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DampeS8N — Impromptu 9

Published: 2004-10-04 08:23:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 293; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 10
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Description What you made it seem you wanted me to do I did,
   And you condemned me for it.
What it was clear to me you wanted,
   You used my willingness to do for you make you not want me to do it.

You asked me to want to be your friend,
   You took my wanting to be your friend as being pushy,
You asked me to want to be your friend.

You leave out critical information and expect me to be able to work around it.
   You made it seem you wanted me to try to get to know you.
You gave me no heads up that a piece was missing,
   You got upset for me not thinking it would be there.

It was your fucking fault. It was you who caused me to cause you to not want what you wanted.

It was You who brought that on yourself.

It was you who asked me to want to meet up with you, then decided my wanting to was a threat.

NO... I don't fucking understand that.

All i asked for was honesty... and you couldn't give me that.

You asked me to walk away... do you want something else?
You left the room... Is that my fucking clue to call?

I just don't understand you.

You don't make fucking sense anymore.
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Comments: 11

purple-carrot [2004-10-13 23:17:11 +0000 UTC]

i don't know
this rreally doesn't seem to flow that well
but there still if some kind of flow (if that makes sence)
i'm not really a big experimental poetry person i guess
so i'm not really qualified to comment on this

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DampeS8N In reply to purple-carrot [2004-10-14 02:39:56 +0000 UTC]

hehe.. its cool... its supposed to fell off.. the whole conversation was off to begin with...

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Axsuraziel [2004-10-05 05:44:52 +0000 UTC]

sounds like a piece of my past I keep locked away.

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DampeS8N In reply to Axsuraziel [2004-10-05 05:45:23 +0000 UTC]

wow ax.... don't get all soft on me now

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Axsuraziel In reply to DampeS8N [2004-10-05 05:46:33 +0000 UTC]

nah, jes thinking and remembering. Something I tried to stop doing.

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DampeS8N In reply to Axsuraziel [2004-10-05 05:48:24 +0000 UTC]

you failed

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Axsuraziel In reply to DampeS8N [2004-10-05 05:50:55 +0000 UTC]

I know, thanks.

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DampeS8N In reply to Axsuraziel [2004-10-05 05:52:18 +0000 UTC]

hahaha loser

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Axsuraziel In reply to DampeS8N [2004-10-05 21:37:27 +0000 UTC]

yes you are a loser

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DampeS8N In reply to Axsuraziel [2004-10-05 23:19:46 +0000 UTC]

yup... we sure are

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Axsuraziel In reply to DampeS8N [2004-10-06 00:59:49 +0000 UTC]

yep. truth fuckin' sucks dun it?

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