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CrumbledWings — I Wish It Wasn't Real
Published: 2013-06-24 21:21:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2934; Favourites: 142; Downloads: 18
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The cover image was done by ~FS600 . Alright two pieces in two days, i had three ideas and i decided to do two of them. I was gonna wait to submit this one but [link] did worse than expected so here it is (i got the idea from kendrick lamar's song "Real"). Also i'm sorry if people are suddenly surprised by the insertion of love into the poem but i had been implying towards it and what better to make someone give up reality that love. Hope everyone enjoys
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After much explanation, I understand. Great job!! 8)
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Don't take this comment the wrong, I am high-functioning autistic and have a hard time grasping what others take for granted. That said, I apologize for my ignorance but I have NO idea what this poem is talking about. Emotions? Love? Suicide? I do NOT understand the concept of love coming back. Love is an emotion, something relative NOT subjective thus it CANNOT leave nor return because it is a figment of our imaginations, a chemical change between receptors in the brain. I do NOT understand. Hmm....just forget I said anything, it is like the word cute just another thing to figure out. I apologize for any confusion this may cause. I am confused myself.
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... love is more used as a pronoun. Like "Bonjour, my love". And since i wrote it i would think it reasonably impossible that i could be confused by it
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I meant confused by my comment. XD I still don't understand how "love" can be used in such a way. It does NOT make sense. Love is not a noun nor a pronoun, it is an adjective, how can it be used any other way? I'm still confused. XD
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Love is a noun (abstract)
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It is considered by most a thing, a feeling, like when you touch something hot, for example you body reacts to the sensation of the heat.
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WOW!!! The word "love" is used in more ways than I had ever considered possible. I understand even more now. Thanks!! 8)
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cool i hav eno clue whot hsi kendrick lamar lady or man is. but cool, i like this poem alot.
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