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Published: 2004-02-08 11:20:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description ..I stood there watching....
watching the world....passing by
....started to scream...then i wondered why
               bother

.....i Stood there watching...
Life. People: happy,laughing,crying,dancing,giggling....
     and i sighed


...i took a step Off...
I didn't like the things i saw


                                   It felt good falling down...........
                                   .... was the sweetest sound......
                                   
                                       me........hitting the ground....        
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Comments: 3

shizen [2004-02-08 15:59:01 +0000 UTC]

bah that was great and sad aswell, you really do have a telent for writing. excellent

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tornskirt [2004-02-08 15:09:17 +0000 UTC]

It is sad. But I like the way you wrote it.
Flows well.
meow

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reincarnation [2004-02-08 11:34:43 +0000 UTC]

thats a sad one..

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