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Published: 2011-07-05 02:29:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1409; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 15
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After getting bit in the nose, Buizel would quickly recover and, literally, grab Totodile. He would hold him long enough to throw him onto the fairly shallow water's floor, and dragging along the sand with a large amount of ocean grass (seaweed) behind. He then basically yelled at Totodile, wondering why he attacked. Then, the saw the mark on him...Related content
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But, um..
I see only few things that need to be corrected.
First of all, the shading is incorrect, and I think it would look a bit better with lighting to.
Also, that big black line sticking out of buizels paw shouldent be there, and the grass shouldent be as fat, it should be smooth lineless blades. And Totadiles back tooth dosent belong there. It needs to be more closer to the front tooth.
Now exuse me as I fill in the empty space. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Just edited it. Is it better now?
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Thanks.
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Awesome picture, your a great artist!
This is my new fav pic!
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It's the least I can do man
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BTW, who do you think deserves Manahpy?
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Who? As in trainer or pokemon?
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Pokemon. Buizel or Totodile?
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nice work big bro is this the one you were talking about
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Do you see Swellow here?!
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Then this isn't the one I was talking about. That's coming shortly.
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