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Published: 2010-07-08 00:30:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1562; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 26
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Description Download for full view. My only two canine OCs, Mbala and Kacia, needed new designs and ref sheets, so I decided to combine them.

Story:
Kacia was only a month old when her mother was killed by lions. The pup had been learning how to hunt, so she was able to feed herself for several weeks, but survival was not easy. She was constantly at the mercy of bigger predators. She had to learn to be tough, but also learn when to back down.

Mbala, as the daughter of her pack's matriarch and the only surviving pup of the litter, would have been spoiled were it not for the high expectations and rigorous training she underwent to prepare her to be the alpha of her own pack one day. From an early age she learned to conceal her emotions, appearing strong and silent, so as to intimidate any would-be challengers.

One day, when Mbala was nearly two months old, her mother sent her on a lone hunt to test her survival skills. That was when she met Kacia. The two pups were understandably wary of each other at first, but after a great deal of talk, and more than a little fighting, they began to understand each other. Mbala felt sympathy towards Kacia, and decided to help her by sneaking food from her own pack's kills. This went on for a few days before the two were discovered. Mbala pleaded with her mother to let Kacia become a member of their pack. The alpha eventually yielded, admitting the young outsider.

For all that Mbala was her friend, Kacia was never fully accepted by the pack. Some of her scars had been earned when she was forced to survive on her own, but most, including the notches in her ears, came from the vicious nips of Mbala's pack mates whenever they felt Kacia had forgotten her place. Kacia held firm, though, patiently allowing herself to be subjugated.

All the while Mbala was falling in love with her new friend. She was looking forward to the day when she'd leave to form her own pack with Kacia by her side. But when Mbala was just over two years old, the pack was hunting wildebeest when suddenly everything went wrong. A small group of dogs was separated from the rest of the pack and surrounded by angry wildebeest. Most of the dogs were killed, including the alpha male and the second highest ranking female. Mbala's mother risked her life by running headlong into the herd to try to retrieve her pack mates, but she herself was mortally wounded and died within a few hours.

Now the pack was dwindling, and lacking most of its high ranking members. Mbala, grieving for her mother, was convinced it was her responsibility to take her mother's place as alpha female. By this time, Kacia had begun to return Mbala's feelings toward her, but since the pack still didn't fully accept Kacia, her status could not be raised by becoming the mate of an alpha. Knowing Mbala needed her, though, Kacia decided to stay. But every day she is torn. Part of her wants to be free of the tyranny of the pack, but day by day she grows more attached to Mbala.

Like my story? I feel like eventually I'll write more detailed accounts of how Kacia and Mbala met, and their life together.

Mbala and Kacia are © Adrienne McKay
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Comments: 29

MattsyKun [2013-02-08 06:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Lesbian canines?

I am very okay with this! It's adorable

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CravenLunatic In reply to MattsyKun [2013-02-11 22:22:05 +0000 UTC]

lol, thank you.

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RavenTail-Mustang [2010-12-02 22:17:14 +0000 UTC]

they are so cutE!

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CravenLunatic In reply to RavenTail-Mustang [2010-12-03 02:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^^

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RavenTail-Mustang In reply to CravenLunatic [2010-12-03 12:39:27 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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Aiko-Akita [2010-08-01 00:34:45 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful <3

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CravenLunatic In reply to Aiko-Akita [2010-08-01 02:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Aiko-Akita In reply to CravenLunatic [2010-08-01 02:05:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem :3

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Rontarija [2010-07-15 09:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Beautiful! which grafic program are you using?

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CravenLunatic In reply to Rontarija [2010-07-15 16:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Photoshop CS4.

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Anixsia [2010-07-12 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]

I love this :3

The story was heart-wrenching; it sounds like something I would definately pick up while at Borders! :]
And the art is awesome. Can't wait to read/see more!

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CravenLunatic In reply to Anixsia [2010-07-12 23:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. If only I could sell it, lol. XD

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Dark-Hyena [2010-07-12 10:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant! A golden jackal character!

I love how you've made Kacia into a majestic, rather than scrawny animal, as most artists depict jackals as

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CravenLunatic In reply to Dark-Hyena [2010-07-12 18:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^ I was almost going to change her to a side-striped jackal, but decided to keep her the same species. I had to make her a little scrawny, for the sake of her story, but in a tough, lean sort of way. XD

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Servaline [2010-07-12 02:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I really love your characters, their design and their anatomy, great work!

I especially love that you chose natural colours and markings, and canines that aren't overused ^.^

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CravenLunatic In reply to Servaline [2010-07-12 02:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I like to keep all my characters looking at least a little bit realistic.

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Servaline In reply to CravenLunatic [2010-07-12 03:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Realistic wildlife ftw

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lunagriff [2010-07-08 08:40:04 +0000 UTC]

oooooh!! Mbala is very pretty!
are the canines both female?

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CravenLunatic In reply to lunagriff [2010-07-08 18:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Yes they are. Animal lesbian romance is one of my specialties when it comes to art.

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lunagriff In reply to CravenLunatic [2010-07-08 22:31:35 +0000 UTC]

hehee, i thought they were both female but i had to make sure.

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AcidicAbsinthe [2010-07-08 03:01:36 +0000 UTC]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WILD DOG<33333

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CravenLunatic In reply to AcidicAbsinthe [2010-07-08 04:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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icebluemusic [2010-07-08 02:47:15 +0000 UTC]

These are fantastic! I wantz moar!!

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CravenLunatic In reply to icebluemusic [2010-07-08 04:36:14 +0000 UTC]

You cannot has moar.

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icebluemusic In reply to CravenLunatic [2010-07-08 05:02:46 +0000 UTC]



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CravenLunatic In reply to icebluemusic [2010-07-08 05:07:44 +0000 UTC]

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OrcaOwl [2010-07-08 00:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I love their designs

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CravenLunatic In reply to OrcaOwl [2010-07-08 00:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^^

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OrcaOwl In reply to CravenLunatic [2010-07-08 00:50:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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