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Published: 2012-03-22 11:13:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1015; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 9
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There is no "good" and "evil" side in this little story ( Act I "The Raid Victim" ) I'm making, just one idea and the other.Characters top to bottom:
Tenneth ( in the back. the one on the cliff )
Corrine ( with the dagger )
Deneve (behind Corrine with bow )
Thorton ( the mage )
Garret Firestarter ( the one with shield )
For more info - ask questions
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A4, 2B mech pencil, somewhere around 6-9 hours of work...
There is tons of free space around Garret. I may return to this and add more details once i figure out what. Nothing sticking out too much, but nuff to fill the space.
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I really like the layout and the position of the characters. Deneve looks a little wobbly though. Awesome job on Thorton's staff/casting magic and Garret Firestarter's intense look. Thumbs up dude!
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Still thinking what would best fit around Garret
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Grass, logs, cracked earth...mby even some lesser lifeforms (mice,a hedgehog)
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Maybe like a tumbleweed or something in between him and Thorton?
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kinda hard to spot tumbleweed on a mountain.
Tumbleweeds are prone to flat areas...you know how those work...
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Yes I know, it was just the first thing I thought of XD
Hmmmm...thorn bush? It's kinda like a tumbleweed, except still alive and in the ground. Trying to stick to dead-ish things because that looks like a dead tree behind Deneve. Maybe a crack in the mountain? Rock? XD
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Most probably...now that I look at it after half a year I know what to add.
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It's been that long already? I feel terrible that I put off commenting so long...
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ahhaaahaha, the next thng you know...you'll realize you are dead and you are haunting people for the last 15o years 
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Hahahaha, that will probably happen to me!! XDD
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You have some nice figure work and shading in this, especially on Corrine. I think you have a nice hatching technique. While the composition isn't bad it could be improved. You have a nice diagonal going which is good. Diagonals are generally great to use, but most of everything of interest is on the right. Also the thing that draws a great deal of focus to the left of the mountains in the upper quadrant; I have no idea what that is?
Not really keen on Garret both stylistically and design wise. His shield is not in perspective and looks bent. I think the stuff you do with more shading and less line for the people in the distance is much stronger. I much prefer that stylistically than the kinda standard anime stuff like you have done on Garret.
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Also the thing that draws a great deal of focus to the left of the mountains in the upper quadrant; I have no idea what that is You are probably talking about this guy: [link] .He is sitting on the edge of the cliff with wind blowing on his back.
I tried to make sure that Garret sticks out in the first plan since there were tons of dark tones right around his head. Also I had a great problem with empty, blank space that is just left of his shield and right behind his right arm(elbow). I really didn't know what to put there.
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Thank you. I am trying to keep it between comic and realism.
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thank you, What did amaze you so much?
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like those Final Fantasy pictures.... THE ULTIMATE BATTLE!!
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