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Published: 2017-02-27 02:18:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 618; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 0
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lolol quick cel shading of Peridot as a cat :3 I am aiming to completely copy the style but ehh I didn't gave it justice
Funny how it used to take me 3 hours to finish a drawing back then 4 months ago. Now I can do this shizz in 40 minutes lolol
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Hello, I am here from More Exposure vka3.deviantart.com/journal/Mo… and I am here to critique you.
PERIDOT
Background - I am not sure what you were doing here. The bottom looks like a red metal shelf like processes like you are on a spaceship. Then there is white with blue stripes, The white wall with the blue stripes is straight while the red metal shelves are at an angle. The blue stripes should have been at an angle too. I the top left-hand corners you have a gray picture which looks like a cross between a flower and a cloud. I don't know what that is.
Person - I know that this is drawn in a cartoon style and it is a lot better than the cartoons I see out there.
Hat - The hat is weird with a lot of processes that would get in the way in a fight. It looks like there are cat ears on the hat. If they are part of the hat that is okay, however, if they are peridots ears then they should be green.
Eyes - I love the star shaped eyes. So cool.
Mask - The mask is cool, however, it shouldn't have eyebrows unless they are markings.
Mouth - A cat mouth and that is okay.
Body - The body is really well drawn and it is shaded well. In fact, the whole character is shaded well. It looks in proportion too.
Hands - They are well drawn and I like them. The fingers are square but that will improve in time. Good job.
Conclusion - This is a great picture and it was a pleasure critiquing you.
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