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CrazyMadHatterXP — N_WIP:alice human sacrifice
Published: 2012-01-05 00:31:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1220; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 15
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poll for what vocaloid themed song for my oc's and it was alice human sacrafice~pfft was actually pretty quick but it was hard picking which is which XD lol inking later~~ tell me wat you think so far ;D i know its pretty messy but "kaito" took the longest time to do XD lol
sorry the "twins" couldnt really fit and i didnt want to overlap "kaito" so they only have a small part orz sorry...^^"
ummm.... pretty messy since its a sketch and all... sorry if you cant see all the details XD lol will scrap later...
pfft the "miku" in this looks like "slurp* slurp* delicious wolf boy
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I think that this will look great after inking, in a more final form, (this looks really rough right now) and I love all of the things that are going on in the picture and am familiar with the vocaloid song Alice Human Sacrifice. That being said, you need to work a bit on your anatomy. This is particularly evident in the long arm on the figure running to the left and the short elbow in the larger figure to the right. I rate you down for originality and technique because this piece is fanart and it is in desperate need of polishing.
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N:yep ^^ hehe thank you ^^ yeah i got that, but unfortunaly i couldnt fix my drawing after u critiqued it ;U; cuz you see i already inked it and colored it (mostly) now that you mention it your correct, but i didnt know how to fix the arm until you told me ^^" sorry. thank you for the generous and well thought critique.^^ and if you please, can you look at the final draft of the art and tell me what i need to work on? its fine if you dont ^^ again thank you for the critique!! ^^
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N: thank you ^^ ill finish it soon XD
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This is looking really awesome! The anatomy is a tad off, but not by much. I love the composition and the interaction between the two main characters. It really shows their personality and the way they interact. Love it!
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N:thanks a bunch ^^ do you mind telling me where the anatomy is off? hehe thank you very much 
(sorry i dont see what you mean by the interaction XD i did did that completely by accident actually XD sorry !!) thank you again for the helpful critique and nice complements ^^
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You're welcome. By interaction, I just mean how the whole scene fits together. In the anatomy, the faces just look a bit flat. I'd study how the nose and eyes look at different face angles.
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N: o well thank you! that really means a lot ^^// right ill try and fix that problem thanks for the tip ^^
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You're welcome~ ^^
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