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Description "Pain... do you feel it?" "Yes... I don't know what it is though...Zetsu." "On it." '''Can we kill it?''' "Depends on what 'it' is... find out what and bring it back here." Pain said to Zetsu as he sunk into the ground. "What was that all about?" Kisame asked. The entire Akatsuki organization were gathered in a field near their hide out. "There is something approaching." Pain answered the fish-man. Zetsu rose from the ground at that point. "It's a little girl... it looks like she's pretty beat up." Zetsu said. '''Normally I'd say let's just kill her and move on but... she seems odd.''' the Black half said. At that moment a tired looking girl passed out on the edge of the field. They all got a good look at her. She looked like she had gone through a burning building, her long-ish white hair was tinted with soot and her raggedy clothes were slightly singed. "What are we supposed to do?" Itachi asked. "I can sense this oddity Zetsu... do you know what it is?" Pain asked, crouching next to the girl, she was around 8-10. "No... perhaps a bloodline..." '''She is out cold so let's continue this meeting.''' Black Zetsu said. "Whatever." they continued the meeting and tried to ignore the girl.

"So... we will hide out in Konoha... they don't know who we are yet so all we need to do is not draw attention to ourselves." Pain finished. "Alright." suddenly they noticed movement and they all looked to see the white haired little girl looking at them with solid Yellow eyes. She cocked her head a bit when Itachi, who was closest, walked up and knelt down. "What is your name?" "I don't remember." "Where is your family?" "I never had one." "So you are an Orphan?" "Mhmm... I was wondering around and I guess I got tired" "Why are you covered in Soot and singed?" "Oh um... Well... I don't really remember... I think I got mad at something and a fire started somehow...it happened where I was staring." she said, flailing her arms a bit as she said it which caused Itachi to smile for a split second. "So... you are an Orphan, you have been wondering around on your own and you just escaped a fire recently..." Itachi said and the girl nodded happily.

"I think her bloodline is like my Amaterasu... except with normal fire and without the side effects... using it must have drained her Chakra and that's why she was tired." Itachi told Pain, who had walked over. "I see... we may be able to use this." Pain said, smiling at the girl now looking at the other members. They went back to the hideout and Konan had cleaned her up and they found a small Akatsuki cloak Tobi had moronically shrunk in the washer that fit perfectly. Over the next few days they tried coaxing the Bloodline out of her to no avail. "Looks like we will have to keep her." Pain said with a sigh and Tobi jumped in the air with a happy face behind his pumpkin-mask(it looks like a pumpkin don't judge!). "What should we call her?" Kisame asked. "Well we do not know her name." '''What about Orphan...''' Black and white Zetsu asked. "I guess that works." the girl in question walked in at that time with a happy expression on her face.

She walked up to Pain and put her arms up and grasped at air, He looked at Konan with a confused expression. "She wants you to pick her up." she said with humor evident in her voice. Pain rolled his eyes and did so. "Daddy!" she said and hugged him. "What?..." Pain just sort of stared at the girl, then smiled a tiny bit as he let Orphan go to Konan and the other members and did the same. "Mommy!" she said and Hugged Deidara, who had picked her up. "What?!" this caused Kisame to laugh hysterically. "Grandma!" she said with Konan, who eye twitched but went with it. "Uncle Hidan!" she said. "Heh... uncle eh?". "Grandpa??" she said and pulled Kakuzu's mask down. "Nii-Chan!" she said to Itachi. Itachi just blinked, half smiled and put her back down. "Otouto!" she said to Tobi. "Alright! Tobi is a good boy!". Orphan was hiding behind Itachi when Zetsu stepped forward. "I think we scare her... what's the matter Orphan?" '''Ya... there's nothing scary about him... me on the other hand...''' White and Black Zetsu said, gaining a glare from Konan. "Pet Kisame!" she said for Kisame, who began to pout. "Awe come on can't I be an uncle or something?" this warranted a 'Tch' from Itachi. "Well... Orphan looks like you will be staying with us in Konoha for a while." Pain said after the 'introductions'. "Yay!" she said and hugged him. "well... let's get going.... we won't really be in Konoha, we have a hideout very close by though and that's where we will be staying." Pain said as they prepared for the journey.

Over the week long Journey everyone grew on Orphan, except Zetsu who had barely been able to even get close to her because he was too scary. "Daddy is that Konoha?" she asked. "Yes Orphan it is... the hideout is a bit off the road... follow me." He said and led the group into the forest and found a building well hidden about half a mile away from the road. "Daddy our house is big!" Orphan said happily. "it is... come now Orphan let us get settled."

after another week of staying at the hideout and going through Konoha, except Itachi unless he was under Henge or Genjutsu, with Orphan and other such things they decided on something. "Alright... we will have Itachi under an advanced Henge take her to register her in the Academy and we will set up shifts to take her and to bring her back after that." Pain said. They all agreed and Itachi, looking like some man nobody knew, was talking to Iruka a few days before the Academy started. "Alright... well All we need is her name and we're good to go." the Chunin said. "We do not know her official name, she can't remember it... so we just call her Orphan." "Um... Alright I guess that works what is the last name?" Itachi thought for a moment. "Dawn."(BTW Akatsuki means Dawn) "alright...any Bloodline limits?" "Yes... it is an unknown Bloodline though... it is the likeness of the old Uchiha Amaterasu, but toned down and with actual fire... we don't know how to activate it though." "I see... we will be wary of it then and try to control it... you meet your classmates in two days Orphan, be prepared." he said and let the two leave.

Two days later Itachi dropped her off and she found her classroom. She was a bit nervous and sat down next to a pale eyed girl Nii-chan said were Hyuuga. "Hello. My name is Hanabi... what is yours?" the girl now known as Hanabi asked. "My name is Orphan... nice to meet you." Orphan replied with a smile. "Orphan?... that is a funny name... so did your daddy drop you off?" "M Mm my big brother did." "Cool... I don't have a big brother but I have a big sister." "Cool." "By the way that is a very pretty cloak." "Thank you, my family wears them." At that moment Iruka walked in. "Hello... my name is Umino Iruka and I will be your Instructor." he said. It was apparent that Orphan knew a lot about Ninja stuff, she was on Par with Hanabi, who was top of the class. "Orphan-chan how do you know so much?" "Well my Daddy and Grandma teach me stuff as well as my other family members." "my family teaches me things too. Do you have a Bloodline limit like me?" "Yes but I don't really know how to use it... I'm not worried about it though... hey it's lunch time let's go eat!" Orphan said and she went out back with Hanabi.

"Hello Hanabi-chan... who's this?" "hello Konohamaru-kun this is Orphan-chan... aw man I forgot my sandwich and rice balls!" Hanabi said, opening the Bento box(lunch box). "how do you forget those?" Konohamaru asked. "Well I overslept this morning and I guess I forgot to put them in..." "You can have some of my Dumplings Hanabi-chan, Otouto always gives me a lot." Orphan said with a smile, giving her a few sticks of impaled dumplings. "I wish I had an awesome Otouto like that... though where such a little boy gets so many dumplings I have no idea." she said taking a bite. "Oh no he's not little... he's tall like Iruka sensei... I call him Otouto(which is little brother) because he always acts like it." Orphan said.Β Β When they came back in the class they saw two older boys and a girl that looked like Hanabi standing with Iruka. "Alright class... these guys are Genin and Chunin and they have been through a lot... they are here to tell you what it's like to be a Ninja."

"my name is Shino Aburame... I am ranked Chunin. You must know to never let your guard down or to under, or over estimate your opponent... ever." the withdrawn boy said. "My name is Hinata Hyuuga... I am ranked Chunin. You must know what you want to become a Ninja for and set goals for yourself." "My name is Naruto Uzumaki! I am ranked Genin... you need to be strong and never give up! You also need to be able to cope with anything the world can throw at you." Naruto said. "Hanabi-chan is she your big sister?" "Yes... she has gotten so much stronger sense the first Chunin exams she almost died in... but we have Naruto-kun to thank for that...and Shino is on Hinata's team... I don't really know him though." "I see... Naruto is pretty awesome though... you can tell by the way he and Hinata look at each other that they like each other and the pure confidence and just optimism that radiates off him make me want to hug him!" Orphan said happily. Naruto and Hinata stayed a bit after class and were talking with Iruka when Hanabi, Konohamaru and Orphan walked up.

"Hey Hanabi-chan." Hinata said. "Yo boss!" Konohamaru said to Naruto. "hey you guys... who's this I've never seen you before." Naruto asked, looking at the silver haired girl in the black cloak with red clouds. "I'm orphan!" Orphan said with a smile. "that's a funny name but whatever...so how are you guys?" "We're good." Hanabi said. "that's good... man I still can't believe I'm the only Genin in our age group..." Naruto said, pouting. "why are you the only one?" Orphan asked. "Oh... well I was away from the village for a few years and only one of us 9 rookies made Chunin the one exam I did and I haven't had the chance to take it again yet... but when I do I'm going to blow through it." Naruto said, giving his ear to ear smile. Hinata saw Orphan's face and giggled, she knew that face. It was a face that meant you wanted to go up and Hug Naruto... she knew this because she had the same face whenever she looked at him.

The next day they were talking about their families. There were people bragging about their awesome ninja dads and some kept quiet because they were orphans. "I have 6 Daddies!" "What?" Iruka asked. "at the same time! Well... I guess I really only have one because Daddy just uses more forms but technically they are all daddy.... I'm going to have to ask him and Pet about it..." she said, tapping her lips with a thoughtful expression. At a confused glance from Iruka Orphan spoke. "I'm adopted by some really awesome ninja people... though they want to stay unknown so I can't say who they are." Orphan said. "Oh... well... alright then... Let's go over some Chakra theory now until Lunch.

"Pet Kisame can you tell us a bedtime story?" "Yes Pet Kisame-san can you? We have been a good boy and Girl!" Tobi said, Tobi and Orphan shared a room. "alright I have one for you...so there was this little girl... there was a scary monster living under her bed...it was a scary pervy monster that waited until she was 18 and-" "Kisame... What psychological Trauma are you putting them through now?" Itachi asked, leaning on the door frame. "Uh... nothing... well... make sure you check under your bed to make sure the rape monster doesn't rape you when you're 18!" Kisame said, patting her head and running out. "What's rape?" Orphan asked, looking at Tobi. "I don't know but Tobi is cared of monster!" Tobi said. There was rumbling coming from under the bed. (read Akatsuki Orphan 8 from JericaLilith on deviantart.com to see the rest).
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Comments: 14

1000meredith [2014-06-11 23:24:41 +0000 UTC]

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iceaxe22 [2014-03-30 05:04:21 +0000 UTC]

woah! its so good! Β 

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Elina8 [2012-11-20 16:10:11 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Mika-chan1496 [2012-08-17 00:29:20 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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Dark0592 In reply to Mika-chan1496 [2012-08-17 05:21:15 +0000 UTC]

look me up on fanfiction.net and fimfiction.net, i've stopped fanfiction on here... too tedious

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Mika-chan1496 In reply to Dark0592 [2012-08-20 13:40:20 +0000 UTC]

okay and I found at least one story by you.

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Dark0592 In reply to Mika-chan1496 [2012-08-20 17:34:39 +0000 UTC]

on fanfiction.net I've only got the one but fimfiction- if you're into that- I've got like dozens lol.

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MISTofDESTRUCTION [2012-04-06 22:51:20 +0000 UTC]

AWEOME JOB! i love that comic! though 13 hasn't been put up yet

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AkatsukiTomboyKid [2011-12-06 23:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Oooh. This looks good as the fanfics i read. Thumbs up!! (^_^)

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Dark0592 In reply to AkatsukiTomboyKid [2011-12-06 23:38:40 +0000 UTC]

sadly it's on almost indefinite hold...i had a bunch of chapters that i enver got around to uploading, along with many other fanfics, and i lost them all because of a crappy laptop error...I may continue it when im done with my like 5 fanfics im working on now but...idk

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AkatsukiTomboyKid In reply to Dark0592 [2011-12-07 01:33:12 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Thats fine. I've had those days with my laptop. Total buzzkill, lol. But don't rush yourself on the other ones. But I hope there will be a new chapter soon! This is, like, the 3rd fanfic that really impacts my interest. Others... Eh, not so. But i'm weird that way, lol. Thanks for letting me know though!!

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Dark0592 In reply to AkatsukiTomboyKid [2011-12-07 15:43:33 +0000 UTC]

if theres someone that wants a fanfic thats on hold i'll probaby start it up again. i might actually have a chapter r two on my other computer...idk though im in school right now lol

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TheAnimeFanGirl [2011-10-27 18:11:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL, nice work.

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Dark0592 In reply to TheAnimeFanGirl [2011-10-27 19:06:43 +0000 UTC]

ty

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