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loNg-LivE-mAngA [2012-07-28 02:11:43 +0000 UTC]
I really like the layout and the position of the characters. Deneve looks a little wobbly though. Awesome job on Thorton's staff/casting magic and Garret Firestarter's intense look. Thumbs up dude!
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Daandric In reply to loNg-LivE-mAngA [2012-07-28 06:35:51 +0000 UTC]
Still thinking what would best fit around Garret
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Daandric In reply to loNg-LivE-mAngA [2012-09-02 02:56:00 +0000 UTC]
Grass, logs, cracked earth...mby even some lesser lifeforms (mice,a hedgehog)
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loNg-LivE-mAngA In reply to Daandric [2012-09-05 03:47:09 +0000 UTC]
Maybe like a tumbleweed or something in between him and Thorton?
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Daandric In reply to loNg-LivE-mAngA [2012-09-05 09:26:09 +0000 UTC]
kinda hard to spot tumbleweed on a mountain.
Tumbleweeds are prone to flat areas...you know how those work...
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loNg-LivE-mAngA In reply to Daandric [2012-09-06 04:47:07 +0000 UTC]
Yes I know, it was just the first thing I thought of XD
Hmmmm...thorn bush? It's kinda like a tumbleweed, except still alive and in the ground. Trying to stick to dead-ish things because that looks like a dead tree behind Deneve. Maybe a crack in the mountain? Rock? XD
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Daandric In reply to loNg-LivE-mAngA [2012-09-06 15:48:11 +0000 UTC]
Most probably...now that I look at it after half a year I know what to add.
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loNg-LivE-mAngA In reply to Daandric [2012-09-07 01:58:39 +0000 UTC]
It's been that long already? I feel terrible that I put off commenting so long...
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loNg-LivE-mAngA In reply to Daandric [2012-09-07 15:46:43 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha, that will probably happen to me!! XDD
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M0nkeyBread [2012-06-17 09:11:06 +0000 UTC]
You have some nice figure work and shading in this, especially on Corrine. I think you have a nice hatching technique. While the composition isn't bad it could be improved. You have a nice diagonal going which is good. Diagonals are generally great to use, but most of everything of interest is on the right. Also the thing that draws a great deal of focus to the left of the mountains in the upper quadrant; I have no idea what that is?
Not really keen on Garret both stylistically and design wise. His shield is not in perspective and looks bent. I think the stuff you do with more shading and less line for the people in the distance is much stronger. I much prefer that stylistically than the kinda standard anime stuff like you have done on Garret.
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Daandric In reply to M0nkeyBread [2012-06-17 10:23:05 +0000 UTC]
Also the thing that draws a great deal of focus to the left of the mountains in the upper quadrant; I have no idea what that is You are probably talking about this guy: [link] .He is sitting on the edge of the cliff with wind blowing on his back.
I tried to make sure that Garret sticks out in the first plan since there were tons of dark tones right around his head. Also I had a great problem with empty, blank space that is just left of his shield and right behind his right arm(elbow). I really didn't know what to put there.
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Daandric In reply to Kera-Ilabaca-Belle [2013-05-27 21:39:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I am trying to keep it between comic and realism.
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SoulsCore [2012-03-25 03:05:52 +0000 UTC]
Amazing Work!!
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Daandric In reply to SoulsCore [2012-03-25 07:47:34 +0000 UTC]
thank you, What did amaze you so much?
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0Jichan [2012-03-23 08:06:48 +0000 UTC]
like those Final Fantasy pictures.... THE ULTIMATE BATTLE!!
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Daandric In reply to Bobiii [2012-03-23 02:23:10 +0000 UTC]
:3
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Moon-Tribe [2012-03-22 16:18:39 +0000 UTC]
This is flat out awesome
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