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GourmetNinja [2013-09-29 18:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Overall

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Impact

This character definitely has her looks going for her, as does all your characters. I’m rather taken with the blue hair and the two braids she has, as braids are a fetish of mine. Also, while this is technically moe, it doesn’t look nearly as moe-ish as so many other moe stuff I’ve seen. Once again I should point out that the moe I’ve had to sit through usually involves the sort of stuff that would result in the death of a person by blood sugar poisoning. Your work seems a bit more on the realistic/bishojo side.

I also like how you go out of your way to actually get the curves and angles of the character down. Tomoe’s body and arms in particular stand out, making her nice and supple, and I like a character who is done well to the point of semi-realism. Nicely done.

However, I must detract a few points because this still has some definite moe elements, such as the face which is sort of babyish, and the general art style which makes Tomoe out to be sort of like a fusion between a little girl and a young woman. I just don’t really go for the little girl look. That, and above all else, it would be nice if the description told us a bit about who she is and what she does (I mentioned this in my last critique). Just having a blank pic doesn't leave much of an impact on me.

But overall, your artwork is astounding and I support it. I can’t say I’d add this one to my list (or favorites) but it definitely has my seal of approval, and I say: keep up the good work. You rock, dude.

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Marlitza [2013-09-26 14:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Whoaa so pretty!! *A* and sexy too XD the poseee

I love thiss!!!

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Ir0nyyy [2013-09-25 22:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow very pretty. 

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DeadCobra [2013-09-25 21:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Shes pretty

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PeterRollar [2013-09-25 21:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Definitely worth a

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CJ-DB [2013-09-25 21:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Great job, very pretty and cute

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loppd16 [2013-09-25 19:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Good job

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zanedajoko [2013-09-25 18:50:25 +0000 UTC]

oh your art is  just amazing, someone should really ask you to be artist in either a anime , or manga or visual novel. its just so brilliant looking

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