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SatanIsOk [2016-03-18 18:49:46 +0000 UTC]
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Your anatomy really isn't off. You do a pretty good job at figuring out the pose and the placement of the limbs/torso. It really is just about being confident and varying body types. What I mean by confidence is you see how your lines waver a bit, every so slightly? You're trying really hard to get that line right, but it's so much better to do one fast stroke. Just look at where you gonna put that butt, and say to yourself, "That's where Imma put it." Draw out that line, and if it's not the one you want, undo it and draw it again and again until you got that booty line how you want it. Curved, confident, you know how to place that line! Also, compared to the rest of her body, her legs seem a bit twiggy. I really like her outfit design, it's simple and you can always add more to it in the future. I also really like the idea of her hair, you should definitely look into different kinds of leaves and experiment to see what kind of hair you can create for her.
Practice, practice, practice hands, feet and faces. I can only recently draw hands/feet with confidence, it's hard! All those joints, all the ways to placed, but once you get a hand on it, it's fun.
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SatanIsOk In reply to DarkCartoon122 [2016-03-18 19:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Boobs are very hard, especially when you were a hardcore anime fan most of your life. Had to learn that they aren't always perky and globular.Β
Plus~, you got a reason to look at tits now. Go forth, and conquer (on your private browser settings).
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DarkCartoon122 In reply to SatanIsOk [2016-03-18 18:59:26 +0000 UTC]
I really do appreciate it thanks so much coming from you haha. I reall want to improve my female drawing skill lol
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R-Doll [2016-03-20 14:11:10 +0000 UTC]
Great Huntress Wiz ^^
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R-Doll In reply to DarkCartoon122 [2016-03-20 14:41:40 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome
i was amazed by her role in one of the recent episodes
and though minor appearances in the past, she seems like a cool wiz cat
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DarkCartoon122 In reply to R-Doll [2016-03-20 14:44:33 +0000 UTC]
I wonder if something between her and Finn will happen eventually
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R-Doll In reply to DarkCartoon122 [2016-03-20 14:45:42 +0000 UTC]
don't know bout the shipping angle but i do like the possible idea of her and Finn adventuring together or hanging out
she needs more appearances to say the least XD
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DarkCartoon122 In reply to R-Doll [2016-03-20 14:52:30 +0000 UTC]
Ship it!
I mean that song in "crossovers" kinda explained his future relationships. And Finn has matured in the last few episodes so there might be something in the future
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R-Doll In reply to DarkCartoon122 [2016-03-20 14:57:19 +0000 UTC]
hmmm, interesting.
thought i forgot to watch one episode. i'll checkΒ the crossover episode out later
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DarkCartoon122 In reply to R-Doll [2016-03-20 14:59:36 +0000 UTC]
Its good. Shows farmworld Finn and normal finn
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