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Description This is Susie's new armor and ref sheet i made for Niichts OCBC 2 so it can join when i starts.

Susie's song:[link]
Sweet Susie:
Age:21
Height:5'8"
Prologue
Milennia ago, the Ancients prophesized an uncertain future full of chaos and death. In that prophecy, 3 angels will desend from heaven, born into human form and aid humanity in their fight against the The Ender(of Worlds) and his shadow legion. They left behind monumental ruines thats contained ancient technology well beyond current human standards. Not much is know about the Ancients and their ruines. Only the cravings of 3 female warriors and their tale was unfolded. Images of Buddhas and other priceless artifacts contributed to the puzzle. Who where these Ancients and the warriors they prophesized?
Story
Susie was born into this world as an orphan as her mother died while giving birth to Triplets. Her father left Susie to the care of his brother who was a professional boxer at the time who married a secret agent. At a young age, Susie love to visit the local temple and work with the monks until she told her "parents" that she wanted to live like then. So she lived a monks life and practiced kungfu and hardbody training with them. Although, not a monk, Susie live like them and did what they did. When she was 12, a 14 year old boy, moved into the temple to continue his training, Susie and him where friends from the start. They soon fell in love as they spent nearly very day of their lives together. However, war soon brewed in the East and he went off to fight. He never returned. Susie became sad and loney. She took refugee in the Triple Gems (a buddhist term.) in order to forget about her lost love. She practiced kungfu in an attempt to toughen herself up. However, the more her body became powerful, her heart became weaker, she prayed to The Great and Compassionate Guan Yin and ask her for help. She told Susie to travel the world to find the path to enlightenmnet. Susie, became aware that people around her suffer as much as her and she forgot about her love and vowed to save humanity from suffering. Although very gentle in nature, Susie will not hesitate to fight for what she believes in. Susie treats humanity like her child, she allows mankind to make mistakes yet is there to save us, in a way, Susie is the manifestation of Humanity's will to survive and redem. Although exetremely mystic, Susie has many human attributes as well and possess the same fundamental flaws of human emotion. She has even taken a boyfriend who is 's Claudius. Susie also likes to surf
Through her travels, Susie has gained Ancient power that fused with her old Ancient armor to create the powerful Armor of the Compassionate. Susie is out to find more Ancient power jewels and other artifacts to help her solve the mystery of her destiny.
Susie's Fighting Style:
Susie uses a style that involves complete defence against all attacks. Susie uses her own Chi to create a temporary force field in the area of attack. When susie is in this defensive position, its almost impossible to break it with ordinary means. The only way to break the defense would be a constant energy attack. Complete defense also extends to mental defense. As a Buddhist, Susie trains to protect the mind from distracting thoughts and vile sugguestion rather cause by her or from an outside force via telepathy or genjitsu, illusion. Susie's faith in humanity, her friends, as well as the divine makes her a nearly impenetrable fortress.
Susie, like most martial arts masters can predict an opponent's moves and this is why her defense is so strong so Her most obvious weakness is against a foe who is unpredictable.
When susie attacks, she attacks with a lot of power becuase she also uses Chi in her attacks. The attack range of her punchs, kicks etc. extend beyond her limbs becuase of this and have a spread out attack. The closer you are to her when she attacks the more it hurts you, like a shotgun effect.
Susie isn't all that fast movement wise but her attacks are more than four times faster than a snake's strike. (its possible according to National Geographic's Fight Science, Martial Artist can strike faster than a snake)

Susie, when using her Guan Dao, is very powerful and hard to fight. Altough the Guan Dao is exetremely heavy, Susie can wield it with relative ease due to the effect of the Power Jewels. She can use her Chi to Imbue elements into her Guan Dao for maxium effect.

Susie never kills her opponents, she only makes them surrender.

The Armor:
The armor Susie wears was crafted by the ancients some millenia ago and was discovered by Master Hue Ming and reconstructed. The armor allows the user to control his or her Chakara or Chi and protects him/her from most physical and energy attacks. The armor's power is drawn from the person's will, it can't be removed by conventional means. The shining jewel-like relic is an Ancient Power Jewel was crafted to fit in the helmet. It is used to illuminate any darkness and has the power to grant more physical strength and mental clarity. The armor is materialized by Susie before a fight or wore already as perparation. The armor is a one-size-fits all meaning it matches the body of its summoner. The armor's power increases with spiritual development.

THE NEW ARMOR ADD-ONS! A MUST READ

After Susie's little exploration trip, she came back with the SuSe Jewel or the Jewel of Compassion. The Jewel of compassion, when place in a suit of Ancient Armor, renders armor more powerful. The New armor of the Compassionate balances physical prowess with spiritual prowess thus making it the ideal armor for beginners (not to say that Susie is a beginner xD) A tough energy barrier created and its power depends of course on the person will. The Jewel completely merges what susie already has with the Power of the Ancients, making her weapons and armor a mix of 2 styles (chinese and Ancient) her Halberd with the iconic Chinese Dao at the end is merged with the Ancient Demon Splitter which has a wicked Curved blade and a power jewel within.

Explaination on Power Jewels:
The Technology of the Ancients created mystic power jewels which emit certain energies depending on the type that either increase or decrease a person's power both physically and/or spiritually (as the jewels where once used on criminals to weaken them) However, people with a strong will can be immune to the effects of the jewel depending on whether or not they accept the extra boost of power. Power Jewels are indestructible.(they can't be destoryed, only removed from the game, xD Magic the gathering joke)

An example of a power jewel is the jewel on Susie's helmet. The power Jewels energies can be controlled if the person in question is strong enough to will it so. (thats why susie can use it as a flashlight, so that means it can be a ranged weapon also)

Guan Dao (Halberd)
This weapon once belonged to the famed Guan Yu. It weighs more than 100 pounds. Now merged with an Ancient Demon Splitter. It is now more powerful and can be imbued with Susie's Chi for a more explosive effect.

Da Bei Zhou
Susie also carries with her The Great Compassion Mantra or Da Bei Zhou in Chinese, a Buddhist chant/spell that grants protection from the 81 Buddhas whose names make up the spell/chant. Susie actaully only uses this in desparate situations. Otherwise her Shaolin Kung Fu and Chi Gong is enough to sufice.
People and gods who recite and hold the Great Compassion Mantra will obtain fifteen kinds of good birth and will not suffer fifteen kinds of bad death. These only come into effect if held or recited

The bad deaths are:

1)They will not die of starvation or privation.
2)They will not die from having been yoked, imprisoned, caned or otherwise beaten.
3)They will not die at the hands of hostile enemies.
4)They will not be killed in military battle.
5)They will not be killed by tigers, wolves, or other evil
beasts.
6)They will not die from the venom of poisonous snakes, black serpents, or scorpions.
7)They will not drown or be burned to death.
8)They will not be poisoned to death.
9)They will not die as a result of sorcery.
10)They will not die of madness or insanity.
11)They will not be killed by landslides or falling trees.
12)They will not die of nightmares sent by evil people.
13)They will not be killed by deviant spirits or evil ghosts.
14)They will not die of evil illnesses which bind the body.
15)They will not commit suicide.
This is probably how Susie would chant it but the lady in this isn't acutally saying it but just using the melody.[link]
The Wiki! [link]
Hear the The Great Compassion Mantra (Da Bei Zhou):
(tibetian)[link]
(chinese( [link]
How Susie chants:[link]
Also the Heart Surta
(sanskirt)[link] 2D8epuXla8
Here are some vids on:
Chi Gong:[link] some of the things they do is soo kickass.
another one where a monk fights a ta kwan do artist:[link]

Here's one on Iron Balls technique. I don't know if women have to learn this...[link]
Da Bei Zhou:[link]
Halberd fighting:[link]

ONCE AGAIN: SUSIE DOES NOT NEED HER HALBERD IN ORDER TO BEAT YOU!!!! just thought i get that out xD

Important comics for reference:
example for Susie summoning armor:[link] [link]
Susie's energy defence techs:[link] [link] [link] [link]
Susie's energy manipuation [link] :[link] [link] [link] [link] [link]
Susie summoning Buddhas and etc:[link] [link] [link] [link]
Using the Great Compassion Mantra:[link] [link]
Susie's pimped out ride(dragon):[link] [link] [link] [link]

For more on Susie's Story [link]
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Comments: 89

Lasper [2008-05-15 02:45:59 +0000 UTC]

This armour is awsome. Looks something a goddess would ware like Valkyrie lennth from the PSP version of valkyrie profile. Nice look of blue and gold to it.

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danielcherng In reply to Lasper [2008-05-15 03:46:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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HisnameisDaveyoufool [2008-01-03 05:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Great character. Is it just me, or does that sword look like soul edge just a little?

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danielcherng In reply to HisnameisDaveyoufool [2008-01-03 07:46:01 +0000 UTC]

i dunno. maybe...

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Raichana [2007-12-13 15:27:03 +0000 UTC]

very nice, love the overall look ^^

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tiny5th [2007-11-21 22:42:19 +0000 UTC]

shes a very interesting character, and once again, i love her armour

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terminally-odd [2007-10-31 03:11:22 +0000 UTC]

great detail and color

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danielcherng In reply to terminally-odd [2007-10-31 04:14:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ZackDaFallenSeraph [2007-10-26 12:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Long description, but a very well developed and thoughtout OC. She'll be fun to fight for sure .

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danielcherng In reply to ZackDaFallenSeraph [2007-10-26 14:07:44 +0000 UTC]

she was is RitS xD and the description was just as long XD

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ZackDaFallenSeraph In reply to danielcherng [2007-10-26 22:00:03 +0000 UTC]

I know, I just didn't read it before XP.

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fadingz [2007-10-24 02:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice design^^

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danielcherng In reply to fadingz [2007-10-24 03:17:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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fadingz In reply to danielcherng [2007-10-24 04:00:25 +0000 UTC]

^^b

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danielcherng In reply to fadingz [2007-10-24 04:44:04 +0000 UTC]

i watched you xD you're really good

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fadingz In reply to danielcherng [2007-10-24 05:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! >,<

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Vile-J [2007-10-23 19:23:53 +0000 UTC]

I read all of this a few days ago and the picture is very nice in terms of being the result of ideas you had and how well you colored it.

Sorry for not commenting.

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danielcherng In reply to Vile-J [2007-10-23 22:42:17 +0000 UTC]

huh? its ok xD

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RomanticFae [2007-10-07 00:34:46 +0000 UTC]

pretty glowy effects

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Wanderer2021 [2007-10-04 06:16:33 +0000 UTC]

You have earned a bit of respect from me in this design. it is very detailed, and has the beginings of texture and surface represenation. You could reduce the reflectivism on some of the spots, and I recommend adding a lighter color to make it look like its glowing. I'm also impressed in the amount of background information your providing to breath life into your character. Now if you can keep this level of detail and background up, I can almost guarantee you'll last an extensively long time in the contest

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danielcherng In reply to Wanderer2021 [2007-10-04 14:14:55 +0000 UTC]

By background, do you mean character background or environment background.

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Wanderer2021 In reply to danielcherng [2007-10-05 03:18:44 +0000 UTC]

character

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danielcherng In reply to Wanderer2021 [2007-10-05 05:05:09 +0000 UTC]

are you gonna join oCBC2?

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Wanderer2021 In reply to danielcherng [2007-10-05 06:42:12 +0000 UTC]

I will more or less.its a matter of will my scanner survive one last scan and if my last two classes will totally and utterly screw me for time

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danielcherng In reply to Wanderer2021 [2007-10-05 14:08:00 +0000 UTC]

ah

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danielcherng In reply to Wanderer2021 [2007-10-05 04:18:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yeah. sometimes i forget to the info on my own ref sheet. In OCBC i'll keep that under check

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raistlinofBUB [2007-09-18 15:53:16 +0000 UTC]

You seem to be making suisy wear less and less armor. Yah pervert.

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danielcherng In reply to raistlinofBUB [2007-09-18 20:25:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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shhilja [2007-09-18 14:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Great drawing and shading!
And the design is great!

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saburu91 [2007-09-14 07:14:00 +0000 UTC]

SHWEET!

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danielcherng In reply to saburu91 [2007-09-14 13:49:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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TotakekeFan [2007-08-25 16:29:16 +0000 UTC]

She looks so pretty ^^

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danielcherng In reply to TotakekeFan [2007-08-26 13:29:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Bikerverde [2007-08-16 17:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Damn, I gusse you put alot of effort/though into this. lol

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vree [2007-08-15 19:15:15 +0000 UTC]

"Susie isn't all that fast but her attacks are more than four times faster than a snake's strike." LOL. Not all that fast at all, then.

Am I the only one who's bored to hell by all them walking demigods with a thousand powers and no visible weaknesses? >_>;

I preferred her old armor, but that's just me.

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danielcherng In reply to vree [2007-08-15 22:53:24 +0000 UTC]

I mean her speed as in how fast she moves around. Her attacks are fast (kungfu artist attack that fast for realz) but her moving around speed is slow

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Aleksandros [2007-08-06 13:11:27 +0000 UTC]

. . . Are those Swastikas? 0_o

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danielcherng In reply to Aleksandros [2007-08-06 18:01:32 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Buddhist Swastikas.

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Aleksandros In reply to danielcherng [2007-08-07 08:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Never heard of them.

I only know Hindu Swastikas... but those have dots on them. xD

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danielcherng In reply to Aleksandros [2007-08-07 08:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Buddhist adopted the swastikas from the hindus
it represent's the continual teaching of the Dharma for infinity.

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Aleksandros In reply to danielcherng [2007-08-07 08:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Out of curiosity, if that were so, was there any reason the dots on the Hindu symbol weren't incorperated into the Buddhist one?

-is a sucker for history related thing and is genuinely curios- xD

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danielcherng In reply to Aleksandros [2007-08-07 08:51:26 +0000 UTC]

there are many versions so im pretty sure that it was. It just that the one on my buddha statue didn't have dots

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Aleksandros In reply to danielcherng [2007-08-07 10:31:12 +0000 UTC]

I suggest you leave a note in the artists comment so people don't misinterpret. xD

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danielcherng In reply to Aleksandros [2007-08-07 17:00:32 +0000 UTC]

ok, but many artist know this stuff

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Aleksandros In reply to danielcherng [2007-08-08 00:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Regardless, more people don't. It's always better to be safe than sorry.

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danielcherng In reply to Aleksandros [2007-08-08 07:45:48 +0000 UTC]

you know, your icon makes it seem very serious so that face you put near the end seems outa place XD Ok, i'll change it

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MelodicManiac [2007-08-05 17:52:02 +0000 UTC]

The helmet is really sweet. Cool design!

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danielcherng In reply to MelodicManiac [2007-08-05 17:52:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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seanpt [2007-08-01 04:23:42 +0000 UTC]

oh i see she is your OC now, awsome, always good to have one, you can do so much lol

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Murasaki-Mary [2007-08-01 01:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Your character design is good, and you also did a good job on her anatomy!

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