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Published: 2007-03-29 15:03:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 11705; Favourites: 107; Downloads: 89
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umm~~ it's up!!!Sasuke is showing his 'WTF?' face in the last panel...
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noooo!!
shes trying to steal guys from Sakura!!
TT___TT she doesnt deserve this!!
hinata too!!
i love you hinata!!
like i said b4... emotionally scarred..
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Yayyy, shoujofication. Erm, this is just a nitpicky thing, but a random fangirl would be unlikely to say "kun" to a famous model. "Chan" would be more appropriate in this situation as that's normally how the media honorific-ifies its stars. "Kun" is kind of the semi-formal thing you'd use with classmates or co-workers.
Oh, yeah, and your plot is interesting. I... ah... honestly don't read these as the Naruto characters at all, even though they look a little like them. Honestly, I'd say you'd do better making the whole thing original, because, except for character design and names, you're just about there. 'Course, names like Sakura and Sasuke are so common you could use those, anyway. But, anyway, if you did that, you'd actually have the ability to make some green off your work, as long as you have a little business savvy.
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(I know this is like...3 years late but)
I didn't know bout the honorific stuff, thanks for telling me! 
haha! thanks for the compliments!! I might try out original stuff after i'm done with all these fanarts. :>
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You are indeed late, but I forgive you. I'd forgotten about this, actually, so I had to look it over again. Still quite good; you definitely have potential.
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aaaaaaaaaand 1 year later again, thank you! >////<
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oh wow! O_O
things are getting great!
yuor art rox!
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Oooh... I hope Sasuke ends up with Hinata! Then two of my favorite pairings will be in this fic! XD
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lol ofcourse he'd be doing the WTF face..in fact i bet that inside, his face is actually more like o_o; times one million. You really draw him cute here. 
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hehehe she's jelous! so cute but Neji's is the important here ^^
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This girl is being a slut? ~.~ That's bothering me!
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Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooovin your drawing style!!!
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That OC you have has some Full Moon eyes.
PRETTY PLEASE! SASUKE CAN NOT END UP WITH ANYBODY EXCEPT SAKURA. PLEASE!!!
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Wow, this is awsome! I can't wait to read more
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Agh! (More more more! xD)
Is that girl some kind of flirt? Its pissing...
Eniweis...good luck in making more! cant wait
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i love it so it is gonna be a triangle.......
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it's toooo short! i support nejisaku all the way! 
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Ha! Love it! WANT TO SEE MORE!!! :foamingmouth:
hehe, sorry...
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never make assumptions Sakura, because they're usually wrong (i should know 
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>.<" When I read this page, SasuXSaku came in my mind! Gosh...I really like this pairing T^T
Hey! What did Koyuki want! She looked happy when she saw Sasuke! No way! I will not give Sasuke to you! No!
(Hee hee I thought too much XD )
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I wish so much this was a SasuSaku, because Sasuke here is sooooooooooooo cute and hot and handsome and nice and blah blah... ><, but it is NejiSaku, rite T____T?
But what about SasuSakuNeji '___' ?
LC
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WHAT???????
Ehem, sorry. But plz, at least don't make Sasukekun be with ANY other girls except Sakurachan! Maybe Sakurachan can end up with Neji but Sasukekun, could you plz make him alone? Please please please T____T?
Maybe I'm soooo annoying to persuade you like this, and also hateful to point my nose into your work but... T_____T, I'm a really crazy SasuSaku fan. Forgive me plz, I juxt can't stand Sasukekun with other girls, also can't stand not reading your comic and seeing your cool and hot Sasukekun in AU life >
In addition, I've updated my dou, really really glad if you come over ^^.
LC
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If it's not Sakurachan, it's nobody T_____T.
I trust you, plz.
LC
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umm...if i tell you now it'll spoil the plot...o.o
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Ok, so I should wait, rite?
LC
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I can't blame him for doing a 'WTF' face at that... Baka.
Please update soon~!
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