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dante-17 — A POEM
Published: 2004-01-18 20:24:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description too depressed to carry on..
........ too weak in every way..
...too much pride too swallow down...
..too many years of nothing said..

.......too many times bleeding velvet red

..too many times of getting up...to get knock back down..

.................hitting the ground...too many times..

........too many..

.............too few..

.................too little..

........................too late..
...too depressed to carry on.
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Comments: 3

reincarnation [2004-01-19 03:52:12 +0000 UTC]

well written

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dante-17 [2004-01-18 20:49:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you,but im not a poet.

means alot though..

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shizen [2004-01-18 20:28:52 +0000 UTC]

hey, that was really good. you should write poems more often your pretty good at it.

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