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Published: 2012-08-13 00:01:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1591; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Still in the Flash Back part. Raveri thinks he belongs to Mohatu's Pride, because he spent most of his life there(in secret). His dad has another thing to say about that. Raveri is upset because his dad isn't even trying to comfort him, so he voices how he truly feels about his dad.His dad goes off the deep end...literaly, trying to KILL him. o.o No, Raveri doesn't get his scars from his Dad, you will see in the later pages HOW he got them. The last two panels are the ones I am most proud of!^^ Nine is Mohatu's family :3 Part of Raveri was supposed to be blurred...but I forgot to.xD
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btw, is there any story about Ravery and his family, why he is rouge, why he doesn't have a mother?
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I haven't made one yet c: (the reason for her death will be said in the next pages
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oh my...
poor Raveri 
this is intense, I wanna see more! Keep up the good work, I love your comics c:
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Yes, poor Raveri :C
thanks! I'm working on the next page right now!<#3
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if you want i can translate your comic into portuguese.....
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No thank you, I don't want anybody to reupload my comic. Please don't.
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ok 
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I don't. thanks though.
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ok then
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Don't worry!^^ I am sketching the next page, so It should be done tomorrow! c:
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oh great ^^
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