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Texas-Red-Wolf [2016-04-14 01:43:13 +0000 UTC]
*looking down at you*that story might be older than you and I. My little fox friend and may I say that we sty unx (Vixden for Sky Fox) also have a very story that is older than the both of us and it goes: Ages ago two mated sty unx live in the mountains far to the east. these sty unx were good mates to one another as all mated couples, but like all mated couples go through good and bad days. on one cold day after the couple mated with each other. They had one such bad day and after a day of arguing the female drove her mate out of the den for reasons unknown. Her mate went off hunting with the couple's eldest daughter who's fur coat matches that of a swift fox. They were gone for three days and nights with on the dawn of the fourth day the eldest daughter comes limping into the den with her mate not in sight, and the eldest daughter herself all beaten up with the fur of her left front leg painted red with blood. when she asked her daughter where her mate was. The eldest daughter answered with an uneasy tone that she didn't know. Because that were separated when a great grizzly bear attacked them and severely injured her left leg, which the eldest daughter spent the next three days healing. After the hearing, the news of her missing mate. She and the pack went out to find him; except for her eldest daughter who is still nursing her wound as well as her mate to her company. Five dawns they left the den... Five dust's they came back empty winged. Until they found what's left his mangled body at the bottom of a valley with his left wing ripped off of his body. she grieved for him ever day untie her death when she gave birth to her and her mate's last letter of kits.
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Cajek [2010-03-07 03:38:32 +0000 UTC]
God d*mn that's a lovely story.
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ComradeK In reply to Cajek [2010-03-07 03:43:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot, though I guess I don't feel it's my best...
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Cajek In reply to ComradeK [2010-03-07 03:49:48 +0000 UTC]
It's got a very interesting backstory, sympathetic characters, powerful emotions and a simple message. Excellent job, why didn't I think of this?
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ComradeK In reply to Cajek [2010-03-07 03:54:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I usually hate to do this, but since my writing don't seem to get much attention I'll ask: have you read my other story? [link]
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Cajek In reply to Cajek [2010-03-07 03:42:46 +0000 UTC]
AND that means he waited for her! HE STILL LOVED HER! AAAHHH!
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mookameedy [2010-01-24 03:13:53 +0000 UTC]
Thats a lovely piece.^^ I love how you used the pencils, no one really uses them. I think rhey are an amazing tool.
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ComradeK In reply to mookameedy [2010-01-24 03:19:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I've tried them once more, but usually they come as an afterthought. I should really plan out a picture where I intend to use them from the start. I should get better results that way.
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ariastrife [2009-09-12 05:42:32 +0000 UTC]
So sad but beautiful. I love the shading on the snow and the vixen's breath!
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javsthemute [2009-09-10 12:23:07 +0000 UTC]
You mighta gone a little thick on the penciling and a little thin on the brushing, too. In my experience with those things, the water spreads them out pretty well. Besides, watercolor is meant to be subtle anyway.
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ComradeK In reply to javsthemute [2009-09-10 20:07:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. I lost a lot of detail with the paint because of the size of the whole picture, so the pencil was all I could really use. I need to find some large paper or canvas to try this stuff on. And some actual paints.
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