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D2KPrime [2016-01-21 01:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Vision - Well, I'm not sure I can tell be just looking at the picture what the vision was for the comp. Seems like a very calm and relaxing setting of top, but again I can't really gather any overtones/undertones on what's happening here. That's just me though. I might be missing something.

Originality - I guess two women sitting at a coffee shop isn't exactly "original," but even though both women are dressed sexy, the red-haired lady is dressed more contemporary where as the devil girl is dressed more sultry. That's a little different so points for that. Still, I think this picture could have benefited from some more dynamic lighting effects. Maybe having the room a little darker, but some rays of sunlight into the room. Maybe having more objects in the room/on the table as well.

Technique - That's where this picture shines. Very clean design. Everything is crisp, and the colors pop out very well. Smooth transitions on the gradients, and excellent light and shadow effects. Where we run into a little trouble is the anatomy. Particularly the feet. The toes don't quite line up right on the devil girl's right foot. Her pinky toe should be back further from her fourth toe. Actually from that angle you should see all five of her toes. One rule to think about when drawing toes is to think about fans. Like hand fans. Toes "fan-out." That helped me learn a lot about drawing feet. The rest of the anatomy is okay, but always keep practicing to refine your anatomy so that things are proportionally right and look more natural. If you don't already belong to one, I suggest taking a life drawing class to get comfortable drawing anatomy. I had two life drawing classes in college and they helped a great deal. You can also try websites like posemaniacs.com.

The perspective is off a little bit on the table and chairs. I'm not sure if it is just the design of the chairs where the legs curve slightly inward. However it sort of creates a two-point perspective effect on the chairs that the girls just don't fit into which kinda throws you off a bit. It's like you have two levels of two-point perspective that don't flow together. Again, I could be wrong. That's just what I see.

Impact - Well, there isn't much happening in this picture so there isn't really much impact to me personally outside of the women being very sexy.

Overall this is a very nice piece. There are a lot of good things going on here. A few areas need to be brushed up but we as artists all have things we can improve on. Keep up the good work!

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Invader-Johnny [2016-05-25 03:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Having a drink with the devil, eh? NICE!

 Invader Johnny Signing Off.

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mpz28 [2016-01-08 13:03:00 +0000 UTC]

very nice    

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GentlemanBobIII [2015-10-24 18:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Very well drawn. Now those are legs a man can admire

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DeadCobra [2015-10-24 11:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Very great  

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Watcher721 [2015-10-24 08:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice, but... not stockings...

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LadyDreamMaker [2015-10-24 04:42:04 +0000 UTC]

The girls look awesome... but the chairs look small and unconfortable...

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alphazion [2015-10-24 02:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely  

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77TN [2015-10-24 01:52:19 +0000 UTC]

very cool 

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FirelordPhoenix [2015-10-24 01:37:38 +0000 UTC]

I wanna join them.

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BridgeportChronicles [2015-10-23 23:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks goes to for making this for us. helped me get into a series of books that I love and I thought I would pay her tribute with my original succubus.

I will go into more detail about how this came to be as I think it is a good story.

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zerai-leopard-28 [2015-10-23 23:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done, awesome piece

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Victor2K [2015-10-23 22:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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TeraSuccubi [2015-10-23 22:48:30 +0000 UTC]

*snugs*

Wonderful!

Just lovely and I'm so, so pleased!


Thankies!

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FantasyRebirth96 [2015-10-23 22:45:05 +0000 UTC]

Very Cool! So Great!

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ForestWolfDragon [2015-10-23 22:42:08 +0000 UTC]

I sadly wouldn't be able to give you any kind or critique,  I'm not at the level of an artist to do so.  What I can do is compliment on how well both ladies are draw and displayed in an elegant manner.  Congratulations on making a fantastic art picture .

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