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KnightxShield [2014-05-04 01:29:51 +0000 UTC]
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Time for another critique, C2B XD
Alright, so there's not a whole lot I can say that won't mirror what Cacah05 has already said as far as the colors and the impact go.
What I can say is that I really enjoy the attention to detail in Sasuke's Mangekyou Sharingan. For the sheer size of the image itself with the relatively small aspect of his eyes, you hit the nail on the head with the detail for the Mangekyou.
I really like the way you took Kishimoto's style as reference but still managed to make your own style with what you had. That's a very nice touch.
Proportions are spot on, which I really enjoy seeing. Everything looks like it would be put in the anime as well ^^
The snake is a very nice touch, as is Susano'o. Naruto using a snake ability the way Sasuke did during the fight with Itachi is definitely something to imagine. If it wasn't for the fact that ALL Sharingan are red, it'd be cool to have Sasuke's Mangekyou a blue color to match the Susano'o ^^
I like the Curse Mark on Naruto's shoulder as well. While only half of it is actually visible, you can easily make out the tomoe associated with it (I believe it's the Earth Curse Mark, but it's been a while since I read about the difference between the Heaven and Earth Curse Marks that Orochimaru planted on his "vessels").
The color palette is also very pleasing, with Naruto's Kyuubi chakra burning red and Sasuke's Susano'o glowing blue. One thing I might suggest is having a blending area for where they overlap in the piece; have it transition between red, purple (probably a deep purple) and blue as it shifts from left to right.
And finally, I have to repeat what Cacah05 said about what the message actually means. True Naruto fans respect and read into what Naruto meant by that when he and Sasuke fought at the samurai bridge. It means a LOT to have to tell your best friend who betrayed you that it could have easily been the other way around. It also shows how much Naruto actually cares about Sasuke; remember that Sasuke is like a brother to Naruto.
Anyway, that's all I've got right now. I know it's been a while since this was submitted, but I saw it and had to critique it ^^'
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KnightxShield In reply to Creative2Bit [2014-05-04 15:19:48 +0000 UTC]
Attention to detail is something I can easily spot when I study something and need to think about it ^^
Again, just a slight shift between red, purple, and blue as the visible chakras overlap would make it a bit better ^^
And I would LOVE to see Sasuke's Mangekyou be blue in this piece if only to match the colors on his half of the image XD
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Creative2Bit In reply to Cacah05 [2013-11-07 17:26:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your amazing critique, it made me really happy^^.
Knowing that there is someone out there who understands this picture xD
And i think this is an amazing critique since its your first one ^^
Once again Thank you ^^
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Whovian4Life69 [2015-02-05 08:00:41 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing I love it
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Convenient-Alias [2015-01-21 20:49:36 +0000 UTC]
I like how their eyes look the same, despite the contrasting background colors. Sasuke and Naruto are still alike in many ways despite their differences.
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Creative2Bit In reply to Convenient-Alias [2015-02-15 00:42:17 +0000 UTC]
yep thats so true. I think thats why Naruto cares so much about Sasuke
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NineTailedFox2 [2014-11-24 20:54:22 +0000 UTC]
Naruto with the Snake/dragon sage mode...DAYUUUUM
The story would have an interesting twist if this happenned, I mean, for the first time, the Asura reincarnation would be the "bad" one, and likewise, the Indra reincarnation would be the first "good" one.
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xxReshiramxx [2014-08-04 02:16:28 +0000 UTC]
I love how you have the snake around Naruto to represent him as Sasuke. It would have been intresting to see what there life would have been like if there roles were reversed. I would however liked to have seen Kyuubi in the background of the Sasuke picture. Well done on this peace.
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Gamer5444 [2014-06-08 08:41:14 +0000 UTC]
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EvermoreJK [2014-05-13 00:17:50 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work β₯
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NamiKuwata [2014-04-12 21:46:58 +0000 UTC]
I love this picture. Also, I love the colors that were used in this art work.
For some reason, I can notΒ imagine Sasuke being the "hero."
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CaptainMisuzu [2014-02-27 15:49:19 +0000 UTC]
That coloring is just stunning ! it's eyes catching a lot ! This blue and orange is just wonderful even if the mixed was not easy at the base. Love the glowing effect too <3
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CaliburofRoses [2014-01-23 22:20:09 +0000 UTC]
Maybe reversed but extremely similar to the original path. That would be interesting to see though.
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L-MASTER [2013-12-27 19:32:19 +0000 UTC]
extreme
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Aodoragon [2013-12-16 16:40:10 +0000 UTC]
awesome!
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TrainerNavy [2013-11-21 01:11:12 +0000 UTC]
hummm its cool naruto still would be my favorite character
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BakuBlader [2013-11-06 18:45:02 +0000 UTC]
This is super cool, I think I would have loved to see that
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allex82 [2013-10-31 18:52:38 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful
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allex82 In reply to Creative2Bit [2013-10-31 20:16:35 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!Β I also thank
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CaptainPocky [2013-10-24 03:52:44 +0000 UTC]
wow! beautiful colours and linework! love it ^^
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