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Published: 2006-03-29 12:31:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1543; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 27
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Description If only you could see
The smile upon my face
The happiness in my eyes
The changes you have brought

If only you could hear
The laughter in my voice
The words I long to speak
The music of my soul

If only you could feel
The softness of my touch
The tenderness of my kiss
The beating of my heart

If only you could know
The light I see you in
The ways you've touched my life
The love I have for you

If only I could be
The one that you deserve
The happiness in your life
The love within your heart

If only...
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Comments: 32

MorticiaAdams [2006-05-06 12:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Very touching. I like it very much. It's so beautiful.

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DarkRaven1 In reply to MorticiaAdams [2006-08-14 12:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, and for the as well

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teddybearcholla [2006-04-08 13:12:17 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful poem!!

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DarkRaven1 In reply to teddybearcholla [2006-04-08 16:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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teddybearcholla In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-04-11 10:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!!!

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miserylee [2006-04-04 16:12:14 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwww its pretty pretty pretty.
very cute.
very very cute.
i mean awwww.
sorry hav i gon ova board yet?

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DarkRaven1 In reply to miserylee [2006-04-04 19:42:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, and no, not overboard at all

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miserylee In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-04-04 19:52:42 +0000 UTC]

lol kwl

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blissful-imagination [2006-04-04 02:23:55 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful!!

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DarkRaven1 In reply to blissful-imagination [2006-04-04 19:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, and for the as well!

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blissful-imagination In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-04-05 02:15:17 +0000 UTC]

no problem! ^.^

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Texan-By-Choice [2006-04-02 10:05:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm......speechless...... Absolutely beautiful piece darlin'! Must

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DarkRaven1 In reply to Texan-By-Choice [2006-04-04 19:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my love

So sweet you are...

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Lindy-the-Hippie [2006-03-31 01:21:06 +0000 UTC]

That's awsome!!!! I'ma gonna fav it

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DarkRaven1 In reply to Lindy-the-Hippie [2006-03-31 01:33:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Lindy-the-Hippie In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-03-31 03:50:12 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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ArtByCatherineRadley [2006-03-30 05:25:13 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful hun, I love it

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DarkRaven1 In reply to ArtByCatherineRadley [2006-03-30 06:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankies, I am glad you do Thanks for the too

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ArtByCatherineRadley In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-03-31 09:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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Daiichi [2006-03-30 04:43:57 +0000 UTC]

We've all been there..Well written my friend

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DarkRaven1 In reply to Daiichi [2006-03-30 04:47:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bud, as always!

Thanks also for the

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rachelab74 [2006-03-29 18:50:38 +0000 UTC]

That is soo sweet, you write very beautiful poetry James!!

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DarkRaven1 In reply to rachelab74 [2006-03-30 04:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the lovely comment and the

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rachelab74 In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-03-30 18:35:29 +0000 UTC]

It was too beautiful too not fave it!!

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SandyNL [2006-03-29 14:33:42 +0000 UTC]

* sigh* * melt*

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DarkRaven1 In reply to SandyNL [2006-03-30 04:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it! Thank you for the

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Attila-fox [2006-03-29 14:17:26 +0000 UTC]

I love it. Very well done.

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DarkRaven1 In reply to Attila-fox [2006-03-30 04:45:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, and for the as well

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Attila-fox In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-03-30 17:15:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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khammi [2006-03-29 12:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow James, thats absolutely lovely. Keep writing my friend...you have a special way with words!

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DarkRaven1 In reply to khammi [2006-03-29 12:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Thankies my dear

Thank you muchly for the as well

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khammi In reply to DarkRaven1 [2006-03-29 13:00:42 +0000 UTC]

You be very welcomed

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