack tactics have quite often put mechs to shame. Most people I've played against treat these light tanks as targets, not realizing the lethality that can be had. My favorite hovercraft attack of all time has to be my Davion Guards' Longarm Unit, which is made up of Savannah Masters carrying C3 Slaves, and a group of Artillery Vehicles tied to a Command Vehicle carrying C3. Few things were quite as satisfying as watching massive shells land on their heads when all they thought they were tangling with was Savannah Masters.

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Colourbrand In reply to ArdanBlade [2014-04-07 20:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Took me a time to take this in because its such a great statement!

This is a great comment because it sums up what I tried to evoke into this story; just because you are "better" and in the "daddy of all machines", does not mean you will win; knowing tactics, terrain, and experience can be such a decider.

I am glad that the story worked and brought the picture to more - huzzah! Job done !

As for what you said, I love the Savannah Master - one of BT's best ideas! And That is coming up in a pic soon

Thanks for the reminder, the comment, and the great support you always give sir Kudos!!

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dsherratt74 [2014-04-04 11:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice one. Just goes to show one should never under estimate the power of a group of ACVs.


Stupid Vat Born Falcon should have known better.  Serves her right.


On the art side of things. Lots of improvement here, the explosions look spot on and the composition is great, you've really captured the moment before the Black Lanner eats dirt.


Kudos sir.



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Colourbrand In reply to dsherratt74 [2014-04-04 13:12:57 +0000 UTC]

"Stupid Vat Born Falcon should have known better. Serves her right."

Any one else in mind Hmmmm? LOL!

I was thinking that when I did this - blimey lot of people must have it in for a lot of Clanners...

Thanks on that, I am getting the hang of mechs and vehicles better, and I wanted to make "the king of the Battlefield" look utterlly bollocks in this

Cheers for the compliments sir

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dsherratt74 In reply to Colourbrand [2014-04-04 21:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Nope. She's not that stupid. She's picked up some skills from her IS friends. Lol

Yeah lots of folks have it in for the descendants of the SLDF. Especially those who work for the phone company.

Your skills are coming along in spades this is by far one of the best you've done. Though I still prefer some of your earlier stuff but that's more a case of subject matter than artistic skill.

Great work again sir.

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Colourbrand In reply to dsherratt74 [2014-04-05 14:43:34 +0000 UTC]

One tries sir

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lordhadrian [2014-04-03 13:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Epic

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Colourbrand In reply to lordhadrian [2014-04-03 17:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sir

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lordhadrian In reply to Colourbrand [2014-04-03 17:19:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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fletcherc [2014-04-03 12:51:48 +0000 UTC]

Ah. Things that go Boom! I love things that go Boom!

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Colourbrand In reply to fletcherc [2014-04-03 17:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Ain't seen nothing yet my pet

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JohanssenJr [2014-04-03 09:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Good. Fucking clanners. This reminds me of how hard they'd piss and moan in TT matches when I'd just flood them with tanks, infantry, artillery, and air support.

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Colourbrand In reply to JohanssenJr [2014-04-03 17:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Hear HEAR!!

God bless the non-mechs!!!

Thank you kindly JohanssenJr!

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Raoz-Spaz [2014-04-02 21:20:58 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. That is all there is to say. The picture combined with the story is WONDERFUL. I personally am a tanker as I spoke with you and your group on several of your live streams and cunning and tactics is about all we have sometimes versus the much larger mechs. However, we can pull our own weight and this is a wonderful depiction of us doing just that. I love this so much and I hope I get to see more pictures with mini stories like this in the future. Nice job!

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Colourbrand In reply to Raoz-Spaz [2014-04-03 17:14:57 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Well sir I will work on such pics in the future - meantime check out the rest of the Battletech gallery here, especially "Mechbusted".

Think you'll love that

Cheers sir

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