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cry-emo666 [2015-12-19 14:24:15 +0000 UTC]
i still cant believe i wrote this 10 years ago, i was 14 years old. i never got back into writing poetry even tho i really wish i could. i got chills re-reading this poem looking back and seeing how sad ofย a teenager i was. when i read it, its like im reading someone elses poem, its hard to believe these words came from me. thanks everyone for enjoying my poem. it means a lot to me.
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nilescclover [2015-09-07 13:20:59 +0000 UTC]
real romance......love it!
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Scr1b3 [2013-04-29 04:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Featured here! [link]
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Siren-Badru [2012-10-18 17:43:37 +0000 UTC]
Romeo and Juliet.
There's a lot of people I'd take a bullet for
But only two I'd follow in death..
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dammnit [2012-10-08 21:24:09 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. Lots of love from afar. Chris
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HannahPromiseLove [2012-07-30 10:09:33 +0000 UTC]
I love this. Its so powerfull, and inspiring
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VickiePaige [2011-10-11 10:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Amazingg.......
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Owlll [2011-02-28 06:56:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow..
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PZI7598 [2011-01-23 16:49:36 +0000 UTC]
Nice...
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Bel-serpente [2010-08-13 14:36:04 +0000 UTC]
if haden't read the last bit I would have been depressed al day...^^ but now I is happy^^
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sakura1215 [2010-05-26 17:53:01 +0000 UTC]
i loved it simply amazing
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If-We-JusT-SmiLe [2009-09-11 23:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Made me cry :] good job
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omggian [2009-08-05 04:30:52 +0000 UTC]
I effing love this.
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LittleTenshi [2009-07-25 12:33:19 +0000 UTC]
One of the most beautifull poems I have ever read in my whole life. It's really deep.
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azaleeya [2009-05-13 21:56:31 +0000 UTC]
wow i love this it made me cry and i know how it feels to crush the one you love, i did that and now i regret it and no matter what i do ill never have him back
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xblackxheartx101 [2008-11-25 02:50:13 +0000 UTC]
this is so good and reaches down to me in some levels
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LostHeart-EmtpySoul [2008-11-13 02:41:35 +0000 UTC]
Really good. It made me cry like a baby but that's good.
I'm afraid no one will ever love me ever since I'm always the one with a broken heart.
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Darkness1-2 [2008-10-13 00:19:53 +0000 UTC]
One of the most amazing love poems I've ever read
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DessaBoo [2008-04-18 14:30:02 +0000 UTC]
wow that was really good but it brought back some memories i couldnt return anwayz i wanted to say really nice poem ur on ur way great job
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NurseOfDeath [2008-01-09 22:28:48 +0000 UTC]
lolz i never get tired of reading this ^^
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NurseOfDeath [2007-12-22 08:16:47 +0000 UTC]
omg that so beautiful hey can you make one for me & my friend please. i really would really like it it would mean alot to me ^^
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Kissing-the-Lipless6 [2006-04-18 00:48:28 +0000 UTC]
Aww, that is so sweet.. Poems with a beautiful ending give me hope in my relationship, helps me see that not all romances have a painful ending. I really like it.. It's just so... gorgeous. You have talent, don't ever waste it.
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infamousyumyum [2006-02-06 02:53:43 +0000 UTC]
Even in the pits of hell and death???
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infamousyumyum [2006-02-06 02:52:27 +0000 UTC]
Such an emotional and meaningful poem. But do you really believe love conquers all??? Greatness.
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cry-emo666 In reply to infamousyumyum [2006-02-06 03:52:26 +0000 UTC]
yes... i do beleive that love conquers all... even in hell... without love, this world would be hell... there would be no heaven... just hell... we just have to prove to people that love does exist even in the sinners... as soon as people reach the depths of hell then they will realize what love really meant and how they could have improved there life, but they chose not to.. they beleived that no one will love them, so they turn bad.. to prove to people that they can be feared and not loved..
i fear love.. its my phobia.. im afraid of broken hearts... it looks to me that im about ready to get myself into a heartbreak with the way that my boyfriend is treating me.. im scared to death at this point.. im trying to prove to him how much i love him so that he wotn leave me... i feel like its a one-sided relationship.. without him i would be insane.. im only 15 years old and this is the first time i have been in-love, but im not ready for the aftermath of a broken heart..
"is this love? or is this another figment of my imagination, torn between reality and fantesy?" _ Celeste (me)
w/b
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infamousyumyum In reply to cry-emo666 [2006-03-01 19:02:15 +0000 UTC]
In a relationship both partners have to contribute to it. It seems like your boyfriend is not. Love doesn't have to be a phobia. Sure the aftermath is always unclear and possibly bad but if you truly believe in your love then the aftermath does or should not exist. However in your situation, as you say it is a one-sided relationship, it can be difficult. But do you really love this guy? Do you plan on being with him forever? I think the most important thing in a relationship (especailly in a serious one) is to love and be loved. You are still quite young, and you have a whole lifetime ahead of you. Greatness.
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seataurus902 [2006-02-06 02:52:01 +0000 UTC]
Wow...
I really like this..
I mean it o_o; This is really good ^-^ It kind of just reaches into you or something...
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