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DaeDragon — Chinese New Year BJD 2
Published: 2010-01-25 14:17:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1064; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 72
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The second photo of my friends doll i borrowed. I thought it would be more interesting to have in 2 parts and make it look a bit more artistic. I plan on editing for the final picture. The cloth is just a tie die head scarf.Related content
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Critique as requested (hopefully you uploaded this into the right area!)
I do like this picture... but as I mentioned on your other photograph, you really have a thing going with your parts photography. I'd seriously love it if you branched out. Not to be rude, but everyone knows the same old things get dull after awhile.
I'm not sure where my focus is suppose to be here. The pretty cloth? her feet? her legs? all of it? Nothing is 'sharp' and nothing is 'out of focus'
Your combine picture of these two looks like (sorry) crap. They don't flow well together, and the photoshop does nothing for it.
Please, put the photo editing software away. Your photos look way better without. The dry cracks, blood splatters, it's just... taking away from your photos so much. It makes them look over processed and rather Ick.
Keep in mind for your photos that you need a focus. The womans breasts in the other, and something here. Perhaps her knees! Something to just draw your eye to the photo. this is far to easy to overlook.
I hope I could provide some useful advice here. I'm very sorry if I came across as harsh.
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Do you really think it is as bad as crap? How would i focus it?
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lol it's not as bad as crap! You could just do much better.
I'm not sure what camera you're using so focus wise I have no idea how to suggest it.
On two cameras I use there's a little light that tells me were the focus is focusing.
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I see mine does not. You did say that in the brackets.
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Anyway, I still don't know the type of camera you're using so with focus I can't help. Other then saying practice!
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