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Published: 2003-07-14 01:57:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 559; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 151
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In my dreamsIt\'s not wrong
In my dreams
I can love who I want
In my dreams
I\'m not considered a freak
In my dreams
I am me
In my dreams
I\'m not a topic
In my dreams
I\'m not a debate
In my dreams
My dreams come true
It\'s dreams
Everything is right
If only dreams did come true
This and that
That and this
Wouldn\'t the world
Be in so much bliss
If we
Would just accept this.
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Comments: 16
correct correct if dreams were only possible to become real then it would be easier tio live life with and all this strife will disappear. i have many dreams too....
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It very tuching, I likes it lots, hopes to see/hear/read more from ya ^_^
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OMG, I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCH. its 2 lovely, im going 2 hav happy thots 2day cuz of that lovely poem. ^ ^
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my fave part is the 'in my dreams i'm not a debate' line... if only there wasn't so much arguing huh
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the poem is very sweet. and is so expressive, im so glad you love yourself enough to write that.
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very well done! i love all the pictures very sweet, and nicely organized.
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"if i could tell the world just one thing it would be were all ok, and not to worry cuz worry is wasteful and useful in times like these, i wont be made useless, wont be idle with despair"
"my hands are small i know but they're not yours they are my own"
~jewel
i find that i cant find the right words to say so i rely on songs, i love music more than i can say, and i love your poem. ^_^ it speaks for most of us, and if not, it speaks for me. we love things we can relate to and we reject the unfamiliar. (sometimes)
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i must say i will have to agree with ~gaston not to be harsh or burst your dreams... I feel there is an audience for this type of poetry, though i may not be it, clearly commenters 1-3 are that audience. I feel that some of the lines are a bit cliched and unispired though... I applaud your effort and encourage further writing from you.
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this poem is unadorned by symbolism, stylistic merits, or commendable linguistic feats; it is rather bare and too simple, which works wonderfully for the tone of this piece. since the form is simple and the language, equally so, readers immediately tune-in to the truth of its message - that ever-common thought/feeling/aspiration we in the glbt community share. this, i know, is profoundly personal, and i thank you for sharing it.
peace.
+g
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omg....
now if only I could get my brother to see me like that....
Awesome.
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