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CrossOutBryce — Submerged: A Sapphire Nuzlocke - Chapter 3

Published: 2014-06-04 21:58:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1844; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 1
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HAVE I WON THE AWARD FOR WORLD'S SLOWEST ARTIST YET?? Six months. Six long, ridiculous months. 

Sorry for those who waited. I would make plans to finish this, but something would always go LOLNOPE. (Whether it was school, sports, tests, me getting sick, family members getting sick...)

First, this chapter has my first round of cameos! Try and find them! Here's who they belong to.

                       
(Apologies to  and , I will fit your characters into a later update)

Anyways, this update is a game changer with THE FIRST GYM BATTLE WOOOO and some of you guys may be asking, well what happened in-game. I GOT CHU. I GOT CHU. Let's take a look:

-Grinding in Petalburg Woods and spammage of Newt's new move, Absorb.
-Like an idiot, I skip healing at the pokecenter.
-Newt uses Absorb on Rustboro's grunts no prob.
- Roxanne sends out her Geodudes.
-Newt takes care of the Geodudes, even with Roxanne healing em'.
-Second Geodude lands a hit, Newt is still in the green.
-FLIPPING NOSEPASS is sent in by Roxanne, Newt uses Absorb, Nosepass in the red.
-Roxanne uses a potion and Nosepass uses Rock Tomb, sending Newt into the red with a Critical Hit.
-Switch to Nuki BECAUSE NEWT HAS NO MORE PP FOR ABSORB.
- I realize I HAVE NO POTIONS. (GDI BRYCE)
-Nuki sent into yellow by a couple Nosepass hits.
-Nuki uses Growl and Headbutt.
- Nosepass lands ANOTHER Critical Hit (WHAT) and and Nuki's OHKO'd by Rock Tomb.
-Switch to Newt (who's in the red) using quick attack to win the battle.

Tldr? I made stupid choices during the in-game gym battle.


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Next:  Chapter 4

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ANYWAHT. Thanks for waiting, for those who did. I really appreciate it. Let's start this summer off with the fabled "monthly update schedule!" 

Submerged (c)   and I
Art (c) Me
With thanks to for the beautiful color panel and for forcing me to finally do the black border (I havent experienced a worse hell)

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Comments: 67

Walory [2014-10-09 18:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Such a tragic death... Sigh. RIP Nuki. I already liked her...

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Arlette-Hughes [2014-07-15 22:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Just found the comic today, and it looks really promising, hon! Poor Nuki though, Ziggies are the best. ;A;

Just a suggestion, and you've already improved on this, but sometimes your Textbubbles and comic boxes flow a bit strangely. Like, my eyes want to go to the panel on the left, but you intend for my eyes to go down. It's a bit of unsolicited advice, sorry, hope thats alright.

I really can't wait to see more from you, and good luck on your adventure! 'v'

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CrossOutBryce In reply to Arlette-Hughes [2014-07-15 23:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Really appreciate the feedback. I'll try and work on that!

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PatchVVork [2014-06-12 22:41:59 +0000 UTC]

First gym, first loss :C Stupid choices in-game, I do believe every Nuzlocker has to go thought that (I once had the great idea to throw my Geodude against  a Machope THAT DIDN'T END WELL)
Nice page, as per usual ~

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CrossOutBryce In reply to PatchVVork [2014-06-12 23:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, sorry to hear about that. Thanks though!

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marsu305 [2014-06-10 19:05:48 +0000 UTC]

hOLY SHIT YOU CAMEO'D ME NOBODY HAS CAMEO'D ME BEFORE THANK YOU BRO LET ME CAMEO YOU BACK
HHHHHHHH
ok but in all seriousness, this is a really great page and I'm going to read the rest of your nuzlocke for sure now C:

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CrossOutBryce In reply to marsu305 [2014-06-10 20:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, thanks man! I actually plan to go and read yours because the page I referenced (Page 6) had me cracking up.

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marsu305 In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-12 10:30:36 +0000 UTC]

OH lol thanks a lot! always good to hear that ;D
And you're welcome of course!

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AnantJdawg [2014-06-06 20:45:55 +0000 UTC]

I love the message about family in your chapter, it touched my heart. I also loved how the person at the end laughed with everyone although that person was dead. I also think that bunny is bad ass.

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CrossOutBryce In reply to AnantJdawg [2014-06-06 23:36:26 +0000 UTC]

1. what bunny?
2. WHO LAUGHED?!
3. Why you trollin' anant.

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AnantJdawg In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-10 00:40:57 +0000 UTC]

i love u bryce <3<3<3

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BlueBook08 [2014-06-06 02:44:12 +0000 UTC]

I LOVED the color scene. So dramatic. I shed a single tear. Glad you're back in the swing of drawing! 

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AnantJdawg In reply to BlueBook08 [2014-06-06 02:45:25 +0000 UTC]

no it isnt jess. its a piece of ugly shit, just like yourself

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BlueBook08 In reply to AnantJdawg [2014-06-06 02:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Shots fired.

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AnantJdawg In reply to BlueBook08 [2014-06-06 02:56:36 +0000 UTC]

correction: bomb exploded.

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AnantJdawg In reply to AnantJdawg [2014-06-06 02:45:56 +0000 UTC]

when i reread that it seem harsh XP lol jk. I and We love you blue book *cough* english girl*cough*

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AnantJdawg In reply to AnantJdawg [2014-06-06 02:47:58 +0000 UTC]

also bryce, its beautiful

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PkBlitz [2014-06-05 15:48:04 +0000 UTC]

First badge and first loss... Damn son, great battle tho. I really like the way you manage them.

Also, Pokémon: Cameos: the movie: the videogame: the challenge: the comic: the page.

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CrossOutBryce In reply to PkBlitz [2014-06-06 01:50:46 +0000 UTC]

...YES. My nuzlocke in a nutshell lmao

and thanks, had to at least TRY and make Roxanne and her fight interesting haha

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ZuesKillerProduction [2014-06-05 11:52:07 +0000 UTC]

Either Lucas is in Biology, or he decided to get some "1st hand experience" as to how to do pokemon battles. STOP BEING HIGH!

Yeesh, that was a dumb move. But it's always hindsight that seems to give out the best thoughts.

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CrossOutBryce In reply to ZuesKillerProduction [2014-06-05 13:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Hm? Does your character usually not get out much? I'm a bit confused.

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ZuesKillerProduction In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 14:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Actually it's quite the opposite: he's a nature person.

That being said, watching your mother die, your twin brother kill himself right in front of you, and watching you're only known world blow up can do strange things to a person.

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CrossOutBryce In reply to ZuesKillerProduction [2014-06-06 01:53:49 +0000 UTC]

lol lets just say this is the alternate universe where nothing went wrong for Lucas? Yeah seems like a legit excuse.

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ZuesKillerProduction In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-06 12:44:47 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking more like "Mother 3 happned, but thanks to having some of the writers of the Mother series, Lucas ended up in pokemon" angle. The only people to remember SSB are the participants, and it applys to the other ones as well...sort of.

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TheBookwormMaddy [2014-06-05 08:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Wooo! Cameo!!!!!!!!! Nice page :3

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CrossOutBryce In reply to TheBookwormMaddy [2014-06-05 13:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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czmAvery [2014-06-05 04:01:39 +0000 UTC]

AHHHH PAIN

PAIN EVERYWHERE

Also OMG I DIDN'T THINK YOU'D ACTUALLY DO IT 
Cuz I've applied for tons of cameos and nobody's ever done it!! 8D

This makes me so happy and sad I could cry

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CrossOutBryce In reply to czmAvery [2014-06-05 04:17:48 +0000 UTC]

IM SO SORRY SHOULD I PUT A FEELS WARNING

and of course I'd do it! even though they were hard as hell yours wasnt tho and i think it turned out good I'm glad I could make ya happy with it.

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czmAvery In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 05:18:53 +0000 UTC]

XD Trade a cameo for another?

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CrossOutBryce In reply to czmAvery [2014-06-05 05:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Hm? What do you mean?

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czmAvery In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 09:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Like I cameo your character in mine now. 

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CrossOutBryce In reply to czmAvery [2014-06-05 13:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh sure, that'd be great!

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czmAvery In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 14:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Yey! I won't be having a lot of cameos since I have to code the characters in, so anything specific you want done?

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CrossOutBryce In reply to czmAvery [2014-06-06 01:52:46 +0000 UTC]

wait, code the characters, what do you mean?

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czmAvery In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-06 03:14:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm using a program so, instead of using a comic, I have a choose your own ending visual novel thingy.

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CrossOutBryce In reply to czmAvery [2014-06-06 16:42:02 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty awesome, I'll send you a note about the cameo.

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Velink [2014-06-05 01:44:58 +0000 UTC]

OOOH soo many cameos!!
hahaha I love how he enjoys the city XD

dude when Newt is using absorb, it is almost as if it is using ninja technique!
it is awesome

lastly i think a tone down in BG would make the focus of the panel clearer!

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CrossOutBryce In reply to Velink [2014-06-05 02:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Yep, you're completely right about the BG, I'll work on that. Thank you!

And the ninja technique thing I only noticed after I had drawn it twice. But now...I think that makes it even cooler.

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Velink In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 04:07:57 +0000 UTC]

hahahah awesome
bu I am curious what did you have in mind when you first drew it?

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CrossOutBryce In reply to Velink [2014-06-05 04:12:57 +0000 UTC]

lol something around the lines of Edward Elric (from FMA) transmuting alchemy.

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Velink In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 04:25:12 +0000 UTC]

oooh!
oh yeah that too

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CrossOutBryce In reply to Velink [2014-06-05 04:34:19 +0000 UTC]

lol why did FMAB turn into

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Tinderwalls [2014-06-05 01:24:08 +0000 UTC]

i love the downward shot of the battlefield, nice variety of "camera" angles!

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CrossOutBryce In reply to Tinderwalls [2014-06-05 02:51:32 +0000 UTC]

You don't even know, I constantly struggled and had to ask people "How does one perspective?"

And then I'd get an odd look or two. XP

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Tinderwalls In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 16:56:20 +0000 UTC]

haha, well you get it down in the end

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ReshiDaVanci [2014-06-05 01:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap noooooooooo!!!!!! Nukiiiii!!! Q AQ

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CrossOutBryce In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2014-06-05 02:53:15 +0000 UTC]

T___T

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faeriety [2014-06-05 00:53:31 +0000 UTC]

I feel so special my icon is in there twice haHA

Great page!! So much is happening ahhh it's so intense! Poor Nuki ;w; 

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CrossOutBryce In reply to faeriety [2014-06-05 02:50:01 +0000 UTC]

lol oops...

Yeah, Nuki's loss was quite a shock, we'll have to see how it affects things ahead.

ALSO. IM REDOING CLARE'S CAMEO (idk when, but it'll happen). My copics and the contrast of the comic made her look horrible and the copic i used for her skin didn't even show up...

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faeriety In reply to CrossOutBryce [2014-06-05 15:04:32 +0000 UTC]

nooooo you changed it!! >w< I am no longer special

Awww poor thing ;w;

Oh really? :0 She looks fine to me haha but if you insist I won't stop you~

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