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ColourCoated — Sunday Morning
Published: 2011-04-28 22:44:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 701; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 4
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Description Silence,
it is the wind tapping his nearby window.
I feel the rustle of the sheets,
warm body heat dancing on my thighs.
The alarm won't sound for another hour.
Risen sun,
late starts are our sunday ritual.
Roll back over,
enveloped in your scent.
Would be my favourite moment,
if not for the ones made before we fell asleep.
Gentle breathing,
we don't need to speak in raspy morning tones.
Naked, comfortable,
skin to skin never felt so routine.
If pillows could talk,
I know they'd say the dirtiest things.
Love is this and this is love.
Late starts are our sunday ritual.
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Comments: 11

NekoMarik [2012-10-15 22:58:04 +0000 UTC]

This has been featured here: [link] !
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Keep up the excellent artwork!

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ColourCoated In reply to NekoMarik [2012-10-16 21:08:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you kindly!!

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NekoMarik [2012-10-15 08:17:31 +0000 UTC]

This is just wonderful. Simple and powerful, like the moment you successfully illustrated.

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Mattipus [2011-07-01 11:48:09 +0000 UTC]

"If pillows could talk,
I know they'd say the dirtiest things."

That image... it's terribly powerful and revealing. I love coming across poems like this. Really great stuff.

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ColourCoated In reply to Mattipus [2011-07-01 18:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! I love coming accross comments like this, haha

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DailyLitDeviations [2011-06-30 08:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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pullingcandy [2011-06-25 16:43:08 +0000 UTC]

This is tender, touching, and somewhat nostalgic too, if that makes sense. I think everyone can relate to this in one way or another. Cute poem

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ColourCoated In reply to pullingcandy [2011-06-25 16:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you

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pullingcandy In reply to ColourCoated [2011-06-25 17:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome

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kallia-goldenwings [2011-05-23 18:13:11 +0000 UTC]

just beautiful

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ColourCoated In reply to kallia-goldenwings [2011-05-24 19:29:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you kindly

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