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createdbyfear — To the Ground by-nc-nd
Published: 2011-05-23 06:54:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description Screaming, she slammed her fist against the wall.
The blood trickled down her wrist;
her feet started to swim in pools of red.
But she didn't care.
She felt her head crash into something rock-hard,
just above her fist.
The blood wasn't the only thing that started rolling down her face.
The tears accompanied it.
She tasted it in her mouth;
the salt,
combined with the taste of pain.

Gasping,
she forced herself to look over at her mirror.
All she could see was deformity.
She looked as deeply as she could into that reflective surface.
But really, it was only a surface.
A surface showing what was inside of her.
A demon?
No.
Not even close.
The devil?
Perhaps.
If that's how you would describe
the part of her that laughed at the pain of others.
The part of her that enjoyed listening to their shrieking voices;
that delighted in watching them curl up on the ground,
as they whimpered in pain.

She screamed again,
throwing her shoe at the mirror.
Shiny shards of it flew everywhere,
seemingly destroying all trace of her sadistic traits.
Yet she still felt it inside,
trying to consume her.

As a last resort,
She took the pocket knife lying on her desk.
And the other part of her laughed,
As she fell to the ground.
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Comments: 11

Lakkus [2011-10-19 01:23:01 +0000 UTC]

The last part really got to me. This is amaaaaaaaazing. Has anyone told you that yet? <3

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createdbyfear In reply to Lakkus [2011-10-20 01:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you so much! It means a lot to me!
Also, thanks for the fave! <3

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Lakkus In reply to createdbyfear [2011-10-20 03:40:04 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Maleah-Yuki [2011-06-27 04:35:57 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed reading this!! I can sense a lot of emotion in it and it reminds me of myself when I used to feel like this sometimes in my life!! I loved it, you are very talented!! You did good!! I hope to read more of your poems!!

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createdbyfear In reply to Maleah-Yuki [2011-06-28 01:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! It means a lot to me :3

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Maleah-Yuki In reply to createdbyfear [2011-06-29 02:06:54 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha I'm happy it does and I hope you continue to write!! your very good at it!! You should be proud!!

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Glaceonlove [2011-05-24 22:06:05 +0000 UTC]

THIS...IS SOOOOOO GOOD! i love it!

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createdbyfear In reply to Glaceonlove [2011-05-25 01:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!!! ^O^

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Glaceonlove In reply to createdbyfear [2011-05-25 11:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!!!! >%u2022<

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ReminiscenceSaga [2011-05-24 03:16:52 +0000 UTC]

WOW!! I love it!

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createdbyfear In reply to ReminiscenceSaga [2011-05-24 03:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Yayy!
I would say thanks for loving it, but that's like...Weird O_O
But I'll say thanks for the fave & the watch!!! ^O^

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