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Published: 2009-08-19 01:09:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3179; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 7
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this was a labor love cause i didnt really no just what the heck i was doing. its been a while since i used photoshop for coloring and i guess i was just testing the waters.its all in an effort to get my skillz back to par
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Wow, this is actually better than a ot of stuff you see here on deviant art. If any of my comments are offensive I beg your forgiveness
Colors:
Wonderful job in color selection, There is no one color that really dominate the whole scene. In addition ot that the colors you do use stand out well against the others so it's not wishy washy anywhere. However, you are incredibly sparing on the shadows and like wise with you sin tones and reflected light. Don't be affaid to blend colors, especially when it comes to skin.
Placement:
- I'm not quite exactly sure what you wanted the viewer to focus on in this picture but as of the moment...the center of attention is on her chest. If that was your intention then the placement is fine as it is, but if you wanted to focus on her face, then I would either move her a little to the right, or else simply zoom out a bit.
porportion:
For the most part your proprtions are very goodthe only thign is, on her visible hand, that thumb looks a tad too bigand her legs are waist is very small in comparision to her body, but I'm being nit picky.
Computer graphics:
Kind of sharp actually and the lines don't really flow,,, but then I can hardly get them to do that half the time so I really have no room to complain.
Over all a pretty decent peice of work.
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Wow! I've been critiqued and it was pretty much a fair one at that. everything you mentioned is dead-on. i'm working on perspective and hands a lot more, so hoepfully the next one wont be as misplaced. coloring i hope to try again very soon to grade my training and such
overall thanx man. feedback is greatly appreciated and helps me to see things from outside my own box of friends.
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No no, it was a good picture
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