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crystalhavens — WIP of OC II

Published: 2008-02-04 03:11:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I haven't been putting up any art lately... So here's something that I'm working on... And I *hope* I'll be able to finish it before my willpower runs out. X_x So... I'd like to have a few critiques, pretty please? XD



Her name's Merapi. Don't steal. She's as important as Fweenoe.

EDIT: here's the newer version of her, avec les details. I'm still debating whether she should have those flaming rings under her feet... it's supposed to help her fly.

But then, those rings are from Chinese legends... and Merapi's a Chinese - Indonesian.

I also fixed the arms a bit. I failed at drawing a three years old kid T_T (Yes, Merapi's only three... but I guess I can boost her age up a bit to five or something...)
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Comments: 13

Elaine10 [2008-02-04 04:23:38 +0000 UTC]

critiques huh..XD
upper arm abit too fat..hm..her head is kinda tipping too much forward..
its quite a cute start neh!^^nice pose too

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crystalhavens In reply to Elaine10 [2008-02-05 01:58:26 +0000 UTC]

GOT THAT! *salutes* THANK YOU

I might have a problem fixing the head though DX

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Elaine10 In reply to crystalhavens [2008-02-05 02:55:18 +0000 UTC]

if you gonna color it digitally..u can easily crop and move it..aha

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crystalhavens In reply to Elaine10 [2008-02-05 02:58:35 +0000 UTC]

LOL. I just answered your comment... O_o up there.

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crystalhavens In reply to crystalhavens [2008-02-05 03:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Nice icon btw

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Elaine10 In reply to crystalhavens [2008-02-05 04:16:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks
and ok..pencil crayons eh
good luck.XD

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crystalhavens In reply to Elaine10 [2008-02-05 09:59:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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hickskicks In reply to crystalhavens [2008-02-05 02:16:41 +0000 UTC]

yeah, you can leave the head.
i wouldn't even have noticed if elaine hadn't mentioned it.

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crystalhavens In reply to hickskicks [2008-02-05 02:57:35 +0000 UTC]

XD alright. I was planning to color it in pencil crayons (it IS a pencil sketch after all), but I can fix it in photoshop... I think.

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hickskicks In reply to Elaine10 [2008-02-04 16:03:02 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah.. the arm is quite chubby. and the head.. is just a LITTLE bit forward.

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crystalhavens In reply to hickskicks [2008-02-05 01:58:43 +0000 UTC]

A wee bit?

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hickskicks [2008-02-04 03:30:10 +0000 UTC]

YAY I LOVE WIPs!!
lol. WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THAT PICCY YOU WERE DRAWING LAST YEAR?! Y'KNOW, THE ONE IN ENGLISH, WITH THE HALF EVIL HALF INNOCENT.

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crystalhavens In reply to hickskicks [2008-02-04 03:57:39 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhh THAT ONE.

Well, I'm currently using it as a reference to my other WIP (I was redrawing a character and I need to get the feel of the style back... lol) ... even though it's not done XD

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