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Published: 2008-11-27 07:45:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2375; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 47
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I just got my copy of Sonic Unleashed for the PS2 and my nephews will be coming any minute now. XDBefore I go and spend quality time with family I shall share with you my sketch works that are done prior to inking a complete chapter to the TGAF comic series. Enjoy!
For added fun fill in the dialogue for me on your comments - I'd love to hear some of your suggestions on what is going on! It doesn't have to be legitimate so make it as funny as possible - try to be considerate to others who may be reading your dialogue though, that is all I ask for.
Here's one I came up with earlier!
SECOND PAGE - LAST PANEL
Ashworth: "GO AWAY! I'M HAVING A DATE WITH RUBY!!!"
Ruby: "(Gee whiz!! He didn't have to be so blunt about it!!)"
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wow i love it you can tottaly relate to ash...well i know someone who can
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So Sonic Unleashed IS for the PS2...I've been hearing about it, and I wanted to confirm the rumors of it. Now I have. YAY! >D
*Kidnaps Ashworth and Ruby and sells 'em on Ebay* WHEE!
XD Sorry, I'm happy today. :3
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Lawl, love the face you used for Ruby in the 10th frame XD
I like the funny expressions
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When the book is done, can we order it through the site and will it have international shipping? I've got to see how this one ends!
Page Three.
Pannel 2:
Ruby: What have you done?! You never said you had a death wish! How are we going to beat that thing?!?
Pannel 3:
Ashworth: Relax. Besides-
Pannel 4:
Ashworth: Aren't you happy I believe your story about the skeleton thing now?
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Oooohhhh.... nice one.
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hehe fun fun tell ya i liked Sithking-Zero ROFl FLAME ON! *catches on fire and runs around loco*
OMG OMG x.x!
Skull & Kai: o.o;;;
Kai: should we put her out? : o
Skull: ummmmmmmmmmmmmm . . . . . . . yeah sure why not *hoes me down*
*all wet* |D; *cough*
I wish I was able to write what I would come up with but I am lazy and that is all I have to say ROFL ROFL XD
aww man right when I told myself I need not to be a BIG fan of things and go crazy with drawing things I'm fan of. Thanks a lot Elson you got me wanting to draw Ash and Ruby 
by the way when u can take a looky at this <3
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LOL much love mi amigo!
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Thanks! Glad you liked my entry!
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Ha ha! Yeah man I'd love to see Ash go loco like that after catching in his own fire! *SHOT*
Man you're so crazy and fun with your imagination and such!
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gosh that would be funny ROFl
XD XD
yes yes I know my mind is on a WHOLE different level ROFL
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AWSOME! first sign, first sign, first sign!
A: whaddya mean FIRST SIGN!?-points at D- and you!
uh...o_o
R: now now Ash calm down -motions arms-
A: -ignoring her- -still at D- your just lucky your the guy who created me, other wise i'd be kickin your ass! -flails arms-
R: Ash! come on were gonna be late for the next comic panel! -grabs his arm and runs down the road-
A: i hadnt smacked the little girl yeeet! -pouts-
>_> <_< -scoots away- keep him onna leash for a while Elson
A: -eavesdropping- WHAT!?
EEP!
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Happy thanks giving to you too buddy! We don't celebrate it here in Australia but nevertheless hope you and the family have a good one!
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Thank you very much, and same to you as well.
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lol in one of the pannels one of the speech bubles looks like an ruby's big boobs XD
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It's the Boob-Factor 2000!! *SHOT* XXD
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lol thats the factor that everyone loves*brick'd* X'D
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wow, so amazing sketches
loves the first page x3
amazing work Elson n_n
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Very cool looking page so far.
Have fun with your nephews, yeah?
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Yeah I sure had a great time with them and playing the game together.
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Because someone, somewhere HAS to say it...
Second page:
Second panel: Ruby: We... we can't fight this thing... it's too strong... it' be madness to fight it...
Thrid Panel: Ashworth: Madness...?
Final Panel: Ashworth: THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!
Ruby: WHy... Why did I walk right into that!?!? WHYYYYYYY!!!!?????
First Page:
WHAM!!!
R: thanks for catching me! How'd you do that?
A: Idiot, you were freaking THROWN into me, I didn't have much...
(Next panel)
A: Much... uhhh....
R: (blush)
(Next panel)
R: Wow, I love this cave! It's a nice cave, isn't it!
A: Why, yes! I spent years making it look this way!
KABOOOM!!!
Skull Monster: DIE, INTRUDERS!!! GIVE ME BACK MY GLASSES!!!
R: should we tell him? (Sweatdrop)
A: nah. (sweatdrop.)
Third Page, second-to-last and last panels.
A: Okay, monster. You froze me in a block of ice, trapped me in a cave, and tried to hurt me. But threatening girls is where I cross the line!
(next panel) A: FLAME ON!!!
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Ha ha! Nice ref to Human Torch.
I had a good laugh at the 'THIS IS SPARTA' reference too!
Thanks for the rather 'touchy' dialogue on the first page!
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Love how Ash looks in the last panel. Bad Ass.
;D
OMGFIRE!!!
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Larcel STILL terrifies me. Gwah, I hate skeletons. TT_TT
Hahaha, that first page really had me laughing. Awwwkwaaarrrd. XD Although, I really love Ruby's facial expression in the top right corner of the middle page. Reminds me of =O
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Doing that expression can sometimes be a cinch or a great challenge depending on the situation. Glad that you liked how it turned out - it was exactly how I had wanted it.
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Wow... Ash looks HOT in that last pannel!! EEEE!!
Heehee. I'm such a fangirl.
Great work. Can't wat for it to be finished ^^
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Yay! Glad to know that you like Ash and think that he's hot.
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You know it!! XD
I can't wait for it. ^^
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Wow nice sketches. Curious to see the finished version^^
Oh and btw... that smirk from Asworth on the last panel is sooooooo precious, and that cute blushXD
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Cheers for the feedback on Ashworth buddy, glad to know you found him cute blushing like that and his smirk sporting some 'coolness' in him. ^_~
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hey every big boys are so cute when they blushXD This is the only moment they not act the macho >X3
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This is fun! It's better than work!
Ok, so here's my version, hehe!
PAGE 155
Panel 1:
Ruby "GET DOWN!"
Panel 2:
Ruby "Phew! that was close!"
Ash "Yeah..."
Panel 3:
Both "Gulp!..."
Panel 4:
Ash "Sooo... You're alright?"
Ruby "I... I... think so...."
Panel 5: (mini):
both "what?!..."
PAGE 156
Panel 1:
"What's he doing?"
Panel 2:
Ruby "He's destroying the cave...."
Panel 3:
Ruby "But... Why?"
Panel 4:
Ash "HEY! Keep it down! We're trying to find a way escape this place!"
Ruby "Noooo don't call him... he'll kill us for sure...."
PAGE 157
Panel 1: (does Larcel even talk? we'll assume he does!)
Larcel "And what do you think I'm doing? Redecorating the place?"
Panel 2:
Larcel "Get your lazy buts here and help me break this wall!"
Ruby "Ash, I think we should do what he says!"
Panel 3:
Ash "Alright then..."
Panel 4:
Ash "Both of you, get down! I'll handle this..."
END!
I like Ash's last expression. Confident and cocky. He looks a lot like Vegeta from DBZ!
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Cheers for the entertaining read! Doing that dialogue must have taken some time and I thank you for that. = ) Ha ha! He looks a lot like Vegeta on that last expression? You think so?
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about half an hour... the things I do when the boss aint looking...
Panel 1, pag 155 should read Ash, not Ruby (silly mistake)
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Great work as always man! Can't wait to see more TGAF
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Ahh, nice. I really like that last panel with Ash; he looks soooooooo cool. Prepare the Fan Squee Cannon!!!
Cough.
Anyway...
Skelly, how dare you interrupt the romantic hugging and whatnot? You fiend!
Skelly: ...I caught it...on tape...:3
Oh? Well then, I expect a copy.
Keep up the good work, Darkspeeds!
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Cheers Ceil-Hedgehog! I shall do so in the coming chapters ahead.
And wow! Skelly caught them on tape! It's going to be worth quite a lot on EBay... *SHOT*
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First page. Last panel. I always read the word in that circle as '
Yay, more fanservice.
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once again expressions are awesome, even uninked.
unfortunately I have no sense of imagination right now, so no dialogue from me. but reading over the comments, you already have them started
nice job Darkspeeds
(why is it so hard to type your name now 
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Hmmm I like a lot Ash on the last panel!
Aww You've got already a copy of Sonic Unleashed! Have fun with your nephews! 
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Aww... 
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Hehehe, the hugging couple scene never fails!
I gave before my feedback about these previews, but I can say that AshworthΒ΄s expression in the last panel of the 3rd page is a different one so far that saw from him 
Alchemy, right? I know very little about it. Except the part of converting metal into gold, XD
Have fun with your nephews!
IΒ΄m not going to tell you which game my brother asked me for christmas this year T__T.....
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