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Published: 2012-03-27 02:45:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2427; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Tense page is tense. OWO' Jangiwa has no Idea about his Mother, yet still want's one...Everybody needs a mom! She understood him, feed him, and was basickly 'softer' in emotiones than his Pop.8D

OK...I just realized that in panel 3# one of the words is in white while the rest is black.-_-' le sigh.:L
Oh well! Kipeo thinks Dara is going to adopt Jangiwa...o_o how will that go? Bet raveri won't be happy... Aww, Kipeo and Jangiwa hugged! More like Kipeo hugged Jangiwa, but it's cuter the other way!

Now to the REAL danger: Raveri thinks the other cubs are making his only son do something VERY stupid*coughhedoesntknowhissonisbeingadoptedcough* This is going to take ALOT of explanning since I am sure its confusingxD Jenza slips and grabs Kiro's back for support and he thinks shes hugging him. Raveri like "...?Wha...?O_o'" The next panel has Jenza trying to regain her balance but slips and falls...Into...quicksand?o-o I know...
I is mean.

But I didn't say she dies yet. Photoshop crashed and I had to do ALOT of stuff to fix the file where her paws are.:C KIRO TO THE RESCUE! Raveri means well, I'm sure0-0 Oh, and Vicro and Taumu's mommy vanished or is out of the camera.

Everybody must wait for the next page to see whodieslives!

Art/Kiro/Raveri/Jangiwa/Kipeo/Talira/Mattina/Jenza/Vicro/Comic and Story(c) Me/~Cynderthedragon5768 /Hilary K. Jones
Do not copy, edit, alter, reupload, recolor, use as icon, make bases, RP, upload somewhere else/DA/FB/ or basickly do ANYTHING WITH IT!:I this. took. 3-5. DAYS.(would have took two if I wasn't so lazy)
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Comments: 19

LionLife [2012-07-02 16:40:49 +0000 UTC]

at least u replied

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LionLife [2012-07-02 16:40:17 +0000 UTC]

at least u replied

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to LionLife [2012-07-02 16:43:54 +0000 UTC]

what do you mean? I will ALWAYS reply no matter how popular I get in the future^^ my fans and friends mean alot to me!<3 thanks so much for all the comments:3

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LionLife [2012-07-02 15:14:07 +0000 UTC]

DUDE this is so cool, keep them comics comin! I know you will say no, but i was wondering if one of my fan fiction characters could be in there? She is so cool, She's called Shadow and she only comes out at night, Dark gey fur.

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to LionLife [2012-07-02 16:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, friend^^ sorry, but no.

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lucky-horses [2012-04-29 14:53:21 +0000 UTC]

keep on going! i just love your comic!

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to lucky-horses [2012-04-29 15:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, Lucky! It means alot to meC: I will be working on the next page today, so I might be up!

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Puddathere [2012-04-08 03:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Did you use the colour text thing i taught you?
Hmm I wonder how this adopting thing is gunna work xD

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to Puddathere [2012-04-08 03:32:19 +0000 UTC]

actually, no. this was before you showed mehD:
I have it allllllllll planned out.

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Puddathere In reply to Cynderthedragon5768 [2012-04-09 17:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Ohh! was just curious >>
oh u do, do ya?

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to Puddathere [2012-04-09 21:49:03 +0000 UTC]

>> yush!

indeed>3<

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Petti-Maluco [2012-04-04 19:00:21 +0000 UTC]

This story is sooooo good!

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to Petti-Maluco [2012-04-04 19:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much^^ that means alot to me

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miss-redfur [2012-04-03 17:22:25 +0000 UTC]

I love your drawings, and I just want to read more
...But I think it was a bit confusing in the last panels

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to miss-redfur [2012-04-03 19:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much^^
panel 11 has Jenza trying to get her balance off of Kiro's back, then falls into quick sand. Kiro is running towards the quick-sand and gets tripped by Raveri who tells him it's took late for Jenza.

He scratches Raveris face to get him off of him, and charges into the mud. Weather either of them live is in the next page!

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miss-redfur In reply to Cynderthedragon5768 [2012-04-04 12:09:39 +0000 UTC]

okay, thanks :3
Got to wait for the next page too then

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to miss-redfur [2012-04-05 15:58:48 +0000 UTC]

welcome^^ sorry it was confusing.

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MewNatan [2012-03-31 16:02:13 +0000 UTC]

:0 Please make more of this.. its very epic!!

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Cynderthedragon5768 In reply to MewNatan [2012-03-31 17:33:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much^^! I will

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