Comments: 32
dxm2000 [2017-03-19 17:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
Despite being fairly unfamiliar with the series, your drawing reads well enough that I am instantly able to get a feel for what's happening. Your shading and anatomy look great, and your fabrics read as fabrics.
Your out of focus elements are in general well done, as well. The blur on the foreground grass means the eye flows by, not getting caught, but still registering it, the tree has just the right amount of detail, and most of the clouds look the right kind of fluffy. The only thing that stands out negatively amongst these elements is the most detailed cloud. Based on the amount of detail, it reads as the closest cloud. but based on it's size and position, it does not. The yellowing and lower amount of detail on the bottom also gives a "muddy" feel to the cloud. I'd advise lowering the shading detail on the upper part of that cloud just a touch so it more matches the others and doesn't stand out so much.
The most troubling elements are the posing and composition. While Aqua, and Satou read as running away, the other two do not. The witch sort of reads as semi-relaxedly floating while using Satou as a buoy, stretching her arms so it looks like she is being dragged or altering her facial expression a little should fix that. The swordswoman looks undecided however, with the way she is posed, she can read as either turning to face her foes, or running away, and as such, doesn't really read as either. I'm not sure what would fix this, but I'd advise giving her upper body a stronger turn, to give her movement a decisive direction, showing her lower legs a bit more so we can see if they are placed resolutely or rising to run, or adding a bit more fear or determination so her expression tells the story by itself.
Meanwhile, with the composition, I love your choice to angle the picture, as it adds to the sense of motion, but it is just a little strong, and I feel inclined to tilt my head, rather than look at it as is, and when I do the "human" character look to have ever so slightly too much negative space between them and it stands out how centred Satou is. Coincidentally, fixing one of those problems should fix the other.
Overall, a great piece, with lots of good elements. A few may be dragging it down, but it still shows off a good amount of skill and would've been enough to draw me to your gallery, were I not already watching your work.
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SchattenLotus [2020-04-20 15:32:55 +0000 UTC]
Megumin = Drained and useless for the Rest of the Day,
Aqua = Useless anyway and losing her Cool, as always,
Kazuma = In Panic because of this oversized Enemies,
Darkness = ... ... ... ... ... getting off on it!
Sometimes you wonder how this Party manages to survive it's Quests. Oh, wait - Kazuma doesn't, sometimes
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GalaxMind [2020-02-06 18:05:24 +0000 UTC]
Imagine if Kermit The Frog was one of the frogs XD
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salyssong [2018-02-01 23:58:41 +0000 UTC]
Aqua is probably suffering from frog induced PTSD by now.
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SonicPL2012 [2018-01-21 20:53:18 +0000 UTC]
That feeling when you know that Darkness wants to be eaten by the toad ans be covered n mucus xD
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codebluev2 [2017-04-23 05:34:30 +0000 UTC]
RUUUUUUUNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!! ah that scene always cracks me up so hard!! Well done, man.
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Azagwen [2017-03-27 17:37:35 +0000 UTC]
I discovered this anime because of your artwork ' u'
thanks ! (loved it)
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CoolBoysEnt In reply to Azagwen [2017-03-27 17:46:26 +0000 UTC]
hehe you're welcome. glad you enjoy it ^^,
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Azagwen In reply to CoolBoysEnt [2017-03-27 20:16:38 +0000 UTC]
It remember me the first episodes when Kazuma wen to chase giant frog with Aqua, and she ends up in the frog's mouth x)
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Hellsender [2017-03-21 15:14:58 +0000 UTC]
This is somehow Aqua's fault, I'm sure of it.
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weegeeguy01 [2017-03-20 04:03:23 +0000 UTC]
I want to know the context of this.
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weegeeguy01 In reply to CoolBoysEnt [2017-03-24 00:33:26 +0000 UTC]
Alright, I'll definitely check it out.
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burstlion [2017-03-19 13:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha ha, oh man this art is so fun! I have no idea what this is, but I might look it up. Great work!
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Ghoza-kun [2017-03-19 11:40:26 +0000 UTC]
Nice illustration... XD
good expression....
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Nora-the-Fox-Boy [2017-03-19 09:10:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh hells yeah! Konosuba! XD
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