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Crazywolfs — Tokotas- I will bring you down no matter what

Published: 2015-08-16 21:24:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Link to (hunting/fishing/exploring) journal: Tokotas Tracker journal
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Story: remember I'm don't have English as my main language and my grammar is really poor because of dyslexia   

The Tokota was trying to hold a distant from the open field where the game was gathering for meal and mates. He was waiting on a special pray, a grate moose. He know it was dangers to hunt such a best by himself but he was determent to bring one or three down. He saw a moose entering the field but soon lay down again. He could not take that one it was old, experienced and covered in scars from wolves, mountain lions and other tokotas who had not succeed to take the giant down. The old moose also noted the tokota who was hiding in the bushes. He did not want to waste any energy on a pray who would get away so he kept on waiting. The time went by, different animals comes and went.

A sound form a stick barking awoken the tokotas interest and it began to hope for a moose. The tokota hid itself in the high golden grass. Out of the forest end a clumsy young moose, come out with out even checking if any predators was watching it the young animal began to eat. The Tokota took the opportunity to get a little closer to the pray, he now was only six meter away form the moose.

The tokota went for it attack, but the moose may be young and inexperienced but it had a lot of energy the tokota had to be careful not to use to much energy on the chase but not to little so the moose could get away.

The hunt went on for almost a half hour, over filed and in to forest and out to another filed. The tokota was running beside the moose. The tokota could see a rock that would stand in its way.  If he slowed down the tokota would lose the moose or he had to use extra energy for catching up it again something he did not want to go thru. He took his chance and jumped in to the air! The tokota locked its sigh on the moose’s throat. There was no rom for failure. He had to take it down now when it was tired after the chase. The tokota’s teeth griped the throat of the moose and dragged it down. The young animal panicked and tried to get away but it was only making it worse. than the young animal stopped moving. The hunt went well.

word count: 407 +2HP

HP earning= Hunt+HP fullbody+shading+3HP complex background+2HP non commission+ 1HP story on 400words +2HP= 10HP 

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FemkeD [2015-08-16 22:06:30 +0000 UTC]

wow so awesome !! you have lots of talent !!! if you have some time would tou like to chek out my art ? that would mean alot to me ^^ <3

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Crazywolfs In reply to FemkeD [2015-08-16 22:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^ u ^ 
You also got alot of talent > u < And you have much more watcher than i have Keep the good work up > u <)9

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